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2nd December 2013, 09:56 PM
Hello everyone. I have a story for you all. It's about this family who moves into their step-grandpa's house for a few weeks.
Characters:
Bob
Gary
Lily
Mom
Dad
Step-Grandpa George
Joey
Spike
Well, here's the story:
Once upon a time, there was a family with three kids and parents. They were going on a vacation to visit their step-grandpa named George. He owned a gift shop that was open for 24 hours. His only employee was a guy named Joey. Bobby McFencyard, the oldest son, was about 10/2 years old.People called him Bob for short. Gariwald McFencyard was the second oldest son. He was about 10 years old. Lily McFencyard was the youngest. She was the only daughter. She was about 7/2 years old. Once the family arrived, George was so happy. He hadn't seen Bob and Gary since they were 3 years old, and that was when Lily was 6 months old. Lily hardly remembered George, but Bob and Gary kinda did.Bob and Gary were so bored. They had to sweep dirty floors, wash George's car, and feed Spike, George's dog. After a few days, the mom and dad decided to leave the kids there for a couple weeks. And that's when things got fun...
Bobby McFencyard
Bob is the oldest kid in the family, 10/2 years old. He likes to play video games and he always wears a hat. He wears a green shirt and jeans. He has black hair.
Gariwald McFencyard
Gary is the second oldest kid in the family, about 10 years old. He likes to study science. He has spiky yellow hair, a white t-shirt, a red tie, and jeans.
Lily
Lily is the youngest kid in the family, about 7/2 years old. She liked to make girly art. She has black hair and a pink dress with a picture of a flower on it.
George
George is an old man. Sometimes he's smart, and sometimes he's crazy. He owns the Gift Shop in the town of Secrystery. There are lots of secrets and mysteries in Secrystery. The name of the town is secret and mystery combined. Anyway, George has lived there for a long time.
Joey
Joey is the one and only employee at the Gift Shop. He has some things in common with Bob.
TO BE CONTINUED...
Well, that's my story, thanks for reading! Cya around! Part 2 coming soon!
~MuscleBob1
Characters:
Bob
Gary
Lily
Mom
Dad
Step-Grandpa George
Joey
Spike
Well, here's the story:
Once upon a time, there was a family with three kids and parents. They were going on a vacation to visit their step-grandpa named George. He owned a gift shop that was open for 24 hours. His only employee was a guy named Joey. Bobby McFencyard, the oldest son, was about 10/2 years old.People called him Bob for short. Gariwald McFencyard was the second oldest son. He was about 10 years old. Lily McFencyard was the youngest. She was the only daughter. She was about 7/2 years old. Once the family arrived, George was so happy. He hadn't seen Bob and Gary since they were 3 years old, and that was when Lily was 6 months old. Lily hardly remembered George, but Bob and Gary kinda did.Bob and Gary were so bored. They had to sweep dirty floors, wash George's car, and feed Spike, George's dog. After a few days, the mom and dad decided to leave the kids there for a couple weeks. And that's when things got fun...
Bobby McFencyard
Bob is the oldest kid in the family, 10/2 years old. He likes to play video games and he always wears a hat. He wears a green shirt and jeans. He has black hair.
Gariwald McFencyard
Gary is the second oldest kid in the family, about 10 years old. He likes to study science. He has spiky yellow hair, a white t-shirt, a red tie, and jeans.
Lily
Lily is the youngest kid in the family, about 7/2 years old. She liked to make girly art. She has black hair and a pink dress with a picture of a flower on it.
George
George is an old man. Sometimes he's smart, and sometimes he's crazy. He owns the Gift Shop in the town of Secrystery. There are lots of secrets and mysteries in Secrystery. The name of the town is secret and mystery combined. Anyway, George has lived there for a long time.
Joey
Joey is the one and only employee at the Gift Shop. He has some things in common with Bob.
TO BE CONTINUED...
Well, that's my story, thanks for reading! Cya around! Part 2 coming soon!
