2nd August 2014
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Victory Battle: Snaildom Story

Made by LiveToDance in Snaildom

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2nd August 2014, 03:40 PM

Characters
Damen - Emperor of the village Adeck
Islo - Emperor of the village Aqam
Jock - Servant of Islo
Kaberi - The Queen of Adeck
Limberk - Leader of the Adeck Knights
Wock - Knight of Adeck
Olk - Knight of Adeck
Kike - Leader of the Aqam Knights
Morq - Knight of Aqam
Poll - Knight of Aqam
Tolyer - The Peasant of the Village Aqam

Victory Battle ~ Part 1

Once upon a time, there was a village called Adeck, ruled by the one and only, Damen. Up north a few miles, was where his Kingdom was located. He lived there with his Queen, Kaberi and his Knights which would do anything to protect their land from the evil Emperor of Aqam, Islo. One day, Kaberi was gathering some supplements at the near by Food Store, when Jock had walked in at the moment she was there. He had quickly bought a few items, as he caught a glimpse of Kaberi walking towards the Checkout Station. He hid behind the pile of beans until he knew it was clear to come out of surprise. He took out a device that looked similar to a communicative system, and seemed to be talking to Islo, in no time. He whispered through the electronic, "Sir, I think this is our lucky day! I have just spotted the Queen of Adeck and I might be able to bring her back to our Village." "Well ... What are you WAITING FOR!?" Islo shouted back! After talking for a brief second, he put the device back into his pocket, as he tip toed closer to the Queen. In just a few seconds, she was tied up with rope and brought back to the Kingdom of Aqam. Meanwhile, Damen had been ruffling through all the letters he had received from his Villagers. An hour later, he had still been skimming the documents. Then he spotted one that seemed to be in a gold envelope. Damen opened the piece of paper, then quickly read the words: "Hello, Damen. We have kidnapped your dear Queen, Kaberi. And If you would like to get her back, I suggest you hand over the Jewel of the East which will help us control this land. As you may know, we have been searching for it for years. And in which, we never had the clue that you might have hidden it in your Castle. We know you have this valuable item and we want it stat! It's either that, or we shall execute your precious Queen and you will never have the chance to say farewell. I hope you will make the right decision and turn it over for her dear life. He had finished reading the letter and gasped in fear, "This has to be some kind of prank! This can't be happening! I can't believe they would do that to Kaberi! In spite of those awful creatures, I demand a battle in 3 days, at noon sharp! There is nothing quite enough for them, is there?"

Victory Battle ~ Part 2

The next day, Damen had called up Islo and informed him about the battle. The village of Aqam had accepted their offer to return Kaberi back to home if they won. But, if not, he would have to hand over the Jewel of the East. Along, with Kaberi. As a few hours past, it was time to practice for the battle. All the knights of Adeck lined up facing forward, with Limberk in front. Damen walked up and down the isle of knights, as he gave them each assigned tasks. First up to battle, was Wock and Olk. They faced in mirror position, as the Emperor shouted, "On Guard!" They pulled out their swords and started fighting. In the first round, Wock had knocked Olk to the ground. But, he quickly got up on his feet. In the second round, they were battling for about an hour, when Wock swung his sword across Olk's arm. Soon enough, an ambulance came to treat him. Olk had been hurt badly and would be staying in the hospital for 4 - 5 days. Damen was upset due to losing one of the best member's for the battle. In the meantime, Tolyer had been writing in his hut, when he quickly found out about the huge tournament coming up. He dropped his notebook and raced to Islo's Kingdom. He sneaked inside the back door and ran up to the top floor, where Islo usually is this time of day. He shouted, "SIR ISLO!" The Emperor's heart skipped a beat, "My my. What do you need peasant?" Tolyer was out of breathe. A few minutes later, he was down on his knees begging to be a part of the Knights Team to battle with the Adecks'. "But, Sir! Please, I have amazing skills! It would do me an honor to compete!" He stated. Islo shook his head, and shooed him out of his castle. Tolyer felt worthless now that it was the 10th time he asked to be a part of something big. In Islo's view, Tolyer was nothing. But, was he really?!

