Later on in the day Breezepaw and his mentor and his brother longpaw and his mentor took us a tour of the clan territory after leaping threw a few bramble bushes he ended up at this strange smelling place Batbranch mews "this is the border to us and nightclan" then he adds once he sees a potrol " we are friends with their clan so no need to attack" whispers to longpaw "I don't know how they can survive In such a cold moorland." longpaw replies "they proubly have really thick pelts" batbrach turned to me and mew "yes indeed they have thick pelts" thinks how can he hear me that good? Stonefang meows "ok lets get a move on" he flicks his tail for us to follow a few moments later we got to the next border a sandy moorland but not cold but hot batbranch mews "this is desert clan" his mew turns to a growl "they aren't to friendly" batbranch flicks his tail and points his nose over where four trees are "this is where we are going tonight for a gathering" I nodded and mews "I'm hungry when will we learn to hunt?" his mentor lets out a morrow of laughter as they paded back to camp for the gathering.

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