while Brayden sat down on his bed he was sad. His mom came in with pancakes and orange juice and said why sad? Brayden gulped and said i will never get to see my friends he bursted into tears. His mom patted his back and said u will u can see them tommorow. Brayden saw a brownish thing on his bed and said mom whats that? No idea said his mom. It was crawling out and it was A SPIDER! AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA SPIDER HELP HELP! FBI POLICE HELP HELP AAAAA ITS GONNA EAT ME AAAA. His mom did a giggle and said its just a spider then she sprayed got the ant spray and sprayed it on the bed tonight i will change your bed sheet. Out the window there was the GANG and they were laughing HAHAHAHAHA LOOK AT THAT BOY SCARED OF SPIDERS HAHAHAHAHAH RUN TO MOMMY KISS HER HAHAHA

Not bad.
Can't wait for your next Chapter!