Adawg And Gamer Teleported To An Underground Base In A Big Bottle An "Unknown Person" Said "We Are Going To Test Some Things On You Dont Worry Its Not Harsh" IndigoPalace Said "Oh Yes Its Not Harsh" Adawg And Gamer Got Zapped "Unknown Person" Said " We Need To Upgrade This Damn Machine" 2 Hours Of Testing "Unknown Person" Said You Can Get Out Now We Are Done Removing Injuries, Adawg Said "Thank Godness" Gamer Falled On His Bed And Sleeped Damen Walked And Said "H-Hello" IndigoPalace Said "Damen, What Happened We Were Looking For You Days" Damen Said "Well I Was Kidnapped,Puched And Stabbed But Luckily I Survived And Got Home Bleeding "Unknown Person" Said Well Okay Go In To The Machine We Will Test Something.

Terry91 Waked Up And Said "Uh.. My H-Head Hurts" Mickey Said "Dont You Remember? You Were Put In My Car And Were Punched With A Bat" Terry Said "Oh.." Mickey Said "The Horror Beggins"

To Be Continued..

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