We got back home swiftpaw came runing up to me mews "How was the battle?"
i looked at my sister and meowd "it was good we have won" suddenly he heard a screech.... an eagles screech it came toward us and quickly took swiftpaw yowls in pain as he see his sister die he paded to badgerstar meows in grief "swiftkit ... was tooken by a eagle" my father paused and looked at my grief showed in his eyes i meows to my father "i know how much this means to you loseing one of your kits" badgerstar meows back "its okay young one its not your fault" flatness his ears badgerstars words did not help at all thinks im breezepaw i was named after my mothers prefix I must tell her also.

Ah, that's so sad I feel bad for her! ;c Anyway, nice story check out mine!

i did its nice

Cool, I saw your comment! Im trying to get 100 posts today!!!!!

Also, im making part 10 right now!

i gtg for a while ill make 10 later

and btw at ep 50 he becomes a warrior

Omg, I cant wait for part 10 im a big warrior fan you know!