14th March 2019
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My Rap

Made by Toby in Cool Stuff

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14th March 2019, 02:38 PM

Check it
I bet ya didn't know,
That I stole your toe,
And shot it through my bow,
Then I found a guy called Joe,
To his house he wanted me to go,
But I said no.
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Mr Steal Your Girl
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14th March 2019, 02:40 PM

Tobob wrote on 14th March 2019, 02:38 PM:
Check it
I bet ya didn't know,
That I stole your toe,
And shot it through my bow,
Then I found a guy called Joe,
To his house he wanted me to go,
But I said no.
Remove the H word?
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Emperor Damen be the best Emperor.

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14th March 2019, 02:49 PM

Sherlock120Sh wrote on 14th March 2019, 02:40 PM:
Tobob wrote on 14th March 2019, 02:38 PM:
Check it
I bet ya didn't know,
That I stole your toe,
And shot it through my bow,
Then I found a guy called Joe,
To his house he wanted me to go,
But I said no.
Remove the H word?

I just removed it, thanks Sriram.
Toby, making raps is cool, but please, don't use foul language. Feel free to replace the word with a synonym that isn't a swear word. Thanks.
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MrLion
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14th March 2019, 02:54 PM

I really like the profound use of "toe" in this piece. Particularly that you didn't shoot the toe with the bow, rather you shot the bow with the toe.
Marvelous, dear friend, bravo.
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