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12th July 2014, 10:36 PM
Missing Snail - Snaildom Story
Once upon a time, there was a snail named Henry James Bennett. He was 13 and lived in a village called Snaildom. Henry had many siblings that did not like him. One day while he was doing his chores, his friend John came over to ask if he wanted to take a walk. He asked his mom if he could hangout with him. His mom replied saying "Alright, but be sure to be home by supper." They headed out to the Snaildom Park. There was a huge crowd at the park. They found out there was a birthday party going on. Before they went down the trail, Henry said he needed a snack. John agreed. He said "I'll go to the snack machine. You stay here." "Okay." said Henry. He went to a tree with shade to wait. It was over 90 degrees there. A snail who looked like he was from the birthday party came over to him and sat down. He asked Henry if he wanted a cupcake. Henry said "Sorry. I'm not allowed to take anything from strangers." "Just come with me." The snail grabbed Henry and told that if he screamed, he would die. He tied him up and took him down the road, afraid of being caught.
When John got back he knew something went wrong and he must be missing. He went to tell Henry's mom and she said "We need to call the cops." When they did the cops they said he needed to be gone at least 48 hours before they start looking. Henry's mom told the kids and they got real worried. They never felt this way before! The whole family went and started looking for him. When they were looking for him, Emperor Damen and his fellow Detectives were working on a project when they saw him moving down the street. They decided if they followed him, he would see them and run. Also, they were far away from him anyways. Damen told his Detectives to go to the HQ and find a way way to stop him before he reaches his destination. They hurried as fast as they could to the HQ. When they got their, Damen was waiting for them. He told them that he looked like the age of 40. They then discovered that he was probably moving to the RedStone Mountain. Lots of kidnappings have happened there.. Detective Adawg knew a good trail to take to meet them before he gets there. But Detective BAKON disagreed. He said "If we did that, he my kill the kid."
They looked up information on the Snail who kidnapped him and found out he was James Rider, known for many kidnappings. They decided to take the risk and go on the trail to meet up with them. Then, they finally reached up with him. Detective Luke pulled out his gun and said "Hand over the child. I'm sure we can work something out." Damen told him "Put down the gun for now. We don't want to make him aggressive. "The snail said in anger "NO. Get out of my way!" He put up a gun to the kids head and said "Move or I will shoot him!" Henry was really scared. The News Reporters finally got there, Crowflying was filming while MrLion and Declan were reporting live. Henry's family got back home and turned on the TV. They saw Henry had a gun to his head! They were very nervous! Damen whispered to the Detectives to pull out there guns and shoot him! They did so. They shot him and the snail didn't have a chance to shoot and died. The Detectives grabbed Henry and took him to his owner. The News Reporter asked Damen "Why didn't you just shoot him in the arm and take him to jail?" Damen replied by saying "My Detectives and I are not trained to shoot someone in the arm or the leg. We are trained to stop the threat." He walked away and left the Crime Scene. Henry's family and John were so relieved to see him and were thankful he was alive. His brothers and sisters were so happy that they said "We are sorry for the way we treated you and we know now how much we care about you. We will now treat you like a brother." Henry said "Thank you guys. I appreciate it. I just never thought you guys would say this." They thanked Damen and his Detectives for there fine work. And they all lived Happily Ever After.
~Crowflying
Once upon a time, there was a snail named Henry James Bennett. He was 13 and lived in a village called Snaildom. Henry had many siblings that did not like him. One day while he was doing his chores, his friend John came over to ask if he wanted to take a walk. He asked his mom if he could hangout with him. His mom replied saying "Alright, but be sure to be home by supper." They headed out to the Snaildom Park. There was a huge crowd at the park. They found out there was a birthday party going on. Before they went down the trail, Henry said he needed a snack. John agreed. He said "I'll go to the snack machine. You stay here." "Okay." said Henry. He went to a tree with shade to wait. It was over 90 degrees there. A snail who looked like he was from the birthday party came over to him and sat down. He asked Henry if he wanted a cupcake. Henry said "Sorry. I'm not allowed to take anything from strangers." "Just come with me." The snail grabbed Henry and told that if he screamed, he would die. He tied him up and took him down the road, afraid of being caught.
