17th October 2014
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Snaildom is at War ~Crowflying

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Christ is King
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17th October 2014, 04:39 PM

Part 1: Snaildom WW1
Once upon a time, in a kingdom far, far, away, lived a Snail named Tommy. Tommy always wanted to become a great prince. Everyone knew that was not going to happen. He was too young and dumb. But one person was always there for him. His name was Damen. He was the Emperor of Snaildom. Tommy thought of Damen as his father. One day, Damen said to Tommy, "You need to prove you will be worthy of prince. But, Tommy wondered "How?" In the afternoon, Bp28 came rushing up to Damen and said "Damen! Damen! We have reports the a BH has killed one of our snails!" Damen said to Bp28, "Get the knights! We are going to war!"

Part 2: Tommy gets kidnapped
Tommy was scared and ran into his bedroom. He went under the bed and started crying. Damen came into the room and said, "Tommy, Don't be scared. Bp28 has trained his knights very well. They will destroy the BH." Tommy had mixed emotions. Damen then said, "Don't worry, I'm here for you." They hugged, when Damen's phone started to ring. Tommy knew Damen had to go. Damen said "I won't be gone for that long. Stay here!" He rushed out of the room and locked the door so no one would get in. But that didn't stop the BH. One of the men broke open the door with an axe. He grabbed Tommy and said "You're coming with me!"

Part 3: Damen gets mad
When Damen came back, He saw Tommy was gone. The door's lock was broken. He knew something must have happened to Tommy. He looked out the window and saw a BH running to a dark forest. Damen followed him, making sure the BH didn't see him. But unfortunately, Damen was spotted. The BH snail grabbed his gun and said "Don't come any closer or this snail gets it!" Damen was really mad and shot the snail's head off. He ran over to Tommy and they hugged. "I should have stayed with you Tommy." said Damen. "It's okay Damen." said Tommy. Damen said "Call me dad." The next day, the BH were defeated and never came back to Snaildom. The End!
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17th October 2014, 05:55 PM

Wow you inspire me every day maybe your story should be put in snaildom like mine was
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MERRY CHRISTMAS

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18th October 2014, 02:05 PM

Quote:
Wow you inspire me every day maybe your story should be put in snaildom like mine was
Yourse got put in Snaildom because you got the Snaildom Story Badge.
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18th October 2014, 02:18 PM

Great story.


-Jesse
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24th October 2014, 11:25 PM

Loved reading you story, Crowflying! +1 :)
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24th October 2014, 11:29 PM

Great story! I loved it!


~Keep Skipping On!
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24th October 2014, 11:53 PM

Nice story, entertaining to read.
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Christ is King
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24th October 2014, 11:55 PM

Thank you everyone. I love feedback. :)
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25th October 2014, 06:34 AM

Awesome story! I really enjoyed it!

~Jilly~
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