It was a sunny day in snaildom everyone was having a good time playing out side it was a Saturday witch means soccer on tv I watched tv for a while I was watching the soccer game when my team won by 10-9 I love the green team I was eating some popcorn when something caught my eye it looked like ice I thought I just saw stuff so I kept watching tv when I went to open the door and it wouldn't open I saw that it was frozen I couldn't get it open still when I had to jump out of the window and go to the shop to get a hammer to break the ice I came back and broak the ice and went to watch more tv I ate lunch and then I went to the store I went there and saw ice all over the place and I asked what happened here they sayed they saw something blue and disappeared and then there was ice all over the place can I help? I asked helped the man when I saw this note I went to see what it was and it was backwards it sayed mi anog teg ouy I did not know what it sayed but I think it say im gona get you I saw a path of ice and I followed it it took me by a wall it must be a ghost I sayed but why ice? then I came up with it ice ghost I went to tell and then it was all over the news but then something happened chapter 2 coming soon and plz put this on a book on snaildom like if you want part 2

Nice story! u can use some full stops and commas cuz i was out of breath while reading and by that ppl wil understand the story even better! +1!