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4th October 2014, 11:12 PM
One cold night, Ella the Snail was walking around. She turned and looked at ads. And she was walking home with her sister Katie. K-katie whispered Ella. What? Said Katie. Im scared I wanna go come! Cried Ella. Ugh we are hold on Ella. Ella walked closer too Katie. She looked at a store ad it was big and glittery It said Snail Care snail share. Huh? Said Ella. Katie grabbed Ella. Lets go brat! Said Katie. As they went into the shell. Its cozy in here! 
Said Ella. Ok blah blah! Said Katie. Just be quiet and go too sleep! Ok ok! Said Ella grumpy. As Ella and Katie went too sleep. Ella felt a tingle. Ow! She said. She sneaked out off her room. And saw Katie sleeping. Oh Katie -_- Said Ella. And you thought I was the bad one. You can say it all you want! -_- Ella ran out off the shell. And took off fast as lightning. She ran pasted The Market Village! She even pasted The West Village. Then she was alone. She pulled down her hood and looked around. Then it was silent. All she could hear was water dropping. Im trapped said Ella. As she started climbing the mine rocks. As she was climbing she remembered something. She remember her mom was staying at a hotel! :o And Katie was in charge! Then all of a sudden Ella grinned. Once she see's me gone! Katie will get grounded forever. Then she saw a shadowy figure. Hi? Said Ella. It just stood there. It was cotton quiet. Then he whispered. Now now, Come with me Child. Ok???? Said Ella following him. Then he grabbed her. And Ella fell and fainted. At the shell Katie woke up. Good morning Ella! She shouted. There was no sound. Um Ella?! She said. No more Good Mornings I see! Groaned Katie. Im going ground you so hard! Stomped Katie. As she went into the room she gasped. ELLA! 
Ella was on the bed with her shell off! And there was a note. It said Your too late. Your not too great. Say goodnight. As Katie turned she saw a figure. Then it was the end. And that shell is haunted. And Ella and Katie was no where too be seen. Goodnight and sleep tight.
Wintersummer
Said Ella. Ok blah blah! Said Katie. Just be quiet and go too sleep! Ok ok! Said Ella grumpy. As Ella and Katie went too sleep. Ella felt a tingle. Ow! She said. She sneaked out off her room. And saw Katie sleeping. Oh Katie -_- Said Ella. And you thought I was the bad one. You can say it all you want! -_- Ella ran out off the shell. And took off fast as lightning. She ran pasted The Market Village! She even pasted The West Village. Then she was alone. She pulled down her hood and looked around. Then it was silent. All she could hear was water dropping. Im trapped said Ella. As she started climbing the mine rocks. As she was climbing she remembered something. She remember her mom was staying at a hotel! :o And Katie was in charge! Then all of a sudden Ella grinned. Once she see's me gone! Katie will get grounded forever. Then she saw a shadowy figure. Hi? Said Ella. It just stood there. It was cotton quiet. Then he whispered. Now now, Come with me Child. Ok???? Said Ella following him. Then he grabbed her. And Ella fell and fainted. At the shell Katie woke up. Good morning Ella! She shouted. There was no sound. Um Ella?! She said. No more Good Mornings I see! Groaned Katie. Im going ground you so hard! Stomped Katie. As she went into the room she gasped. ELLA! Ella was on the bed with her shell off! And there was a note. It said Your too late. Your not too great. Say goodnight. As Katie turned she saw a figure. Then it was the end. And that shell is haunted. And Ella and Katie was no where too be seen. Goodnight and sleep tight. Wintersummer 
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Khrysalis
5th October 2014, 02:03 PM
I really enjoyed this, great story! +1
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