When John got back he knew something went wrong and he must be missing. He went to tell Henry's mom and she said "We need to call the cops." When they did the cops they said he needed to be gone at least 48 hours before they start looking. Henry's mom told the kids and they got real worried. They never felt this way before! The whole family went and started looking for him. When they were looking for him, Emperor Damen and his fellow Detectives were working on a project when they saw him moving down the street. They decided if they followed him, he would see them and run. Also, they were far away from him anyways. Damen told his Detectives to go to the HQ and find a way way to stop him before he reaches his destination. They hurried as fast as they could to the HQ. When they got their, Damen was waiting for them. He told them that he looked like the age of 40. They then discovered that he was probably moving to the RedStone Mountain. Lots of kidnappings have happened there.. Detective Adawg knew a good trail to take to meet them before he gets there. But Detective BAKON disagreed. He said "If we did that, he my kill the kid."
They looked up information on the Snail who kidnapped him and found out he was James Rider, known for many kidnappings. They decided to take the risk and go on the trail to meet up with them. Then, they finally reached up with him. Detective Luke pulled out his gun and said "Hand over the child. I'm sure we can work something out." Damen told him "Put down the gun for now. We don't want to make him aggressive. "The snail said in anger "NO. Get out of my way!" He put up a gun to the kids head and said "Move or I will shoot him!" Henry was really scared. The News Reporters finally got there, Crowflying was filming while MrLion and Declan were reporting live. Henry's family got back home and turned on the TV. They saw Henry had a gun to his head! They were very nervous! Damen whispered to the Detectives to pull out there guns and shoot him! They did so. They shot him and the snail didn't have a chance to shoot and died. The Detectives grabbed Henry and took him to his owner. The News Reporter asked Damen "Why didn't you just shoot him in the arm and take him to jail?" Damen replied by saying "My Detectives and I are not trained to shoot someone in the arm or the leg. We are trained to stop the threat." He walked away and left the Crime Scene. Henry's family and John were so relieved to see him and were thankful he was alive. His brothers and sisters were so happy that they said "We are sorry for the way we treated you and we know now how much we care about you. We will now treat you like a brother." Henry said "Thank you guys. I appreciate it. I just never thought you guys would say this." They thanked Damen and his Detectives for there fine work. And they all lived Happily Ever After.
~Crowflying
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Missing Snail - Snaildom Story
Once upon a time, there was a snail named Henry James Bennett. He was 13 and lived in a village called Snaildom. Henry had many siblings that did not like him. One day while he was doing his chores, his friend John came over to ask if he wanted to take a walk. He asked his mom if he could hangout with him. His mom replied saying "Alright, but be sure to be home by supper." They headed out to the Snaildom Park. There was a huge crowd at the park. They found out there was a birthday party going on. Before they went down the trail, Henry said he needed a snack. John agreed. He said "I'll go to the snack machine. You stay here." "Okay." said Henry. He went to a tree with shade to wait. It was over 90 degrees there. A snail who looked like he was from the birthday party came over to him and sat down. He asked Henry if he wanted a cupcake. Henry said "Sorry. I'm not allowed to take anything from strangers." "Just come with me." The snail grabbed Henry and told that if he screamed, he would die. He tied him up and took him down the road, afraid of being caught. When John got back he knew something went wrong and he must be missing. He went to tell Henry's mom and she said "We need to call the cops." When they did the cops they said he needed to be gone at least 48 hours before they start looking. Henry's mom told the kids and they got real worried. They never felt this way before! The whole family went and started looking for him. When they were looking for him, Emperor Damen and his fellow Detectives were working on a project when they saw him moving down the street. They decided if they followed him, he would see them and run. Also, they were far away from him anyways. Damen told his Detectives to go to the HQ and find a way way to stop him before he reaches his destination. They hurried as fast as they could to the HQ. When they got their, Damen was waiting for them. He told them that he looked like the age of 40. They then discovered that he was