18th November 2013
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Made by Sophie in Entertainment

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18th November 2013, 10:48 PM

Hey guys,

If you hadn't seen my first post on my first poem, you should. I'm posting poems on here about weekly so here is my second poem! Hope you like it. I don't think this one is as good as the other one, but I tried my best! :)

Americans woke up to a sunny September day
Got up for work and school
Businessmen excited for their pay
Not knowing the dreaded future

At 9:00 all is right
until a sudden roar.
The two planes crash as the sun ruins night
ruining the perfect day.

The building fills with woman screams and men shouts
everyone is going mad .
Babies are ]having extreme pouts
people running in every which way.

We honor those who died that day.
They lost their lives for no reason
But, we are the land of the free and the home of the brave Hurray.
So we will stand up to this event again.

Well, I don't relate to this poem in any way except that I find 9/11 an interesting topic to write about. Please keep your bad comments to yourself and waddle on!!:D
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19th November 2013, 12:08 PM

Awesome! :D Very good post. Im so happy because i read this! :D
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