Here is my latest poem ;o;

Ode to My Gucci FlipFlops

Oh Gucci FlipFlops
How Gucci can you be;
even when you fall like a flop
I ask how gucci can you be,

On my feet it's like a street
you are as gucci as a fleet;
When you scream gucci cheats
With gucci flipflops slip into the heat;

Over the rainbow past the woods and into a dream,
As I see my gucci flipflops scream at a rival team
they look ugly when they yell so I call them to make a theme;
In my gucci flipflops we follow the stream of dreams:

Oh my this ode to my flipflops rhymes pretty sweet,
It may be hard but I will do it for the nice sheet,
But as I stare at my awkward weird feet
I see a nice soul within thee large fleet,
That floats in my gucci flipflops dreams

Is this a poem or a rap ?

You have a really interesting choice of words. Do you regularly pursue poetry? You appear to be pretty great at it either way. Nice job dude.

malorie wrote on 19th February 2016 05:55 PM:

Is this a poem or a rap ?

Text is without rhythm and not having rhythm defies one of the very foundations of rap.

The stars begin to fall, it stops and WOWS at your poem

Good Job! This IS Great!