Chapter 1: Amanda was walking home one afternoon and she heard a noise, she yelled "Who's there?" No reply. Amanda looked down the alley and saw a dog. The dog looked starving. Amanda picked up the pooch and cuddle him and whisper: Don't worry. Amanda ran the rest of the way home. No! Amanda I already told you that you CAN'T keep the dog! Amanda's mom exclaimed. But why mother? Amanda asked. Her mother sighed. You know your sister is alergic to dogs. But mom he can sleep in my room and we can call him Snoch. Her mother sighed again. But what if he needs to go outside or something and your sisters home? NO! Now enough of this go to your room feed that dog then take him somewhere! Amanda was close to tears. She ran upstairs with the dog and brought a food and water bowl and filled them. Oh Snoch! I could give you boy if my stupid sister didn't have alergies. Chapter 2: Her dog ate and drunk it like it was nothing. Amanda picked up snoch and carried him to a no kill shelter. Oh snoch i wish I could keep you. She began to sob. But I promise to come see you EVERYDAY! The dog wagged its tail and tilted its head confused. Amanda ran out. Snoch some how got out and barked at Amanda. Amanda turned around and saw a car coming directly toward SNOCH! Snoch! Cried amanda, Look out! But it was to late the driver didn't see him and snoch died. Chapter 3: Amanda sobbed. She heard scrapping sound outside her door. Hmm that's funny. It sounds like... No that's Silly! Snoch died... Right? She sighed. Then she heard yelping like snoch before he died... She sighed... Then she saw blood... Dog blood from under he door.... She screamed. Her mother ran upstairs. M-m-m-m MOM! She finally yelped. Mom I see dog blood under the door! Of course it was already gone. What the heck has gotten into you Amanda? She said sounding confused and worried but mostly confused. MOM! I heard dog nails scrapping againt's the door! And.... But her mom cute her off before she could finish. Sweetie I think you need a good night rest. She sniffled and crawled into bed. Chapter 4: Early the next morning Amanda woke up. She glanced at her clock. Oh my gosh! Its 7 A.m! I will be late for school! She jumped up from bed but before she got dressed she remember... It was Saturday. Oh yeah.. Its Saturday. Heh. Well I am already up might as well stay up. She pushed her curtains to her window aside and opened her window. She heard yelping at their. What the? She said to her self. Then she saw it... Snoch. All blooded up. She wanted to scream but nothing came out. SNOCH! Amanda finally chocked out. She began to sob. She remembered something. Wait... That can't be Snoch! He's.. D-d-dead! She couldn't believe it. Then she saw the most horrifying thing that she would ever see. A old women all bones floating over snoch. Her eyes were sunken into her skull. Her hair was matted. She was eerie. She screeched to snoch: You are now mine. Snoch suddenly rose. Chapter 5: The old women looked up at the window and saw Amanda. She did a hand motion and the window glass broke into Amanda's face. She brushed the glass off but she was injured. She yelled Mommy! Her mother and sister rushed into the room and saw her face. Oh my gosh! Amanda sweetie what happened to your face. Then she saw the window. What the. Amanda cut her mother off. Mom snoch and some women are outside snoch is covered in blood and a old women. Her sister laughed. Haha sis your imagination is to wild. Oh yea? Alex your name sounds like a... Boy. She needed something to throw at her but that was all she had. Alex is 2 years older then Amanda and Alex is 13 and Amanda 11. Hahaha her sister joked and skipped out of the room and went to the living room. Sweetie Amanda are you ok? She felt Amanda's forehead we have to take you to the hospital. No mom i'm ok.... Chapter 5: Let me know if you want more?

Tt.. i tried to make it scary and age approite

Aw. That's so sad. Snoch died.

... or did he.. DUN DUN DUN!

Make chapter 4! I like the story so far.

ty most of my teachers are impressed

I UPDATED IT MUST READDD