16th February 2014
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Kidnapped part 2.

Made by OoBubblesoO in Arts

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16th February 2014, 11:08 PM



~Part 2~

"What? This guy has been watching me for years." I think staring at him in disgust. "What do you want from me?" I say. "I want your powers." he says staring at me menacingly. " I will be back later." he says as he gets up, and leaves. I look down at the food, and begin to eat. I realized I was hungrier than I thought I was. I look at the door trying to plan an escape. Then it hit me. I've seen it in movies before, but I'm wondering if it actually works.

I take my fork, and walk over to the door. I try to open the lock, and it actually works. I walk out trying to sneak out. I tip toe halfway down the hallway, and past a door. I start looking around for an exit. Suddenly, I trip over something. It makes a loud noise, and I quickly stand up. I'm paralyzed by shock, and fear as my kidnapper stands at the end of the hallway. He's waiting with a knife...

~End of part 2~

So what do you guys think? Leave some feedback because I always love feedback. Part 3 will be coming tomorrow which will probably be the last part..maybe... Maybe it will? Maybe it won't? You never know... XD Anyways, I hope you enjoyed my story, and hope you have a fantastic day. :)
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It is our choices that show what we truly are far more than our abilities.

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17th February 2014, 06:31 AM

Wow Bubbles! Your A Great Author And I Really Loved It +1 for you or +100 if I can
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17th February 2014, 03:36 PM

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Wow Bubbles! Your A Great Author And I Really Loved It +1 for you or +100 if I can

I never really wrote stories that much because I couldn't think of a plot. I liked suspenseful stories so.. yeah... XD Thank you. :)
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It is our choices that show what we truly are far more than our abilities.

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