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12th July 2014, 06:16 PM
Introduction
Hello, welcome to my new book for Snaildom, I am hopefully going to get this featured in game! The book is all about The Black hawks, and some of it is about friendship as well, I hope you enjoy reading this chapter of my book, I would really appreciate it for some great feed back, and I would like to thank you for reading this book as I have worked on it for 2 days, I have just extended this story as well, I am just trying to get a better chance at trying to get my book published on Snaildom, I hope you enjoy, and remember that to stay awesome, and I hope you enjoy reading my Snaildom book, remember to leave a like if you wanted to, that also helps me out,If you want more of these please let me know in the comments below, stay epic! -Luke 
The Black Hawks Return
Once there lived a emperor called Damen, he ruled over Snaildom, protecting it from the evil enemy's. The black hawks... Snaildom was always peaceful, it was full of friendly helpful snails, until one day a snail who was friendly, turned in to a very evil snail, he worked for the black hawks! They then tried to kill the emperor and the royal family, and then they killed the first victim! Raindrop. "Oh no!" cried out Archie, not Raindrop! Oh why Raindrop! 
Emperor Damen knew he had to do something. "This can't go on!" said Damen, I shall have to battle this with the whole land of Snaildom! Soon the whole town came rushing, going to the black hawks base, Luke killed the guards with poison and then everyone ran in to the base, there he was, the gruesome Black hawks leader... Rover! Damen rode his horse and all the knights and villagers scrambled to the throne, all protected with armour. Many people lost there lives, luckily Damen kept fighting. Luke also tried to kill Rover, and he was still alive with Damen, they teamed up and both went for Rover, both from each side beheading the evil master mind. The royal family were in for some great news! Raindrop got healed by the royal healers of the DSGHQ. So did all the rest of the snails who lost there lives, and since then, Snaildom has always been a happy kingdom. It was all over the Snaildom news! And the on all the News papers! "The man with it's own army saves the day!" "Emperor Damen the awards winning super star!" It was amazing! Also a new snail came to live in Snaildom, his name was Tom, he was a fun snail, and very helpful. But one day, him Luke and Damen went on an adventure, through the forests across zip lines and up mountains! They loved to travel, they were all best friends, until Luke slipped through a crack on the bridge! Damen and Tom tried to pull Luke up, but it was no use.... he fell. Damen dived of the bridge, with his flying super powers he grabbed Luke, Damen was a hero once again! Later that day Damen took Tom and Luke to have tea at the thrones. He even got a chance to sit on the throne! And Luke discovered he was Prince Luke the 1st, so that means he was Archie's brother and Damen's son in law! He also realised that Iceesofie must of been his mother in law! He was so excited to here that, and now he lives in the castle with the royal family, he is now Prince with Archie, although he never met a Princess, he was just happy to be living with his hero. Damen. Later that day Luke and Damen went to Tom's house, he loved Tom's mom's cooking, she always had nice apple pies, always not to hot or cold, and her soup was delicious! Even Damen agreed on that. We all went out on an adventure again, but this time they went a much safer way, in a few days it would be Luke's birthday, and he is going to go on holiday with the whole royal family, and of course Tom. We all had such a great tiem on holiday, I loved playing soccer with Damen and Tom, even know I lost, I still had so much fun! Next we all dived in the pool and we all slid down the slides, "This holiday couldn't get any better!" said Damen. And Archie also joined in with us to, it's awesome to know I have a brother and a great father, even know Damen is my father in law, he shall always be my BFF. Raindrop was ever so kind to me as well, even though we were husband and wife, I still care about her, but when she's happy, I'm happy, so when she's happy with Archie, I'm happy. 
When they came back from sunny Spain, they had a great big royal feast to celibate me becoming Prince with Archie, it was great, the whole village of Snaildom was here! And I also got to make a speech, here is what I said. "I would like to thank Damen for making me Prince with my awesome brother Archie, and I would mainly like to thank Damen and Tom for saving my life, they are my best friends and always will be, And it's awesome to know I have a sister in law, Raindrop. Iceesofie is a great mother and Damen is a great father, I would like to thank you all for coming, and have a great night!" Everyone has a great time, that was until Rover came back! "Uhhh...he..llo there." "I'm sorry, I didn't mean to be bad, I got pulverised by Mickey! He made me one of the black hawks, but I am ready to be a great citizen again! I do hope you accept me." Please just give me one last try, I will do anything, I'm sorry. "Okay." said Emperor Damen, you have 1 last chance okay. "Okay." said Rover. Since that day, nobody has been bad, and Snaildom has always been a great little town, and always will be Tom Damen and Luke still have there friendship, and there still all kind to each other. Later Luke and Tom got promoted to Moderators, they were so happy! 
