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14th June 2020, 09:46 AM
hello and welcome to the one and only
today i will be teaching you guys (the ones in desperate need of the ability to use commas) how & when to use commas!
so.. what is a comma?
a comma is a punctuation mark (,) indicating a pause between parts of a sentence or separating items in a list of three or more items.
example: once i die, my inheritance will go to my husband, son, daughter-in-law, and nephew.
commas make it significantly easier to read what you or somebody else is writing, for example:
without commas
So I was told since I killed a high number of NWO my rank ban would be gone i just logged in and im demoted I am told that I used a "exploited link" to figure out what weapons people had and etc, but in reality Zpheal used inspect element on a public file and we used it to look at what weapons people had we were later informed by a admin after reporting chelsey had a golden sword that what we did was really bad and it couldve leaked PW (Penguin Watch) which me and Zpheal had no intentions of doing so I would like to apologize to all the adminastration and Damen for exploiting the game in some way and it wont happen again.
with commas and correct grammar and punctuation
So I was told since I killed a high number of NWO my rank ban would be gone. I just logged in, and I'm demoted. I am told that I used a "exploited link" to figure out what weapons people had etc, but in reality, Zpheal had used inspect element on a public file, and we used it to look at what weapons people had. We were later informed by an admin soon after we reported that Chelsey had a golden sword, that what we did was really bad, and it could've leaked PW, (Penguin Watch) which me and Zpheal had no intentions of doing. I would like to apologise to all the administration and to Damen for exploiting the game in some way, and it wont happen again.
(oh yeah and i also tried my best to fix the paragraph because most of it made no sense)
so much better! i can still hardly read it but it's so much easier than it was before.
thank you for reading my tutorial, i hope you guys know basic grammar now.
and this is not saying that you need to use grammar on the internet, because quite frankly you don't..
BUT FOR THE LOVE OF GOD PLEASE AT LEAST USE COMMAS IF YOU'RE GOING TO WRITE A HUGE PARAGRAPH
ok thx
bye
today i will be teaching you guys (the ones in desperate need of the ability to use commas) how & when to use commas!
so.. what is a comma?
a comma is a punctuation mark (,) indicating a pause between parts of a sentence or separating items in a list of three or more items.
example: once i die, my inheritance will go to my husband, son, daughter-in-law, and nephew.
commas make it significantly easier to read what you or somebody else is writing, for example:
without commas
So I was told since I killed a high number of NWO my rank ban would be gone i just logged in and im demoted I am told that I used a "exploited link" to figure out what weapons people had and etc, but in reality Zpheal used inspect element on a public file and we used it to look at what weapons people had we were later informed by a admin after reporting chelsey had a golden sword that what we did was really bad and it couldve leaked PW (Penguin Watch) which me and Zpheal had no intentions of doing so I would like to apologize to all the adminastration and Damen for exploiting the game in some way and it wont happen again.
with commas and correct grammar and punctuation
So I was told since I killed a high number of NWO my rank ban would be gone. I just logged in, and I'm demoted. I am told that I used a "exploited link" to figure out what weapons people had etc, but in reality, Zpheal had used inspect element on a public file, and we used it to look at what weapons people had. We were later informed by an admin soon after we reported that Chelsey had a golden sword, that what we did was really bad, and it could've leaked PW, (Penguin Watch) which me and Zpheal had no intentions of doing. I would like to apologise to all the administration and to Damen for exploiting the game in some way, and it wont happen again.
(oh yeah and i also tried my best to fix the paragraph because most of it made no sense)
so much better! i can still hardly read it but it's so much easier than it was before.
thank you for reading my tutorial, i hope you guys know basic grammar now.
and this is not saying that you need to use grammar on the internet, because quite frankly you don't..
BUT FOR THE LOVE OF GOD PLEASE AT LEAST USE COMMAS IF YOU'RE GOING TO WRITE A HUGE PARAGRAPH
ok thx
bye
14th June 2020, 10:08 AM
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14th June 2020, 11:46 AM