Hi I'm going to make a story here it is this is only Chapter 1. Please read all of this it's going to be very long. And I want some feedback.

Once upon a time, there was an island. The name was Ice Island. They're was only ice in 2 months of the year. November and December. Those were celebrations for Christmas. There was one king, Icedragon. He ordered his gaurds to get him an ice balloon. There was MANY ice statues that never melted. Most of Icedragon's castle was made of ice. None of the ice ever melted. The gaurds had ice armor. Icedragon had a throne made out of crystals and ice. Where they lived was warm most of the time. But, always, with, ICE! The population in the island grew bigger and bigger. Until, one day, a gaurd spotted a DIFFERENT island. He sailed over to the island. It was fire fire fire. One day later, they attacked us with no warning. Icedragon let out all the troops with Iceshooters. All gaurds froze the fire troops. Many people got killed. The population of the gaurds on the fire island and ice island went declining down. Icedragon was mad and wanted payback. So next time he will get it. Chapter 2 coming tommorow!
Hope you liked the story! Edit: Btw the next one is gonna be WAY longer.

This is a great story!

Oh, this is cool! I love this story! I hope to see it in time tomorrow . Waddle On!