Her Soft Red hair caught the wind as it passed through the enchanted Mountains of mist " Great day for a Walk " She Said to herself a silverbell in her tone " I Wish he was here though" She Looked Down her eyes wondering down her arm To the silver Wrist watch dangling slightly to big for her tiny wrist " Maybe he will come back some day " She Sighed Disappointment in her Words Thick like a blinding fog She was talking about her long lost dad that disappeared on a walk through the mountains Past the sleeping meadows where all the deer would go to mate " At least hes probably better now that hes in heaven , Since we havent found his body we just assumed a bear got to him or he rotted away from starvation .

To be continued........

Umm great story but sad xd.

Sorry that its depressing , Im trying to become a good writer c:

Lol! Im gonna say it working c:

Lol yes a good story but sad And like DUN DUN DUUUNNN at the end

Pretty good. U should see my writing but I don't want to show off my talents. I see it the way of bragging but THIS was not bragging it was GREAT talent. U already inspired my little sister. She is watching and she is SHOCKED. U r a future author.

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Lol yes a good story but sad And like DUN DUN DUUUNNN at the end

I only do that meanie

thats very sad but nice story

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I only do that meanie

That is rude anybody can do it.