20th July 2019
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Dear, 4207b (letter)

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20th July 2019, 04:38 PM

I lost it all, the love of my life and my friends even my love ones, but in life there's always a chance to grow from the pain, the struggle.
For the realists.
RIP everyone who has left me.
Here's my story.

You're hurting inside but all I wanna do is be real, apologies for bringing this into the light I really don't wanna have a fight
I couldn't speak properly, I spoke improper
But this is me, pleasure having you into my life
Alright, alright
Teaching me what being faithful and loyal(alty) means,
In a relationship with a girl
Me and you we are like royal(ty)
Teaching how to speak proper, grammer and sentence and so on
I'm not taking shots at you, I swear bro all I wanna do is help you
That's all I wanna do
Please don't shut away yourself, let's talk about it (yeah yeah)
because when we don't speak
It aches me
It aches me
Apologies if I ever hurt you (ever) or if I spoke ill of you, I had to learn I was hurting as well over everything but you piece me back together like a puzzle
You're silent like a muzzle on a gun, (not cool, no no that's not fun)
Because I never knew what the hell either meant, I swear
So, when you're hurting I can't just stand there and accpet you walking yourself into a early grave or something similar
Because all I wanna do is be real,
Yeah, because all I wanna do is be real
(Alright, alright)
I look up to the skies I cry when nobody is looking I asked Allah why I still suffer, he will protect me from the fact but you're a realist bro
(You are, you are)
My arrogance and egotistical manner that's what caused me to hide under a rock
Act like I was emotionless
But I don't wanna be like that, no no
Because, I hurt so many people
With my words.
Cursing and blinding then acting like a hotshot lawyer
(Alright, alright)
All I wanna do is be real.
(Alright, alright?)
All I wanna do is be real
So many people, I met some people come and go that's what they say
But which way are we going?
Are you leaving my life or are you staying?
These emotions is hard to control, because I feel what you feel brothers from another mother
I could only be real if you're are as well
And you're as well
(Ohhhhhhhh)
(Ohhhhhhhh)
There's no Romeo without 4207b
(Alright? Alright?)
There's no Romeo without 4207b
(Alright? Alright?)
There's no Romeo without 4207b
(Alright? Alright?)
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20th July 2019, 05:27 PM

Have you taken any English lessons?...

You do realize this isn't how you write a letter, right? This is a script.
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20th July 2019, 05:55 PM

mate how do you make so many of these raps?
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20th July 2019, 06:03 PM

Alatar wrote on 20th July 2019, 05:27 PM:
Have you taken any English lessons?...
You do realize this isn't how you write a letter, right? This is a script.

It's a rap letter.
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20th July 2019, 06:04 PM

Jake01 wrote on 20th July 2019, 05:55 PM:
mate how do you make so many of these raps?

I'm supposed to care about your negative comments?
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20th July 2019, 07:44 PM

when is the album coming out
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20th July 2019, 08:49 PM

letters do not come with a 'rap' option, go back to 1st grade english class
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sorry i'm late. i'm afraid i got lost on the path of life.

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21st July 2019, 12:05 AM

Sherlock120Sh wrote on 20th July 2019, 06:03 PM:
Quote:
Alatar wrote on 20th July 2019, 05:27 PM:
Have you taken any English lessons?...
You do realize this isn't how you write a letter, right? This is a script.
It's a rap letter.

No, this isn't rap, or a letter.

It's a script with lyrics that make my eyes bleed. I'm sure if it was in music, my ears would bleed as well...
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21st July 2019, 01:26 AM

I don't think I've ever seen you write anything but "song lyrics"; good effort though.
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21st July 2019, 04:35 AM

You guys are just hating on this masterpiece
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21st July 2019, 04:35 AM

Sherlock120Sh wrote on 20th July 2019, 06:04 PM:
Quote:
Jake01 wrote on 20th July 2019, 05:55 PM:
mate how do you make so many of these raps?
I'm supposed to care about your negative comments?
it wasn’t negative, and you do care about them because you reply to them.
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21st July 2019, 01:15 PM

Sherlock120Sh wrote on 21st July 2019, 04:35 AM:
You guys are just hating on this masterpiece

If it was a masterpiece, why would people be hating on it...?

Sriram, this is an okay rap song, but it is far from a "masterpiece".
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