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Battle for the New Era!

Made by Zeternal in Snaildom

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18th October 2014, 09:37 PM

Battle for the New Era! (Whole story!)


Chapter 1: Evil Rises

Once upon a time, there lived a kingdom named Snaildom. It was in it's beginning era, still! Everyone was living happily in their new Snaildom kingdom! All users were doing their part, and everything was good! Until...

There lived an unknown citizen, who was always rich, and had everything. But then, an anonymous force had stolen all his wealth and gold. The unknown citizen had a deal with the evil forces, then...

At exactly Thursday 12:00 AM, Sir Zeternal and Detective Sergeant Hashir went to the Shadow Woods to find the so called missing knight, from the rumors. Just then there was a rustling in the trees... "I wonder who could that be..." said Zeternal. "Let's check it out!", replied Hashir. Just then, Adawg jumped out of the bushes! I replied in a relieved mood "Phew, Adawg!". Adawg replied "I heard you guys were checking out this area, may I help?". "You may help with the investigation!", I replied. "Whoo!!", Adawg exclaimed! Just then, a shadow teleported back and forth. Hashir got out his flashlight and flashed it at the shadow. "Phew, it's only a shell!", I replied. "Umm... IT'S NOT!!!!", Hashir exclaimed! The shell started growing, and mutating like a monster, it grew faster than the speed of light! I got out my sword, and slayed the legendary shadow. "Phew! Let's never come here again guys, it is spooky.", Hashir replied.

The next day, the 3 reported their findings to Damen. Damen had ordered the moderators, dets, and knights to guard every part of Snaildom.

Later in the same time the 3 boys had found the mysterious shadows, the trusted guardians of the shadows Luke and Zack were on strong defense. Then, Luke had sought a dark black shell. He whispered to Zack, "Do you have any idea what that is?". Luke took out his sword, against this mysterious shell. Zack helped Luke slay the evil, but it was not enough! But then, PenguinDSC and Ninja appeared out of NOWHERE and slayed the legendary evil shell together! PenguinDSC had posted a global saying that an evil force was defeated! Everyone arrived including Hashir, Zeternal, Adawg, SophieJasper, Bread, Bp, Ninja, Studly and Chex!

Just then, everyone strangely took a nap on thee cold, hard, forest.

6 hours later, everyone at the scene said this "ALL OF SNAILDOM WILL DIE, NOTHING WILL BE LEFT, NO ONE WILL BE SPARED! MWHAHAHAHAHAHA!". Then everyone woke up from the hypnosis, and noticed that the woods were frozen! We all though "Oh no!". Then, Zeternal finally realized this in his mind "The end of an era, a battle against evil.".

Chapter 2: Secrets unlocked.

1 month has passed after the strange freezing of the shadow woods. For days the crew (Zeternal, Hashir, Adawg, StudlyCP, Chex, Bread, Bp28, PenguinDSC, SophieJasper, Ninja, Luke, and Zack) have been investigating, and wondering who and what froze the shadow woods.

Finally on the 7th of December, PenguinDSC had checked the logs of Snaildom. He claimed there to be a missing log. Hashir had rushed to the computer logs to check it out. He was surprised with the vast results! On the computer log, Hashir told PenguinDSC to execute the command 'allLogs.show->allUsers'. Once PenguinDSC had typed in the command line in the computer log, every user log showed. The 2 were shocked with the results. They had finally found out the secrets of the evil forces.

At 6:00 AM the next day, a meeting was discussed with the crew. PenguinDSC and Hashir had told the crew members their findings. Zeternal had said "Woah woah, wait! The freezing and possession was just the start?! They are gonna posses more?! We need to get to the bottom of this guys! I have a fellow friend that can help". That morning, Zeternal called Bob, while he was still getting ready.

Zeternal: *calls Bob*
Bob: *picks up phone*
Zeternal: We need your help stat! We tracked down that an anonymous evil force has been raiding Snaildom! You are a former det, right?
Bob: Yeah, I am a former det! *puts on det uniform* DET BOB TO DA RESCUE!

After that phone call, all of a sudden Zeternal had been summoned to a mysterious iceghost base! He exclaimed "Woah, where am I?!". One very deep voice replied "Evil, child. My my, it's the end of an era. Your crew is outdated, and we know that you know about us. >:D". After the 'us' word, Zeternal was finished, no longer to be found.

After that mysterious incident, PenguinDSC had taken his place as leader. He had lead the team amazingly. Once he was leader, he ordered Hashir and Adawg to find traces of Zeternal, and the evil. PenguinDSC had ordered Bp, Luke, and Chex to guard, and he had given them swords for defense. Then, Penguin had welcomed CPManiac to the team! Finally, he ordered the rest to spread out, and search.

When he had said that final command, THE BATTLE HAD BEGUN!

Chapter 3: Battle begins!

Iceghosts, and Blackhawks appeared out of NOWHERE! The Snaildom kingdom had been flooding with evil forces. By 1 second, the whole empire was FROZEN. All citizens died, except for the crew! PenguinDSC used his fire of power and light to melt and destroy the Iceghosts and Blackhawks! However that was not enough. 1,000,000,000 more came! It took hours and hours to melt them. The crew realized they were running out of power. PenguinDSC had fainted due to too much power used. Bp28 had successfully burned out most of them without losing power! Bp had donated his power to Penguin, and Penguin's power was successfully returned! CPManiac used his power to knock out the Blackhawks. Then he realized he had completely unlimited power and energy! CPManiac had donated some of his energy to Ninja, and Ninja used his ninja moves to destroy the IG and BH! Finally, ALL used a secret power inside themselves, to get rid of all evil forces. Every evil force was wiped out, a burst exploded to bring it back to normal! Nothing was frozen, no evil lurked, everything was peaceful once again!

Chapter 4: Peaceful once again! New era!

Zeternal had returned, everyone was returned, and many happy returned. Damen had summoned all of us to court for an important meeting. He had claimed the following "Greetings everyone. Thank you guys for destroying the evil forces. All evil has returned, a new era had been born! I now officially call this era, the peaceful era!". Everyone cheered as he announced that! Now Snaildom was peaceful once again, everyone was happy once again! Everyone in the Snaildom Kingdom lived HAPPILY EVER AFTER!

THE END!
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Hello, I hope you have enjoyed the story! Please note this is the whole story! By the way, the moral is that with a tiny bit of energy, you can change the world! :D
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18th October 2014, 09:39 PM

Wow, you're really good at making stories, Zeternal! Love the story. Very professional and organized. :) +1
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18th October 2014, 09:40 PM

I liked this story! Also, will you be writing more stories soon? :3
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18th October 2014, 09:44 PM

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Wow, you're really good at making stories, Zeternal! Love the story. Very professional and organized. +1
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I liked this story! Also, will you be writing more stories soon?

Thank you guys, it took long to make. :D I might be making more stories soon! ;)
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Knights Army! More info: http://forums.damenspike.com/KnightsArmy Thanks Away/Wisp for the signature! :D
Thanks Yoyo for le awesome comic! :D Thanks Sampopxxx for the signature! :D Thanks suzy for the boss signature! :D
Thanks Lloyd for dis sig! ;)
Behold the sig of 2015!! Thanks Foxeh!!
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18th October 2014, 09:48 PM

I wish I was in it... :(... LOL

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18th October 2014, 09:50 PM

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You are the last one I added!

If you wanted to be added, sorry folks! Maybe next time. ;)
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18th October 2014, 10:11 PM

Awesome story. I really liked the story, I love the long ones, they take a while to read, but they are a while worth it. ;)
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18th October 2014, 11:42 PM

I really like this story Please Keep making more.
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