20th September 2014
2 views
2 views
Snaildom Story ~Starwolf
Member
2,178 posts
3,829
Seen 30th November 2021
Inferno
20th September 2014, 05:39 PM
Hello Users.
Today I am posting a story. But it's not like a chapter book. It's a Snaildom Story! I'm not sure if the Badges are still running on but I wanted to make my very own Snaildom Story. This story was made by me and I wanted to make it because I have been planning to for sometime now. So I am now finishing it up by posting it on the community! So if you like the story you can be sure to click the amazing and nice simple +1 button. A like for this post would mean a lot because it shows that you really like my story. Also it shows me that I have spent a long long time writing and rewording many words and errors on a small piece of paper. If you dislike the story you can click the simple -1. A dislike is upsetting on a post that I have made. But it is okay because you can always get the like and get back on track with your Reputation once again. You can choose your opinion on what you should press. But anyways hope you enjoy this post!
~Starwolf Your Real And True Wolf Queen By Heart~ 
One Day Long Long ago. There was a small and rather unique boy. His name was Damen. Damen was a boy who had many beliefs and hopes and dreams as he started growing. He wanted to make a amazing and world class Kingdom. Nobody else wanted to do that in his family. Damen wanted to pursue what he set and wanted to conquer. As he grew up he made many friends and acquaintances. But there was one person who hated Damen and wanted to stop. His name was Mickey. Mickey absolutely wanted to stop Damen from reaching his goals. Mickey always taunted and tried to stop and pull down Damen from his goals. But Damen never stopped and always rolled of the words that Mickey always said to him. So one day Damen went to the school. "Snaildom School For Future Kingdoms" Damen saw the paper and really wanted to go in. He would never ever stop talking about it. Thats pretty much what he could even think of talking about. He showed his Mom and Dad. He was sure to Beg them to go. After a while his parents though about it and sad these words. "Young Dear Damen. We have seen many goals you have set throughout the times we have known you. So we though about it. And we will let you go." Damen was so happy he cried tears of joy. So when Damen want to Snaildom School For Future Kingdoms. Suddenly he saw his enemy Mickey. Mickey gave Damen his smiling and cold hearted wave. He and Mickey always got partnered up for such activities and they had separate taste in everything. They always had to do Rock Paper Scissors to decide who would win. And they would never admit defeat. So normally they had to combine there ideas into one! On the final day both Damen and Mickey passed and got there certificates that they passed. And once Damen got home he started to Pack up some Backpacks. He told all his relatives that he was leaving and going to go out on a Journey so he could make his very first Kingdom. Then Mickey was spying on Damen and Mickey was secretly getting ready to pack up. Damen went out on his Journey and Mickey was on Damen's tail when Damen never knew. So Mickey got tired and feel asleep. There was two Paths and Damen choose a path and Mickey did not know what to choose. He choose the separate and wrong path. They both found a perfect place to make a Kingdom. Damen put his Kingdom training experience and made the best Kingdom he could ever think of. And he went back home and set posters and advertisements for his Kingdom. And Mickey did the same. Damen caught Mickey and they argued with each other and got into a big conflict. And Damen confessed many things that caused Mickey to punch him. And Mickey just walked away. And Damen started his arch enemy and then they always were in Competitions and Competed against each other. And they always wanted to fight against one another. After awhile they grew up and made there full Kingdom. Damen had Healers, Guards, Knights, Protectors, Fighters, A Princess, A Prince. And Damen was also married. His wife was a Beautiful girl and her name was Lila. They had children and were crowned Princess and Prince. There children's names were Kathy and Max. Damen's Kingdom was light and they were always happy and loved to smile. While Mickey's Kingdom was Dark and always plotted plans and had one attack ready to come. The attack was planned on December 24th 2000. They had a spy but there spy was held hostage tortured and then he would not tell information and was killed in the process. So they had to fight hands on and use there information themselves. The protectors were being trained to fight. Lila had to take Kathy and Max to his old home. Damen was set up and was ready to fight his nemesis. The Fighters were placed alongside the Protectors. His Guards were up hiding beside the Protectors. The Healers were deployed with The Powerful Diamond ores that could block off any blast of Dark so they can hopefully heal the fallen. But Mickey blocked off Healing spells secretly. And the Battle came. Blasts of Spells Fallen Dark and Light were everywhere. But the true Battle Was Damen and Mickey. Many Blasts and Thunder like sounds Banged up the Kingdom. After many Hours of Light and Dark flashing up the sky. And suddenly Damen gave off his most powerful blast and Banished Mickey in a Light heaven and Mickey was Banished. AFter awhile Lila, Max, and Kathy did not comeback. He brung Healers with him to his old home. And when he arrived in his Future Base that he made as a young child. And he saw something that blasted him into Tears. He saw Lila, Max, and Kathy. Dead. He was sad that when he did the funeral he said the most powerful words he could. the Healers spells did not work before he had to do a funeral. He said powerful words his Friends, Family, and Loved ones would never forget. Damen later on did not Marry or Date once again. He always Dreamed to see Lila again and he did in his dreams and met up with his family in his dreams to. Damen lived a happy life and passed at the age of 71.
