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1st November 2013, 05:15 PM
Chapter 1
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Once upon a time, to penguins were born as twins. They always got into fights, and never liked anything about the other. One was good, and one was evil. The good penguin was called, Felix, and the bad one was called Snape. The thing they were really annoyed about, was that they were twins, but Snape actually came out first.
One day, there mother died, 12 months exactly after their father had died, they became orphans. The orphanage owner was called Miss Bottomfeeder, the grouchiest penguin of all Old CP. She had one cane in her hand, and a belt around her waste.
Snape never understood the matter of consequences, and was always doing things that got him in DEEP trouble, SO deep, that it involved Miss Bottomfeeder's cane and belt.
Felix, on the other hand, was following the rules perfectly, but Miss Bottomfeeder seemed to enjoy beating children, and punished Felix for being a "goody-two-shoes".
The twins decided they would try to escape Miss Bottomfeeder's orphanage, and be free
One day, there mother died, 12 months exactly after their father had died, they became orphans. The orphanage owner was called Miss Bottomfeeder, the grouchiest penguin of all Old CP. She had one cane in her hand, and a belt around her waste.
Snape never understood the matter of consequences, and was always doing things that got him in DEEP trouble, SO deep, that it involved Miss Bottomfeeder's cane and belt.
Felix, on the other hand, was following the rules perfectly, but Miss Bottomfeeder seemed to enjoy beating children, and punished Felix for being a "goody-two-shoes".
The twins decided they would try to escape Miss Bottomfeeder's orphanage, and be free
Next chapter, next week...
1st November 2013, 05:38 PM
cool it is very cool
1st November 2013, 06:06 PM
(psst: Lone, please don't triple-post, it makes discussions a bit messy. thanks, sorry if this post seems harsh, I didn't mean it to go that way. )
-lowons.
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And because Pickle1020 said that Bob 'fitted me',
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And because Pickle1020 said that Bob 'fitted me',
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1st November 2013, 07:16 PM
Continuing for Lone...
Chapter 2
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Chapter 2
Snape thought up the idea of a distraction and thought Felix should take part. At first, Felix said,"No way!" But his brother threatened him,
"You will do as I say or I will leave you here to be beaten by the dreaded, Miss Bottomfeeder!" Snape snapped.
"OK, then," Felix said, regretting it.
Snape and Felix thought up a clever idea: Snape look under the door mat for a spare key, he found it, luckily. He told Felix to create the distraction upstairs, away from Snape. Felix didn't want to make Snape angry, and obeyed his command. He slowly dragged himself over to Miss Bottomfeeder, and said, "M-m-miss Bottomfeeder?"
"What do you want, you little waste of space?!" Miss Bottomfeeder yelled at him, sending out spittle with every word,
"I-I-I lost my phone, Miss Bottomfeeder,"
"Well, you little worm, I could, but I shan't, help you, find your stupid phone, who you gonna call, mummy and daddy? THEY ARE DEAD!"
Felix felt a tear coming down his right eye, "I-I-I know M-m-miss Bottomfeeder, please d-d-don't remind m-m-me,"
"So, you don't want me to remind you, aye?"
"Y-y-yes, Miss Bottomfeeder,"
"GET OUT OF MY SIGHT!"
Felix fled to the door, where Snape should've been. Felix realized that Snape had already gone, and Felix was now the only child there...
"You will do as I say or I will leave you here to be beaten by the dreaded, Miss Bottomfeeder!" Snape snapped.
"OK, then," Felix said, regretting it.
Snape and Felix thought up a clever idea: Snape look under the door mat for a spare key, he found it, luckily. He told Felix to create the distraction upstairs, away from Snape. Felix didn't want to make Snape angry, and obeyed his command. He slowly dragged himself over to Miss Bottomfeeder, and said, "M-m-miss Bottomfeeder?"
"What do you want, you little waste of space?!" Miss Bottomfeeder yelled at him, sending out spittle with every word,
"I-I-I lost my phone, Miss Bottomfeeder,"
"Well, you little worm, I could, but I shan't, help you, find your stupid phone, who you gonna call, mummy and daddy? THEY ARE DEAD!"
Felix felt a tear coming down his right eye, "I-I-I know M-m-miss Bottomfeeder, please d-d-don't remind m-m-me,"
"So, you don't want me to remind you, aye?"
"Y-y-yes, Miss Bottomfeeder,"
"GET OUT OF MY SIGHT!"
Felix fled to the door, where Snape should've been. Felix realized that Snape had already gone, and Felix was now the only child there...
Next chapter, next week...
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1st November 2013, 08:48 PM
Well, you should copy, paste, and publish the book on the forum when you are done, and put all the chapter's together, and have an author's note, and an about the author if you want.
And I love how you make these stories, they are really creative!
Poor Felix, all alone with the dreaded Miss Bottomfeeder.
Your Trusted Master,
~PenguinDSC~
And I love how you make these stories, they are really creative!
Poor Felix, all alone with the dreaded Miss Bottomfeeder.
Your Trusted Master,
~PenguinDSC~