~MuscleBob1
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3rd December 2013, 07:13 PM
PART 2
So, that night, Bob and Gary sneaked out the house cause they were bored. While they were walking around in the forest, Bob crashes into a tree. Then an 8 ball fell out the leaves. "Hey Gary, over here!" said Bob. Gary walked over to Bob and stared at the 8 ball. Then the 8 ball showed a telegram with a message:
GEORGE=1
FRANK=2
DAN=3
JEREMY=4
MARTY=5
FRAN=6
GREG=7
BOB=8
"Hmmm...do you know what this is, Gary?" Bob asked. "Well, it's a telegram with names and numbers..." Gary replied. "Aha!" shouted Bob. "George probably knows what this is!" So they walked back to the Gift Shop and saw George opening the door to the cellar and..."GEORGE!" shouted Bob. "AAAAH!" George screamed. "Don't worry George, it's just us. I'm going to bed now," said Gary as he walked up the stairs. Bob and George were downstairs in the dark. "So, George, do you know what this is?" asked Bob. "Um...uh..." George gulped. "Bob...where'd you find that?" asked George. "In a tree in the forest," replied Bob. "The eight ball..." whispered George. "Wha?" asked Bob. "Well," George continued, "Ya see kid, Secrystery is a very strange town, and..." Bob's eyes widened. "I have the 1 ball. And I can't believe a kid as young as you could find the 8 ball..." George told him. "So that's what the telegram meant," whispered Bob. "Well kid, it's about time you went to bed. You need some rest." said George. "Okay, goodnight George," Bob said as he walked up the stairs. After Bob went upstairs, George grabbed his lantern and sneaked into the cellar. He walked down the cellar stairs and reached the elevator. He typed in the code and went down to floor 1. He went to his spy cameras and located the 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, and 7 balls. That night, he found them and stole them. When he put all the balls into a power source, he heard creaking in the wall of his lab in the cellar. "Huh?" said George. The creaking got louder, and louder, and louder, until...BOOM!
TO BE CONTINUED...
Part 3 coming soon!
So, that night, Bob and Gary sneaked out the house cause they were bored. While they were walking around in the forest, Bob crashes into a tree. Then an 8 ball fell out the leaves. "Hey Gary, over here!" said Bob. Gary walked over to Bob and stared at the 8 ball. Then the 8 ball showed a telegram with a message:
GEORGE=1
FRANK=2
DAN=3
JEREMY=4
MARTY=5
FRAN=6
GREG=7
BOB=8
"Hmmm...do you know what this is, Gary?" Bob asked. "Well, it's a telegram with names and numbers..." Gary replied. "Aha!" shouted Bob. "George probably knows what this is!" So they walked back to the Gift Shop and saw George opening the door to the cellar and..."GEORGE!" shouted Bob. "AAAAH!" George screamed. "Don't worry George, it's just us. I'm going to bed now," said Gary as he walked up the stairs. Bob and George were downstairs in the dark. "So, George, do you know what this is?" asked Bob. "Um...uh..." George gulped. "Bob...where'd you find that?" asked George. "In a tree in the forest," replied Bob. "The eight ball..." whispered George. "Wha?" asked Bob. "Well," George continued, "Ya see kid, Secrystery is a very strange town, and..." Bob's eyes widened. "I have the 1 ball. And I can't believe a kid as young as you could find the 8 ball..." George told him. "So that's what the telegram meant," whispered Bob. "Well kid, it's about time you went to bed. You need some rest." said George. "Okay, goodnight George," Bob said as he walked up the stairs. After Bob went upstairs, George grabbed his lantern and sneaked into the cellar. He walked down the cellar stairs and reached the elevator. He typed in the code and went down to floor 1. He went to his spy cameras and located the 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, and 7 balls. That night, he found them and stole them. When he put all the balls into a power source, he heard creaking in the wall of his lab in the cellar. "Huh?" said George. The creaking got louder, and louder, and louder, until...BOOM!
TO BE CONTINUED...
Part 3 coming soon!
