Everythings not lost
Master
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16th February 2014, 11:08 PM
~Part 2~
"What? This guy has been watching me for years." I think staring at him in disgust. "What do you want from me?" I say. "I want your powers." he says staring at me menacingly. " I will be back later." he says as he gets up, and leaves. I look down at the food, and begin to eat. I realized I was hungrier than I thought I was. I look at the door trying to plan an escape. Then it hit me. I've seen it in movies before, but I'm wondering if it actually works.
I take my fork, and walk over to the door. I try to open the lock, and it actually works. I walk out trying to sneak out. I tip toe halfway down the hallway, and past a door. I start looking around for an exit. Suddenly, I trip over something. It makes a loud noise, and I quickly stand up. I'm paralyzed by shock, and fear as my kidnapper stands at the end of the hallway. He's waiting with a knife...
~End of part 2~
So what do you guys think? Leave some feedback because I always love feedback. Part 3 will be coming tomorrow which will probably be the last part..maybe... Maybe it will? Maybe it won't? You never know... Anyways, I hope you enjoyed my story, and hope you have a fantastic day.
It is our choices that show what we truly are far more than our abilities.
Everythings not lost
Master
1,280 posts
1,657
Seen 12th March 2020
17th February 2014, 03:36 PM
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Wow Bubbles! Your A Great Author And I Really Loved It +1 for you or +100 if I can
I never really wrote stories that much because I couldn't think of a plot. I liked suspenseful stories so.. yeah... Thank you.
It is our choices that show what we truly are far more than our abilities.