probably moving to the RedStone Mountain. It is known for many kidnappings. Detective Adawg knew a good trail to take to meet them before he gets there. But Detective BAKON disagreed. He said "If we did that he my kill the kid." They looked up information on the Snail who kidnapped him and found out he was James Rider, known for many kidnappings. They decided to take the risk and go on the trail to meet up with them. Then, they finally reached up with him. Detective Luke pulled out his gun and said "Hand over the child. I'm sure we can work something out." Damen told him "Put down the gun for now. We don't want to make him aggressive. "The snail said in anger "NO. Get out of my way!" He put up a gun to the kids head and said "Move or I will shoot him!" Henry was really scared. The News Reporters finally got there, Crowflying was filming while MrLion and Declan were reporting live. Henry's family got back home and turned on the TV. They saw Henry had a gun to his head! They were very nervous! Damen whispered to the Detectives to pull out there guns and shoot him! They did so. They shot him and the snail didn't have a chance to shoot and died. The Detectives grabbed Henry and took him to his owner. The News Reporter asked Damen "Why didn't you just shoot him in the arm and take him to jail?" Damen replied by saying "My Detectives and I are not trained to shoot someone in the arm or the leg. We are trained to stop the threat." He walked away and left the Crime Scene. Henry's family and John were so relieved to see him and were thankful he was alive. His brothers and sisters were so happy that they said "We are sorry for the way we treated you and we know now how much we care about you. We will now treat you like a brother." Henry said "Thank you guys. I appreciate it. I just never thought you guys would say this." They thanked Damen and his Detectives for there fine work. And they all lived Happily Ever After.
~Crowflying
Once upon a time, there was a snail named Henry James Bennett. He was 13 and lived in a village called Snaildom. Henry had many siblings that did not like him. One day while he was doing his chores, his friend John came over to ask if he wanted to take a walk. He asked his mom if he could hangout with him. His mom replied saying "Alright, but be sure to be home by supper." They headed out to the Snaildom Park. There was a huge crowd at the park. They found out there was a birthday party going on. Before they went down the trail, Henry said he needed a snack. John agreed. He said "I'll go to the snack machine. You stay here." "Okay." said Henry. He went to a tree with shade to wait. It was over 90 degrees there. A snail who looked like he was from the birthday party came over to him and sat down. He asked Henry if he wanted a cupcake. Henry said "Sorry. I'm not allowed to take anything from strangers." "Just come with me." The snail grabbed Henry and told that if he screamed, he would die. He tied him up and took him down the road, afraid of being caught. When John got back he knew something went wrong and he must be missing. He went to tell Henry's mom and she said "We need to call the cops." When they did the cops they said he needed to be gone at least 48 hours before they start looking. Henry's mom told the kids and they got real worried. They never felt this way before! The whole family went and started looking for him. When they were looking for him, Emperor Damen and his fellow Detectives were working on a project when they saw him moving down the street. They decided if they followed him, he would see them and run. Also, they were far away from him anyways. Damen told his Detectives to go to the HQ and find a way way to stop him before he reaches his destination. They hurried as fast as they could to the HQ. When they got their, Damen was waiting for them. He told them that he looked like the age of 40. They then discovered that he was probably moving to the RedStone Mountain. It is known for many kidnappings. Detective Adawg knew a good trail to take to meet them before he gets there. But Detective BAKON disagreed. He said "If we did that he my kill the kid." They looked up information on the Snail who kidnapped him and found out he was James Rider, known for many kidnappings. They decided to take the risk and go on the trail to meet up with them. Then, they finally reached up with him. Detective Luke pulled out his gun and said "Hand over the child. I'm sure we can work something out." Damen told him "Put down the gun for now. We don't want to make him aggressive. "The snail said in anger "NO. Get out of my way!" He put up a gun to the kids head and said "Move or I will shoot him!" Henry was really scared. The News Reporters finally got there, Crowflying was filming while MrLion and Declan were reporting live. Henry's family got back home and turned on the TV. They saw Henry had a gun to his head! They were very