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3rd December 2013, 07:16 PM
Quote:
PART 2
So, that night, Bob and Gary sneaked out the house cause they were bored. While they were walking around in the forest, Bob crashes into a tree. Then an 8 ball fell out the leaves. "Hey Gary, over here!" said Bob. Gary walked over to Bob and stared at the 8 ball. Then the 8 ball showed a telegram with a message:
GEORGE=1
FRANK=2
DAN=3
JEREMY=4
MARTY=5
FRAN=6
GREG=7
BOB=8
"Hmmm...do you know what this is, Gary?" Bob asked. "Well, it's a telegram with names and numbers..." Gary replied. "Aha!" shouted Bob. "George probably knows what this is!" So they walked back to the Gift Shop and saw George opening the door to the cellar and..."GEORGE!" shouted Bob. "AAAAH!" George screamed. "Don't worry George, it's just us. I'm going to bed now," said Gary as he walked up the stairs. Bob and George were downstairs in the dark. "So, George, do you know what this is?" asked Bob. "Um...uh..." George gulped. "Bob...where'd you find that?" asked George. "In a tree in the forest," replied Bob. "The eight ball..." whispered George. "Wha?" asked Bob. "Well," George continued, "Ya see kid, Secrystery is a very strange town, and..." Bob's eyes widened. "I have the 1 ball. And I can't believe a kid as young as you could find the 8 ball..." George told him. "So that's what the telegram meant," whispered Bob. "Well kid, it's about time you went to bed. You need some rest." said George. "Okay, goodnight George," Bob said as he walked up the stairs. After Bob went upstairs, George grabbed his lantern and sneaked into the cellar. He walked down the cellar stairs and reached the elevator. He typed in the code and went down to floor 1. He went to his spy cameras and located the 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, and 7 balls. That night, he found them and stole them. When he put all the balls into a power source, he heard creaking in the wall of his lab in the cellar. "Huh?" said George. The creaking got louder, and louder, and louder, until...BOOM!
TO BE CONTINUED...
Part 3 coming soon!
So, that night, Bob and Gary sneaked out the house cause they were bored. While they were walking around in the forest, Bob crashes into a tree. Then an 8 ball fell out the leaves. "Hey Gary, over here!" said Bob. Gary walked over to Bob and stared at the 8 ball. Then the 8 ball showed a telegram with a message:
GEORGE=1
FRANK=2
DAN=3
JEREMY=4
MARTY=5
FRAN=6
GREG=7
BOB=8
"Hmmm...do you know what this is, Gary?" Bob asked. "Well, it's a telegram with names and numbers..." Gary replied. "Aha!" shouted Bob. "George probably knows what this is!" So they walked back to the Gift Shop and saw George opening the door to the cellar and..."GEORGE!" shouted Bob. "AAAAH!" George screamed. "Don't worry George, it's just us. I'm going to bed now," said Gary as he walked up the stairs. Bob and George were downstairs in the dark. "So, George, do you know what this is?" asked Bob. "Um...uh..." George gulped. "Bob...where'd you find that?" asked George. "In a tree in the forest," replied Bob. "The eight ball..." whispered George. "Wha?" asked Bob. "Well," George continued, "Ya see kid, Secrystery is a very strange town, and..." Bob's eyes widened. "I have the 1 ball. And I can't believe a kid as young as you could find the 8 ball..." George told him. "So that's what the telegram meant," whispered Bob. "Well kid, it's about time you went to bed. You need some rest." said George. "Okay, goodnight George," Bob said as he walked up the stairs. After Bob went upstairs, George grabbed his lantern and sneaked into the cellar. He walked down the cellar stairs and reached the elevator. He typed in the code and went down to floor 1. He went to his spy cameras and located the 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, and 7 balls. That night, he found them and stole them. When he put all the balls into a power source, he heard creaking in the wall of his lab in the cellar. "Huh?" said George. The creaking got louder, and louder, and louder, until...BOOM!
TO BE CONTINUED...
Part 3 coming soon!
How dare you keep us waiting,no but seriously. I can't wait for more.
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3rd December 2013, 07:27 PM
Okay guys, if you liked the story so far, and you don't wanna end on a cliffhanger, then here's a sneak peak of part 3!
