the snaildom war

Once there was a snail named damen,he was a king! He loves tobelrone. He had a throne made out of tobelrone! One day there was a knight that went to damenspike throne and said "damen sir Bh has protested a war on us!!!!!!!" Damen was shocked!"send every knight you can we have to stop Bh!!!" Damen was furious! "Right away sir" said the knight. The knight ran to the knight base and told everyone.the knights bombed the Bh's base!! But the leader escaped and ran to the snaildom thrones! Set off a stink bomb and made the tobelrone nasty "this time it's personal"said damen. Damen ran to the leader of Bh and said "u better stop or i won't be nice" the Bh leader didn't listen he Still attacked snaildom. Damen was so mad he made a sword out of nasty crusty tobelrone.it was hard as rock.damen said "prepare to be broken" the leader of Bh was scared! He said u can stop calling me Bh leader! My names is carte it's French! Ok said damen "carte prepare to die!" "No way" said carte.they fought and fought untill damen won!!! Damen got a supplienof tobelrone and carte was put in jail and snaildom was back to its peaceful self
The end! I hope u like it

Nice story!

Amazing story. I think it was very creative. 1+ (:
Sarah

Ty all I am hoping it will be posted as a book on snaildom but we will see