Victory Battle ~ Part 3

The day before the battle, Damen had woken up still thinking about a replacement for Olk. He was worried that they would lose the battle, along with departure from Kaberi and the Jewel of the East, forever. He prayed to win the tournament for the land's sake. And especially for the dear life of his beloved queen. In the meanwhile, Tolyer went to visit the land of Adeck to see what it was like. He quickly stopped at a Swords Shop. He started skimming up and down for the perfect weapon to buy. Soon enough, he found a silver and gold blade. His eyes widened as he stared at the item. He then, looked at the price tag and gasped, "Five Hundred Gold!" At the moment, Damen was going to go down to the Village of Adeck to search for a new member of his troop as he stumbled across a notebook full of drawings. He picked the book up and looked at the name, "Belonging to Tolyer Lynn." Damen stuffed it in his bag as he headed south for his Village. A thought came across his mind to stop at the Swords Shop to pick up a brand new sword for his new member to use. As he made his way through the crowd, he quickly glanced at a silver and gold blade, much like the one Tolyer saw. He reached for it slowly, as another hand toppled on his. The two both looked up at each other as they quickly took their hands off the weapon. Damen said, "Why hello. Are you looking to buy this?" Tolyer nodded softly as he was too shy to speak. Damen quickly nodded back as he handed the weapon gently to Tolyer. He pushed the item back. "Thank you kind Sir, but I do not enough enough gold for it." Damen reached inside his bag and handed back enough money to pay for it. Tolyer thanked him as he looked down. He took a glimpse of inside the Emperor's bag. Damen stated, "Is there a problem?" Tolyer pointed, "That. That notebook. It's quite like mine." Emperor Damen reached down and handed the book to him, "Is this yours?" Tolyer opened the book and flipped the pages, "Yes! Thank you." "To say, these are some wonderful drawing of yours." The Emperor stated. Then, a few seconds past, as they didn't speak. Damen quickly continued the conversation, "Well, I better get going! I have to find a new member for my Knights Team." He turned and walked away. Tolyer shouted, "Wait! Did you just say ... Knights Team?" Damen turned back, "Yes. In fact, I did. I am looking for someone to fill in a member of mine that got hurt. Have any ideas?" Tolyer could barely speak, "I, I could join!" The Emperor noted, "But, aren't you from Aqam's Village?" Tolyer looked down and spoke, "Sir Islo is not interested in me, whatsoever. If I can, it would be an honor to join your team!" Damen smiled, "Let's see what you got!" He handed him a sword. Tolyer pretended as if he was fighting for real. The Emperor was shocked, "You have some great skills there! And it would do me a great favor, if you would join my team." They both shook hands and set off for practice. The team battled for what seemed like a long time until they were ready. Then, they all set off to get some sleep for the big event tomorrow.

Victory Battle ~ Part 4

The next morning, Islo woke up and got ready for the huge tournament. As he headed down to Adeck, he saw the Villagers from both, Adeck and Aqam that were gathered at the battle field to watch the big event! He walked forward to find a seat. Then he glanced over at his team and then glanced at the other. His heart skipped a beat. "Tolyer!?" He shouted. Tolyer made his way to Islo, and said, "Did you need me?" Islo got mad, "How could YOU betray us, joining the other team?" Tolyer smiled, "The question you should be asking is why you betrayed us. I did not do anything to you. You hated me, and in return I shall give you unkindness, same as you did to me a long time ago. This is my moment to show what I am made of, and you can't stop me!" Then he turned and walked away. Islo was shocked because no one had ever stood up to him like that before. It truly made him think. Then the knights got in their places when the horn was about to blow. Damen quickly raced over and whispered to his team, "You all got this! Now go get em' guys! :)" Then the horn blew! Dust was flying everywhere! All the villagers shouted, "GO GO GO!" Tolyer fought Morq, as they were battling to their death! Morq swung his sword underneath his enemy's feet. Tolyer jumped and he threw a bomb towards his way! Then Kike, the leader of the Aqam's Team, raced towards Limberk while he wasn't watching. And, At the moment when Kike was about to swing his weapon, Limberk turned around and stabbed him in the chest! The crowd shouted wildly! "Come on Aqams'! Come on Adecks'!" Wock took on Poll with a grenade, as all the Aqams' had died off. Then the last person that they had to fight, was Sir Islo. Islo made his way towards the field from his seat. Then they got into positions. And the crowd counted, "One, Two, Three! CHARGE!" Both sides ran as fast as they could as the Adecks' team pointed their swords together and had executed, Islo. They had won! Soon enough, Kaberi and the Jewel were safe. And since Islo was now dead, Tolyer became the ruler of Aqam. There was no more fighting or violence made between the two Villages. And they all lived happily ever after!
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+1 by Templar, Cheep, ChocoCow, iKaitlyn and 6 others

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2nd August 2014, 03:42 PM

Wow you might even get the badge great story.
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+1 by lylance and Gerch3
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2nd August 2014, 03:58 PM

This must be the longest and one of the best snaildom stories I've ever read. +1
~Angi :)
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11th August 2014, 02:20 AM

Wow that story was great good job!
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11th August 2014, 03:36 PM

Awesome story! I really liked it. The names and the whole story is very creative too.
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11th August 2014, 04:17 PM

Brilliant! One of the best stories I have ever read. Damen should add a badge named 'Story Teller' and you should get that badge because you type lots of stories (I think). -Poptropica10
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16th August 2014, 03:50 AM

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