BOOM! "MWAHAHAHA!" laughed a strange spirit. "Wait-who are you?" asked George. "I'm the dark spirit of Secrystery! And since you collected all 8 balls, I'm here to take them! "Hahahaha!" So the strange spirit trapped George and stole the 8 balls. "Now that I've got you, I'm gonna hunt down your employee and step-grand kids!" laughed the strange spirit. "W-w-wait, how do you know I have grand kids, and how do you even know they're my STEP-grand kids?" cried George. "Oh, I've been watching EVERYBODY in Secrystery! I'll be hunting your family down now. Have a nice-I mean, BAD day! HAHAHA!"
Well, that's the sneak peak of part 3. The rest will be out soon!
BOOM! "MWAHAHAHA!" laughed a strange spirit. "Wait-who are you?" asked George. "I'm the dark spirit of Secrystery! And since you collected all 8 balls, I'm here to take them! "Hahahaha!" So the strange spirit trapped George and stole the 8 balls. "Now that I've got you, I'm gonna hunt down your employee and step-grand kids!" laughed the strange spirit. "W-w-wait, how do you know I have grand kids, and how do you even know they're my STEP-grand kids?" cried George. "Oh, I've been watching EVERYBODY in Secrystery! I'll be hunting your family down now. Have a nice-I mean, BAD day! HAHAHA!"
Well, that's the sneak peak of part 3. The rest will be out soon!
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3rd December 2013, 09:57 PM
PART 3 We shall continue where we left off.
The strange spirit made a huge hole in front of the Gift Shop. That morning, Joey walked outside looking for George. "George? George? GEORGE WHERE ARE YOU? I need my paycheck." said Joey. Then he stopped in front of the hole. "Hey kids, check this thing out!" Then Bob, Gary, and Lily ran outside to see it. They all gasped. "So, wanna jump down it and have a race?" Joey asked. "YEAH!" replied Bob. "Yes!" cried Lily. "Um...wait, it could be dangerous-" said Gary. But once Gary finished his sentence, they were all racing down the hole. They crashed and saw the strange spirit. The strange spirit was...an eye!
"I WAS EXPECTING YOU GUYS! HAHAHA!" laughed the eye. "You kids were dumb enough to jump down a ditch full of sharp rocks! Wait-how'd you even survive those sharp rocks?" asked the eye. "I'LL TELL YA," said Joey. "Okay, tell me!" replied the eye. "Come closer and I'll tell you," said Joey. "Okay," said the eye. When the eye came closer, Joey punched it right in the middle. "AAAH! UUGH! MY EYE! AARGH!" screamed the eye. "I'm gonna destroy you, starting with the kid in the green shirt!" said the eye. So he started chasing Bob. "AAAH! HELP ME!" Then Joey hopped right into his van and sped down the rode chasing the eye. Then all three of them crashed into the Gift Shop. Bob saw a nuclear bomb and picked it up, then threw it at the eye. BOOOOOM!!! Secrystery was destroyed. George was arrested for being responsible for the explosion. Unfortunately, Joey couldn't take care of them cause the Gift Shop exploded. So the kids were sent home and Joey went to a hotel. (Joey only had enough money for 1 person to stay at the hotel) This may be the end of our story. There may or may not be a part 4.
Only time will tell.
Tick tock, tick tock...
The strange spirit made a huge hole in front of the Gift Shop. That morning, Joey walked outside looking for George. "George? George? GEORGE WHERE ARE YOU? I need my paycheck." said Joey. Then he stopped in front of the hole. "Hey kids, check this thing out!" Then Bob, Gary, and Lily ran outside to see it. They all gasped. "So, wanna jump down it and have a race?" Joey asked. "YEAH!" replied Bob. "Yes!" cried Lily. "Um...wait, it could be dangerous-" said Gary. But once Gary finished his sentence, they were all racing down the hole. They crashed and saw the strange spirit. The strange spirit was...an eye!