Wizard 
Sushi 
Member
2,178 posts
3,829
Seen 30th November 2021
Master
745 posts
988
Seen 29th August 2020
21st September 2014, 12:52 AM
Spectacular story, my dear. This post was written quite well and I believe many will enjoy reading it. There were many captivating parts included in this chapter and I for one, think you deserve the 'Writer's Badge', as it seems as if you're a pro already. In addition, I admire how you added all the details you needed, and there was action in each section, which is what I think makes your discussion unique, apart from other Snaildom adventures. I absolutely loved all of the battling, and how you made it come to life within our minds. I know there are many amazing tales out there, yet I think this is one of the most attention-grabbing story-lines you are able to read. In conclusion, this was a very inspiring story and was definitely worth my time, as I believe others will strongly agree. And hopefully we all will see you write another one day.
SYRUP ON POUTINE
Member
812 posts
1,648
Seen 16th August 2021
21st September 2014, 09:05 AM
This was a great, well written story! I really enjoyed reading it!
Your hand fits in mine like it's made just for me
But bear this mind it was meant to be
And I'm joining up the dots with the freckles on your cheeks
And it all makes sense to me
I know you've never loved the crinkles by your eyes when you smile
You've never loved your stomach or your thighs
The dimples in your back at the bottom of your spine
But I'll love them endlessly
I won't let these little things slip out of my mouth
But if I do, it's you, oh it's you, they add up to
I'm in love with you and all these little things
You can't go to bed without a cup of tea
Maybe that's the reason that you talk in your sleep
And all those conversations are the secrets that I keep
Though it makes no sense to me
I know you've never loved the sound of your voice on tape
You never want to know how much you weigh
You still have to squeeze into your jeans
But you're perfect to me
I won't let these little things slips out of my mouth
But if it's true, it's you, it's you, they add up to
I'm in love with you and all these little things
You never love yourself half as much as I love you
You'll never treat yourself right darling but I want you to
If I let you know, I'm here for you
Maybe you'll love yourself like I love you oh
I've just let these little things slip out of my mouth
Because it's you, oh it's you, it's you they add up to
And I'm in love with you (all these little things)
I won't let these little things slip out of my mouth
But if it's true, it's you, it's you they add up to
I'm in love with you, and all your little things
I'm in love with 1D and all Niall's little things
But bear this mind it was meant to be
And I'm joining up the dots with the freckles on your cheeks
And it all makes sense to me
I know you've never loved the crinkles by your eyes when you smile
You've never loved your stomach or your thighs
The dimples in your back at the bottom of your spine
But I'll love them endlessly
I won't let these little things slip out of my mouth
But if I do, it's you, oh it's you, they add up to
I'm in love with you and all these little things
You can't go to bed without a cup of tea
Maybe that's the reason that you talk in your sleep
And all those conversations are the secrets that I keep
Though it makes no sense to me
I know you've never loved the sound of your voice on tape
You never want to know how much you weigh
You still have to squeeze into your jeans
But you're perfect to me
I won't let these little things slips out of my mouth
But if it's true, it's you, it's you, they add up to
I'm in love with you and all these little things
You never love yourself half as much as I love you
You'll never treat yourself right darling but I want you to
If I let you know, I'm here for you
Maybe you'll love yourself like I love you oh
I've just let these little things slip out of my mouth
Because it's you, oh it's you, it's you they add up to
And I'm in love with you (all these little things)
I won't let these little things slip out of my mouth
But if it's true, it's you, it's you they add up to
I'm in love with you, and all your little things
I'm in love with 1D and all Niall's little things