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Damen's Search -Snaildom Story

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Once apon a time, there was a kingdom name "Snaildom". The Ruler was named Damen. Everyone bowed to him. Snaildom was a peaceful kingdom. They had one enemy. They were called the Blackhawks. Damen tried to fight the Blackhawks. One day, the Blackhawks came. They took Princess Raindrop! "Raindrop!" yelled Damen. Archie (Her husband) cried for hours. Damen became furious. Damen had a meeting at the thrones. "Attention everyone!" yelled Damen. "Princess Raindrop has been kidnapped!" said Damen. "By who?" asked Iceesofie. "By the Blackhawks!" answered Damen. "But I am going to find her!" yelled Damen. Everyone clapped. "But I need volunteers! To help me!" said Damen. Archie and Iceesofie agreed to go. "Anyone else?" asked Damen. Just then, a snail name Melanie walked in. "Sorry I'm late!" she said. "You will come too." said Damen pointing to Melanie. "Oh me?" asked Melanie. "Yes you!" said Damen. "Oh okay." said Melanie. Damen pulled Melanie up. "Now, please bring us our horse!" said Damen. The knights brought their horses. "You are in charge TikiLiki!" said Damen. "Yes sir." said TikiLiki. "Now, lets go!" said Damen. Melanie had followed Damen. They had traveled to a forest that's trees had burned. "This is the place." whispered Damen. Behind him was Rover. "Uh Damen. There is-" said Melanie. Damen had shut her mouth. "Shhh" said Damen. "Rovers behind you." whispered Melanie. Damen turned around. "So, we meet again." said Rover. "Rover! Where is Raindrop?" said Damen. "I am not telling." said Rover. "You better tell the ruler!" said Melanie getting up in Rovers face. Rover pushed Melanie on the floor. " Yes. She is right! Tell the ruler!" said Damen. "What's the magic word?" said Rover. Damen was about to speak. But Melanie had told him not to. "Is it Abra Kadabra?" asked Melanie. "Ah dang. Your good at this." said Rover. "Its kinda my thing" said Melanie crossing her arms. "Fine. She is in the tunnel." said Rover. "There's tons of tunnels. Which one?" said Damen. "Another hint. It is the one with slime." said Rover. Melanie had ran to the tunnel. She stopped when she got there. Damen ran up to her. He bumped into her. Melanie fell in a hole. "Ahh!" she yelled. "What did I do? Ohhh." said Damen. Melanie had hit the floor. She saw Raindrop. But beside her was Gamer. "Melanie." said Gamer. "Gamer." said Melanie. "So, you have found Raindrop." said Gamer. Gamer had jumped forward. Melanie had ran up to Raindrop. Melanie untied Raindrop. "Thanks Melanie." said Raindrop. "No problem." said Melanie. "Melanie! are you down there?" asked Damen. "Yes!" said Melanie. "Well I'm gonna come down!" said Damen. "NO!!" Melanie and Raindrop yelled together. "Okay." said Damen. They tied Gamer up and put him standing up. "Next time don't take me!" said Raindrop. "I'm sorry." said Gamer. "I shouldn't have done this. Please give me another chance." said Gamer frowning. "Aw. Okay." said Melanie. Raindrop and Melanie looked at each other. They untied him. "Thanks." said Gamer. "No problem." said Melanie. Raindrop, Melanie and Gamer climbed up and saw Damen looking board. "Hi Damen" said Raindrop. "Hi Raindrop." said Damen. Damen came over to Gamer. "I am sorry." said Gamer. "Its okay." said Damen. They all went back to Snaildom and lived happily ever after. The End.
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14th July 2014, 06:21 AM

Great story! And congrats on the Writer Badge! ;3
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14th July 2014, 10:48 AM

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Great story! And congrats on the Writer Badge! ;3
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14th July 2014, 10:50 AM

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Great story! And congrats on the Writer Badge! ;3
You too!

Thanks! :3
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14th July 2014, 10:51 AM

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Great story! And congrats on the Writer Badge! ;3
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Thanks! :3
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14th July 2014, 10:04 PM

Wow, this was amazing. Congrats Melanie. You did great!
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Wow, this was amazing. Congrats Melanie. You did great!
Thank you!
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14th July 2014, 10:14 PM

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Wow, this was amazing. Congrats Melanie. You did great!
Thank you!

Oh, no problem! You deserve it girl! This was amazing!
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14th July 2014, 10:33 PM

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Wow, this was amazing. Congrats Melanie. You did great!
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Oh, no problem! You deserve it girl! This was amazing!
You are very nice!
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