"I WAS EXPECTING YOU GUYS! HAHAHA!" laughed the eye. "You kids were dumb enough to jump down a ditch full of sharp rocks! Wait-how'd you even survive those sharp rocks?" asked the eye. "I'LL TELL YA," said Joey. "Okay, tell me!" replied the eye. "Come closer and I'll tell you," said Joey. "Okay," said the eye. When the eye came closer, Joey punched it right in the middle. "AAAH! UUGH! MY EYE! AARGH!" screamed the eye. "I'm gonna destroy you, starting with the kid in the green shirt!" said the eye. So he started chasing Bob. "AAAH! HELP ME!" Then Joey hopped right into his van and sped down the rode chasing the eye. Then all three of them crashed into the Gift Shop. Bob saw a nuclear bomb and picked it up, then threw it at the eye. BOOOOOM!!! Secrystery was destroyed. George was arrested for being responsible for the explosion. Unfortunately, Joey couldn't take care of them cause the Gift Shop exploded. So the kids were sent home and Joey went to a hotel. (Joey only had enough money for 1 person to stay at the hotel) This may be the end of our story. There may or may not be a part 4.
Only time will tell.
Tick tock, tick tock...
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5th December 2013, 08:37 PM
Hey everyone, good news. Part 4 is here!!! This is the season finale. Well, here it is:
Joey could only afford to stay in the hotel for 2 months. He was very bored, though. After 1 month of playing video games, he called room service. "Hello, anyone?" asked Joey. He heard breathing in the phone. "Uh, hello? Who is this?" Joey asked. "You're doom is near..." said the man at the phone. Joey screamed and threw the phone on the ground. "I gotta get out of here fast!" Joey grabbed all his stuff and ran to the elevator. When he pressed the 1 button, the elevator closed and went pitch black. He heard the same voice he heard on the phone, "Hello, Joey," "WHO ARE YOU AND HOW DO YOU KNOW MY NAME?" screamed Joey. "Oh, I know LOTS OF THINGS." said the voice. Then the elevator started to go up and down. "Lots of things..." said the voice once again, but more quietly. Suddenly, the elevator crashed on floor 1. Joey kicked down the elevator door and ran for the exit. Once he got outside, he jumped into his van and drove away. Then the voice's body appeared. It was the eye! He hopped into the eye space in his giant robot and immediately started chasing Joey. Joey drove as fast as possible. Then he slammed on the breaks at a cliff, and when the eye didn't notice, his giant robot walked over Joey and fell off the cliff. BOOM! The eye was gone forever.
1 YEAR LATER...
The Gift Shop was back in business! George was freed from jail. After he was free, he immediately called Joey and they both started fixing the Gift Shop. 1 week later, the kids got dropped off at the Gift Shop. Everything was back to normal. Except one thing...Bob spotted a man with a round head hiding in a bush. He looked like he was spying on them...
The End.
SEASON 2 COMING THIS SPRING!
Joey could only afford to stay in the hotel for 2 months. He was very bored, though. After 1 month of playing video games, he called room service. "Hello, anyone?" asked Joey. He heard breathing in the phone. "Uh, hello? Who is this?" Joey asked. "You're doom is near..." said the man at the phone. Joey screamed and threw the phone on the ground. "I gotta get out of here fast!" Joey grabbed all his stuff and ran to the elevator. When he pressed the 1 button, the elevator closed and went pitch black. He heard the same voice he heard on the phone, "Hello, Joey," "WHO ARE YOU AND HOW DO YOU KNOW MY NAME?" screamed Joey. "Oh, I know LOTS OF THINGS." said the voice. Then the elevator started to go up and down. "Lots of things..." said the voice once again, but more quietly. Suddenly, the elevator crashed on floor 1. Joey kicked down the elevator door and ran for the exit. Once he got outside, he jumped into his van and drove away. Then the voice's body appeared. It was the eye! He hopped into the eye space in his giant robot and immediately started chasing Joey. Joey drove as fast as possible. Then he slammed on the breaks at a cliff, and when the eye didn't notice, his giant robot walked over Joey and fell off the cliff. BOOM! The eye was gone forever.
1 YEAR LATER...
The Gift Shop was back in business! George was freed from jail. After he was free, he immediately called Joey and they both started fixing the Gift Shop. 1 week later, the kids got dropped off at the Gift Shop. Everything was back to normal. Except one thing...Bob spotted a man with a round head hiding in a bush. He looked like he was spying on them...
The End.
SEASON 2 COMING THIS SPRING!