"I think Rover has learnt his lesson." said Tom. "So do I, he hasn't done anything bad once." I said. "I know!" said Damen. "Shall we go on a quest to kill Mickey!" "Yeah!" we all said in a loud voice. So off we all went across the bridge, avoiding the gaps we got right over the bridge! Mickey was trying to destroy Snaildom! "Quick, we need to get in and stop him!" we all ran in with our swords riding on our horses we all trampled over the guards to the evil throne room of "Lord Mickey" or as we call him "Evil Black Hawk Mickey!" We aimed an arrow at him but it always missed him, we kept going until soon... we were all out of arrows! Next we had another idea, we all charged towards him with our swords, but it was no use, so Damen got his dog and I got the Hound, and we shot, him, we had loads of bullets, it took 200 to take him out, and eventually the battle was over. Snaildom was safe after all, no more Mickey or Black Hawks, just the Snaildom gang. They all had another celebration at the thrones, "We shall never forget this day." said Damen. "Yep, it's all in good memory." I said. Since that very day, nobody in Snaildom got hurt, they were all still helpful, and Rover kept his promise, everything was back to normal in the mighty land of Snaildom.
Emperor Damen knew he had to do something. "This can't go on!" said Damen, I shall have to battle this with the whole land of Snaildom! Soon the whole town came rushing, going to the black hawks base, Luke killed the guards with poison and then everyone ran in to the base, there he was, the gruesome Black hawks leader... Rover! Damen rode his horse and all the knights and villagers scrambled to the throne, all protected with armour. Many people lost there lives, luckily Damen kept fighting. Luke also tried to kill Rover, and he was still alive with Damen, they teamed up and both went for Rover, both from each side beheading the evil master mind. The royal family were in for some great news! Raindrop got healed by the royal healers of the DSGHQ. So did all the rest of the snails who lost there lives, and since then, Snaildom has always been a happy kingdom. It was all over the Snaildom news! And the on all the News papers! "The man with it's own army saves the day!" "Emperor Damen the awards winning super star!" It was amazing! Also a new snail came to live in Snaildom, his name was Tom, he was a fun snail, and very helpful. But one day, him Luke and Damen went on an adventure, through the forests across zip lines and up mountains! They loved to travel, they were all best friends, until Luke slipped through a crack on the bridge! Damen and Tom tried to pull Luke up, but it was no use.... he fell. Damen dived of the bridge, with his flying super powers he grabbed Luke, Damen was a hero once again! Later that day Damen took Tom and Luke to have tea at the thrones. He even got a chance to sit on the throne! And Luke discovered he was Prince Luke the 1st, so that means he was Archie's brother and Damen's son in law! He also realised that Iceesofie must of been his mother in law! He was so excited to here that, and now he lives in the castle with the royal family, he is now Prince with Archie, although he never met a Princess, he was just happy to be living with his hero. Damen. Later that day Luke and Damen went to Tom's house, he loved Tom's mom's cooking, she always had nice apple pies, always not to hot or cold, and her soup was delicious! Even Damen agreed on that. We all went out on an adventure again, but this time they went a much safer way, in a few days it would be Luke's birthday, and he is going to go on holiday with the whole royal family, and of course Tom. We all had such a great tiem on holiday, I loved playing soccer with Damen and Tom, even know I lost, I still had so much fun! Next we all dived in the pool and we all slid down the slides, "This holiday couldn't get any better!" said Damen. And Archie also joined in with us to, it's awesome to know I have a brother and a great father, even know Damen is my father in law, he shall always be my BFF. Raindrop was ever so kind to me as well, even though we were husband and wife, I still care about her, but when she's happy, I'm happy, so when she's happy with Archie, I'm happy. When they came back from sunny Spain, they had a great big royal feast to celibate me becoming Prince with Archie, it was great, the whole village of Snaildom was here! And I also got to make a speech, here is what I said. "I would like to thank Damen for making me Prince with my awesome brother Archie, and I would mainly like to thank Damen and Tom for saving my life, they are my best friends and always will be, And it's awesome to know I have a sister in law, Raindrop. Iceesofie is a great mother and Damen is a great father, I would like to thank you all for coming, and have a great night!" Everyone has a great time, that was until Rover came back! "Uhhh...he..llo there." "I'm sorry, I didn't mean to be bad, I got pulverised by Mickey! He made me one of the black hawks, but I am ready to be a great citizen again! I do hope you accept me." Please just give me one last try, I will do anything, I'm sorry. "Okay." said Emperor Damen, you have 1 last chance okay. "Okay." said Rover. Since that day, nobody has been bad, and Snaildom has always been a great little town, and always will be Tom Damen and Luke still have there friendship, and there still all kind to each other. Later Luke and Tom got promoted to Moderators, they were so happy! "I think Rover has learnt his lesson." said Tom. "So do I, he hasn't done anything bad once." I said. "I know!" said Damen. "Shall we go on a quest to kill Mickey!" "Yeah!" we all said in a loud voice. So off we all went across the bridge, avoiding the gaps we got right over the bridge! Mickey was trying to destroy Snaildom! "Quick, we need to get in and stop him!" we all ran in with our swords riding on our horses we all trampled over the guards to the evil throne room of "Lord Mickey" or as we call him "Evil Black Hawk Mickey!" We aimed an arrow at him but it always missed him, we kept going until soon... we were all out of arrows! Next we had another idea, we all charged towards him with our swords, but it was no use, so Damen got his dog and I got the Hound, and we shot, him, we had loads of bullets, it took 200 to take him out, and eventually the battle was over. Snaildom was safe after all, no more Mickey or Black Hawks, just the Snaildom gang. They all had another celebration at the thrones, "We shall never forget this day." said Damen. "Yep, it's all in good memory." I said. Since that very day, nobody in Snaildom got hurt, they were all still helpful, and Rover kept his promise, everything was back to normal in the mighty land of Snaildom.
