Her eyes locked on the Horizon taking her first step toward her unknowingly adventure ahead " I mean I must be crazy they took me to a mental hospital when I was 5 When I told my teacher I saw a dead person in front of me taking the place of my missing friend , They told me I was mental " She shook her head walking over a huge fallen down oak it's syrup drinking to the dried leafs below " Honestly I still see that figure everywhere " she Laughed amused at her craziness , something snapped beneath her foot , She lowered her head down to the ground and noticed a white rock "hmm?" she picked up the 'rock' now finding out it was a bone .

Man, you will be an amazing author. Your writing is amazing!

Man, you will be an amazing author. Your writing is amazing!
Sorry, double post glitch.

This is great! But to be an author, you gotta improve on punctuation.

I'm only 14 , But I have many years to improve c:

Yea, but im not talking about the punctuation.
Im about the writing.
It has alot of meaning, and it really captures me. I can really picture it in my head. Great work.

Thank you may I try to do my best not as good as I hopes it would turn out but it's ok c:

Great Job on this!
And I agree with May.
The writing does have meaning.