9th February 2014
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The Secret.

Made by Scott in Arts

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9th February 2014, 08:11 PM

The
Secret

This story is made in first person point of view note this Character may relate to someone on the forums. Enjoy and remember to read and leave feedback!

~ I was always the runt of the litter I was always small kind of tiny but many did not know I had a deep secret kept inside. I never told anyone yet it stayed with me throughout my entire childhood my story begins on a farm with my family I was only 4 at the time when I found out a secret and that is when being the runt wasn't so bad yet it gave me many things to do things many adults and older kids could not do... My secret is locked within my heart the key is yet unknown yet I can always walk in but no one else may enter. I usually laid in my room most of the time I locked everyone out I never let them in I felt different then everyone else I hoped for a world of my own, a world only I could see that was my dream. Before I get into my secret i'm going to talk about my family. My father was a working man he worked half the day in the fields he had gotten a cold within the winter time he was very sick he said his final good byes and that is when he died on 1-1-1969 it was awful the funeral service was upsetting because my father was the one who understood most of my thoughts... he was my everything... my best friend,my hero,my bff, but most of all my daddy. I was a daddies girl most of the time so I hanged with him allot. My mother was a stay at home mom she worked by cleaning,bathing the young, cleaning the barn, etc she was always opened arms and she was a great dancer but after my fathers death she never was the same. I also had siblings yet I'd like to wait before I talk about them. Now this is where the real story begins and this is where I will hold up the story until tomorrow....

Sneak peek of chapter two~ I was working one day when my brother.... etc.... boom.... bam...

Now, this isn't related to anyone well at least not in this chapter, I did not want to ruin the story I did not want to make things clear because that will all make sense tomorrow. Thanks for reading!

Q- please answer this :D
~Did this story make you think? Can you relate to this character? Did this story sooth you or did it make you want to read more?

~Thanks, Sadie :)
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9th February 2014, 08:13 PM

Not bad!
Good job, Sadie!
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9th February 2014, 08:19 PM

Bravo! This is quite the amazing beginning of a new story being created, and I especially love where it makes it seem like a flashback moment. It DID make me think about this, and it is a heart-warming story that turns on you, but It makes me think mostly because since the father died, and the beginning of Chapter two is Boom... Bam! It SERIOUSLY makes me want to read the next chapter, I love it! :3
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9th February 2014, 08:19 PM

I wanted to read more. I could not relate to any characters in this story.
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9th February 2014, 10:40 PM

Great story! I can relate I'm the youngest in my family, and I'm always called the weak one
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