The End
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THANK YOU for reading this chapter of my Snaildom book, I hope to bring another one out soon! 
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Once there lived a emperor called Damen, he ruled over Snaildom, protecting it from the evil enemy's. The black hawks... Snaildom was always peaceful, it was full of friendly helpful snails, until one day a snail who was friendly, turned in to a very evil snail, he worked for the black hawks! They then tried to kill the emperor and the royal family, and then they killed the first victim! Raindrop. "Oh no!" cried out Archie, not Raindrop! Oh why Raindrop! Emperor Damen knew he had to do something. "This can't go on!" said Damen, I shall have to battle this with the whole land of Snaildom! Soon the whole town came rushing, going to the black hawks base, Luke killed the guards with poison and then everyone ran in to the base, there he was, the gruesome Black hawks leader... Rover! Damen rode his horse and all the knights and villagers scrambled to the throne, all protected with armour. Many people lost there lives, luckily Damen kept fighting. Luke also tried to kill Rover, and he was still alive with Damen, they teamed up and both went for Rover, both from each side beheading the evil master mind. The royal family were in for some great news! Raindrop got healed by the royal healers of the DSGHQ. So did all the rest of the snails who lost there lives, and since then, Snaildom has always been a happy kingdom. The End.
Emperor Damen knew he had to do something. "This can't go on!" said Damen, I shall have to battle this with the whole land of Snaildom! Soon the whole town came rushing, going to the black hawks base, Luke killed the guards with poison and then everyone ran in to the base, there he was, the gruesome Black hawks leader... Rover! Damen rode his horse and all the knights and villagers scrambled to the throne, all protected with armour. Many people lost there lives, luckily Damen kept fighting. Luke also tried to kill Rover, and he was still alive with Damen, they teamed up and both went for Rover, both from each side beheading the evil master mind. The royal family were in for some great news! Raindrop got healed by the royal healers of the DSGHQ. So did all the rest of the snails who lost there lives, and since then, Snaildom has always been a happy kingdom. The End. I love happy endings! Good luck on winning! 
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Once there lived a emperor called Damen, he ruled over Snaildom, protecting it from the evil enemy's. The black hawks... Snaildom was always peaceful, it was full of friendly helpful snails, until one day a snail who was friendly, turned in to a very evil snail, he worked for the black hawks! They then tried to kill the emperor and the royal family, and then they killed the first victim! Raindrop. "Oh no!" cried out Archie, not Raindrop! Oh why Raindrop! Emperor Damen knew he had to do something. "This can't go on!" said Damen, I shall have to battle this with the whole land of Snaildom! Soon the whole town came rushing, going to the black hawks base, Luke killed the guards with poison and then everyone ran in to the base, there he was, the gruesome Black hawks leader... Rover! Damen rode his horse and all the knights and villagers scrambled to the throne, all protected with armour. Many people lost there lives, luckily Damen kept fighting. Luke also tried to kill Rover, and he was still alive with Damen, they teamed up and both went for Rover, both from each side beheading the evil master mind. The royal family were in for some great news! Raindrop got healed by the royal healers of the DSGHQ. So did all the rest of the snails who lost there lives, and since then, Snaildom has always been a happy kingdom. The End.
Emperor Damen knew he had to do something. "This can't go on!" said Damen, I shall have to battle this with the whole land of Snaildom! Soon the whole town came rushing, going to the black hawks base, Luke killed the guards with poison and then everyone ran in to the base, there he was, the gruesome Black hawks leader... Rover! Damen rode his horse and all the knights and villagers scrambled to the throne, all protected with armour. Many people lost there lives, luckily Damen kept fighting. Luke also tried to kill Rover, and he was still alive with Damen, they teamed up and both went for Rover, both from each side beheading the evil master mind. The royal family were in for some great news! Raindrop got healed by the royal healers of the DSGHQ. So did all the rest of the snails who lost there lives, and since then, Snaildom has always been a happy kingdom. The End. I love happy endings! Good luck on winning!
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