nervous! Damen whispered to the Detectives to pull out there guns and shoot him! They did so. They shot him and the snail didn't have a chance to shoot and died. The Detectives grabbed Henry and took him to his owner. The News Reporter asked Damen "Why didn't you just shoot him in the arm and take him to jail?" Damen replied by saying "My Detectives and I are not trained to shoot someone in the arm or the leg. We are trained to stop the threat." He walked away and left the Crime Scene. Henry's family and John were so relieved to see him and were thankful he was alive. His brothers and sisters were so happy that they said "We are sorry for the way we treated you and we know now how much we care about you. We will now treat you like a brother." Henry said "Thank you guys. I appreciate it. I just never thought you guys would say this." They thanked Damen and his Detectives for there fine work. And they all lived Happily Ever After.
~Crowflying
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Once upon a time, there was a snail named Henry James Bennett. He was 13 and lived in a village called Snaildom. Henry had many siblings that did not like him. One day while he was doing his chores, his friend John came over to ask if he wanted to take a walk. He asked his mom if he could hangout with him. His mom replied saying "Alright, but be sure to be home by supper." They headed out to the Snaildom Park. There was a huge crowd at the park. They found out there was a birthday party going on. Before they went down the trail, Henry said he needed a snack. John agreed. He said "I'll go to the snack machine. You stay here." "Okay." said Henry. He went to a tree with shade to wait. It was over 90 degrees there. A snail who looked like he was from the birthday party came over to him and sat down. He asked Henry if he wanted a cupcake. Henry said "Sorry. I'm not allowed to take anything from strangers." "Just come with me." The snail grabbed Henry and told that if he screamed, he would die. He tied him up and took him down the road, afraid of being caught. When John got back he knew something went wrong and he must be missing. He went to tell Henry's mom and she said "We need to call the cops." When they did the cops they said he needed to be gone at least 48 hours before they start looking. Henry's mom told the kids and they got real worried. They never felt this way before! The whole family went and started looking for him. When they were looking for him, Emperor Damen and his fellow Detectives were working on a project when they saw him moving down the street. They decided if they followed him, he would see them and run. Also, they were far away from him anyways. Damen told his Detectives to go to the HQ and find a way way to stop him before he reaches his destination. They hurried as fast as they could to the HQ. When they got their, Damen was waiting for them. He told them that he looked like the age of 40. They then discovered that he was probably moving to the RedStone Mountain. It is known for many kidnappings. Detective Adawg knew a good trail to take to meet them before he gets there. But Detective BAKON disagreed. He said "If we did that he my kill the kid." They looked up information on the Snail who kidnapped him and found out he was James Rider, known for many kidnappings. They decided to take the risk and go on the trail to meet up with them. Then, they finally reached up with him. Detective Luke pulled out his gun and said "Hand over the child. I'm sure we can work something out." Damen told him "Put down the gun for now. We don't want to make him aggressive. "The snail said in anger "NO. Get out of my way!" He put up a gun to the kids head and said "Move or I will shoot him!" Henry was really scared. The News Reporters finally got there, Crowflying was filming while MrLion and Declan were reporting live. Henry's family got back home and turned on the TV. They saw Henry had a gun to his head! They were very nervous! Damen whispered to the Detectives to pull out there guns and shoot him! They did so. They shot him and the snail didn't have a chance to shoot and died. The Detectives grabbed Henry and took him to his owner. The News Reporter asked Damen "Why didn't you just shoot him in the arm and take him to jail?" Damen replied by saying "My Detectives and I are not trained to shoot someone in the arm or the leg. We are trained to stop the threat." He walked away and left the Crime Scene. Henry's family and John were so relieved to see him and were thankful he was alive. His brothers and sisters were so happy that they said "We are sorry for the way we treated you and we know now how much we care about you. We will now treat you like a brother." Henry said "Thank you guys. I appreciate it. I just never thought you guys would say this." They thanked Damen and his Detectives for there fine work. And they all lived Happily Ever After.
