16th July 2014
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Falling Toblrone Rewitten
16th July 2014, 03:37 PM
Yes I did edited it with punctuation enjoy -Declan
SnailDom- Raining Toblrone How it was made
One Day Damen the master of them all yawned on his throne he needs some choclate to keep him going. The Hound tried to find something he will like but it seems that he did not like any even the chilly choclate it was gross "HOUND,BUY ME SOME CANDY UNDERSTAND?" So the Hound went outside then suddenly something hit the hounds head he looked up and in a flash toblrones came falling down The Hound picked up 500,000 of them and rushed back in a flash and gave them to Emperor Damen "Hmm Tasty" Said King Damen smiling then the hound brought 200 wagons of them and damen was so shocked to see all that candy he thanked the hound and he kept on ruling the kindgom happily.
THE END
By Deccy!
SnailDom Speical- The Missing King
One Day the sun rose up peacefully the taps were dripping The Hound woke up silently and went to awake the king when he got to the bedroom .His Mouth Dropped down to see that his beloved king was gone. He went to wake up the Queen,princesses and the prince they woke up striaght away when they heard the Hound they went to look for King Damen and then suddenly something flew into there faces. it was a note it says If you want you King back give me all your money or else he is gone. They all gasped they read the address. They packed up and went on the mystic adventure in the earie forest they hearded grunting so they went into the forest more it got darker and darker and darker but they did not care they need to find Damen so badly They saw Cyberwolf with a rash on the tree they asked him what happened he said Damen he.. then Cyberwolf fainted and so they brought cyber with him they went more inside the dark forest then they open the door the saw a bat cat and puffle Icesofiee Raindrop and GUGU screamed so loud that the bat puffle and cat fell and disappeared then they kept on going then they saw a toblrone with blood on it and then suddenly they saw the dark shadow theif and King Damen but King was locked up on chains then they took the axe out just for this ocassin then they charged and tackled the theif Prince archie took the hood off They said no way its.... The Fire ghost this was their first time seeing it then the found a hose and hit the fire ghost with it and Tobrones came out of him Lol they all said they took out a magical potion and fed it to Damen and Cyberwolf and they awoke and they were cured and Queen Iceesofie and Princess Gugu Freed The King from the filfy rusty cuffs The next day they gave them metals and the declared girls can now get metals! wow! Said the villiagers and so they all live happliy ever after
The End
bye Guys this is all!
SnailDom- Raining Toblrone How it was made
One Day Damen the master of them all yawned on his throne he needs some choclate to keep him going. The Hound tried to find something he will like but it seems that he did not like any even the chilly choclate it was gross "HOUND,BUY ME SOME CANDY UNDERSTAND?" So the Hound went outside then suddenly something hit the hounds head he looked up and in a flash toblrones came falling down The Hound picked up 500,000 of them and rushed back in a flash and gave them to Emperor Damen "Hmm Tasty" Said King Damen smiling then the hound brought 200 wagons of them and damen was so shocked to see all that candy he thanked the hound and he kept on ruling the kindgom happily.
THE END
By Deccy!
SnailDom Speical- The Missing King
One Day the sun rose up peacefully the taps were dripping The Hound woke up silently and went to awake the king when he got to the bedroom .His Mouth Dropped down to see that his beloved king was gone. He went to wake up the Queen,princesses and the prince they woke up striaght away when they heard the Hound they went to look for King Damen and then suddenly something flew into there faces. it was a note it says If you want you King back give me all your money or else he is gone. They all gasped they read the address. They packed up and went on the mystic adventure in the earie forest they hearded grunting so they went into the forest more it got darker and darker and darker but they did not care they need to find Damen so badly They saw Cyberwolf with a rash on the tree they asked him what happened he said Damen he.. then Cyberwolf fainted and so they brought cyber with him they went more inside the dark forest then they open the door the saw a bat cat and puffle Icesofiee Raindrop and GUGU screamed so loud that the bat puffle and cat fell and disappeared then they kept on going then they saw a toblrone with blood on it and then suddenly they saw the dark shadow theif and King Damen but King was locked up on chains then they took the axe out just for this ocassin then they charged and tackled the theif Prince archie took the hood off They said no way its.... The Fire ghost this was their first time seeing it then the found a hose and hit the fire ghost with it and Tobrones came out of him Lol they all said they took out a magical potion and fed it to Damen and Cyberwolf and they awoke and they were cured and Queen Iceesofie and Princess Gugu Freed The King from the filfy rusty cuffs The next day they gave them metals and the declared girls can now get metals! wow! Said the villiagers and so they all live happliy ever after
The End
bye Guys this is all!
Declan - Quit