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Made by Templar in Cool Stuff

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31st October 2013, 01:04 PM

Once upon a time, there was a poor penguin called Jim. One day, Jim's dad died, and his mum was retired, so they were forced to live on the street.

I know what you're thinking, "This is horrible, DISLIKE" do not worry, it gets better!

Anyway, Jim had a free school, so he was still able to learn. That day, he learned about glorious inventors, and great macanics! He decided he'd invent the best thing EVER!

His idea was: He would invent...the Drill3000 , the only drill that could tip the iceberg, but Jim didn't have enough credits, so he persuaded his mum to give him as much as they had. It took 2 days before she was convinced.

Jim took a fortnight to build his Drill3000, but finally made his first one.

After 5 months of making 37 inventions, he took them to the mall. He asked the man who owned if Jim could sell his inventions here, but the man said he charged 50% of the prophet. Jim didn't exactly know how to respond, so he accepted. He sold his inventions for 500 credits each, and no one showed up. He charged 200 credits and got a few sales.


Jim earned 10,000 credits, but remembered that he owed the man 50%. Jim knew that without his marvollous inventions, the man would be broke, so he persuaded the man to only charge 10%, and believe it or not, Jim got it!

That's how Jim became the richest penguin to be known!
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31st October 2013, 01:10 PM

This was a very cute story. Just made my day!
+1 XD
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~May23
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31st October 2013, 01:15 PM

Thanks, May23, glad you liked it!
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31st October 2013, 01:20 PM

Haha, nice wee story! :)
Thanks for posting here.
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And because Pickle1020 said that Bob 'fitted me',

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31st October 2013, 01:23 PM

Thank you, lowon, there are more to come! XD
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31st October 2013, 01:27 PM

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Thank you, lowon, there are more to come! XD
I'm waiting and looking forward to them ;)
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And because Pickle1020 said that Bob 'fitted me',

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31st October 2013, 01:59 PM

This is a great entertaining story! But it should go under entertainment, yet it was a good story that you thought up yourslef. :)
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31st October 2013, 02:04 PM

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This is a great entertaining story! But it should go under entertainment, yet it was a good story that you thought up yourslef. :)

Sorry, penguinDSC, I just thought it was cool, so I put it in cool stuff!
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31st October 2013, 02:21 PM

That is fine, but I do not want to see it again, understand?
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31st October 2013, 02:30 PM

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That is fine, but I do not want to see it again, understand?

ummm... sorry, I wont do it again.
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