~Crowflying
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Once upon a time, there was a snail named Henry James Bennett. He was 13 and lived in a village called Snaildom. Henry had many siblings that did not like him. One day while he was doing his chores, his friend John came over to ask if he wanted to take a walk. He asked his mom if he could hangout with him. His mom replied saying "Alright, but be sure to be home by supper." They headed out to the Snaildom Park. There was a huge crowd at the park. They found out there was a birthday party going on. Before they went down the trail, Henry said he needed a snack. John agreed. He said "I'll go to the snack machine. You stay here." "Okay." said Henry. He went to a tree with shade to wait. It was over 90 degrees there. A snail who looked like he was from the birthday party came over to him and sat down. He asked Henry if he wanted a cupcake. Henry said "Sorry. I'm not allowed to take anything from strangers." "Just come with me." The snail grabbed Henry and told that if he screamed, he would die. He tied him up and took him down the road, afraid of being caught. When John got back he knew something went wrong and he must be missing. He went to tell Henry's mom and she said "We need to call the cops." When they did the cops they said he needed to be gone at least 48 hours before they start looking. Henry's mom told the kids and they got real worried. They never felt this way before! The whole family went and started looking for him. When they were looking for him, Emperor Damen and his fellow Detectives were working on a project when they saw him moving down the street. They decided if they followed him, he would see them and run. Also, they were far away from him anyways. Damen told his Detectives to go to the HQ and find a way way to stop him before he reaches his destination. They hurried as fast as they could to the HQ. When they got their, Damen was waiting for them. He told them that he looked like the age of 40. They then discovered that he was probably moving to the RedStone Mountain. It is known for many kidnappings. Detective Adawg knew a good trail to take to meet them before he gets there. But Detective BAKON disagreed. He said "If we did that he my kill the kid." They looked up information on the Snail who kidnapped him and found out he was James Rider, known for many kidnappings. They decided to take the risk and go on the trail to meet up with them. Then, they finally reached up with him. Detective Luke pulled out his gun and said "Hand over the child. I'm sure we can work something out." Damen told him "Put down the gun for now. We don't want to make him aggressive. "The snail said in anger "NO. Get out of my way!" He put up a gun to the kids head and said "Move or I will shoot him!" Henry was really scared. The News Reporters finally got there, Crowflying was filming while MrLion and Declan were reporting live. Henry's family got back home and turned on the TV. They saw Henry had a gun to his head! They were very nervous! Damen whispered to the Detectives to pull out there guns and shoot him! They did so. They shot him and the snail didn't have a chance to shoot and died. The Detectives grabbed Henry and took him to his owner. The News Reporter asked Damen "Why didn't you just shoot him in the arm and take him to jail?" Damen replied by saying "My Detectives and I are not trained to shoot someone in the arm or the leg. We are trained to stop the threat." He walked away and left the Crime Scene. Henry's family and John were so relieved to see him and were thankful he was alive. His brothers and sisters were so happy that they said "We are sorry for the way we treated you and we know now how much we care about you. We will now treat you like a brother." Henry said "Thank you guys. I appreciate it. I just never thought you guys would say this." They thanked Damen and his Detectives for there fine work. And they all lived Happily Ever After.
~Crowflying
I really like it! 1+
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14th July 2014, 07:54 PM
Love the story, good suspense and mystery.
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15th July 2014, 10:46 AM
Great story! I was really into it!
