Written by: Brayden
Once upon a time, there was a kid. His name was: Dice. He was a very good boy for Christmas, there was someone on the naughty list! His name was: Rocketsnail. Every Halloween he got eggs and when he said trick-or-treat the person opened the door, he threw eggs in their face! Also eggs other peoples houses. He was never on the nice list. Only a couple times. He was on nice list when he was 1 year old, 2 year old and three year old. But at 4... He was so angry, he knocked over the family Christmas tree and broke their Computer! Then he got a present for Christmas! It was.... COAL!! He was so mad, he rubbed the coal together and it created a fire! He put the coal on his Mom, Dad and Brother! He almost killed his own family!! But one day, Santa brought him to the North Pole. He showed him the nice list and naughty. Dice was above everyone on the nice list cause he was nicest. And Rocketsnail was on the top of naughty list! He was the worse kid on Oldcp! Dice came over to see him he was actually scared to see him! He were armor and a fireproof and gun proof vest. He talked to him about being Nice and naughty. He said: Rocketsnail if you want presents, you have to be good! That means doing what you're mom or dad tells you, don't rage, don't set your family on fire and don't cuss at your parents! Rocketsnail said: Well ok ill TRY my best. He showed Rocketsnail the naughty or nice list and he said: Wow! That Justin guy must be the worse! He said no no no. This is half of Santa's naughty or nice list his full list is about... 25 feet long and 6 feet wide! Santa said: The only way you will be on my nice list if you do good deeds! Santa was happy he WOULD try. Santa said and Dice... Dice said: Yes? Santa said: Come over here, iv'e got a surprise for you! Santa said: Thank you for trying to help Rocketsnail! Dice said: Your welcome! And Santa gave him a present! He said ooh early Christmas present! He opened it, it said to Dice and Rocketsnail. He called Rocketsnail over and they both looked it was a clock. It said you have 1 hour to do 5 good deeds to people. And if you run out of time... You will be on my naughty list FOREVER He said uh oh! Better start right now and Santa started the timer. Rocketsnail helped his Mom clean up the house so that was 1 deed and he had 53 more minutes left. He made his bed. 48 more minutes. He said nahh i have alot of time left ill just take a nap for 10 minutes. He slept then woke up then it was only 30 more minutes left! He said oh no! I need to do 3 more things under 30 minutes! He got the laundry. 2 more things! it was only 12 more minutes! He gave little kids candy. And it was down to 2 minutes!!! He went to Dice's house and gave his mom cookies and tea and his whole family. Santa appeared, he said Rocketsnail... You are on my nice list! But remember, its only the 19th of December be good for a couple more days and you will get some presents under your tree. On the 24th of December he couldn't sleep. He went downstairs and saw Santa! He was with Mrs. Claus too! They were putting down presents and he told Santa: Santa i can't fall asleep! He said: Hmm.. let me think... He gave him magical sleep dust that makes him go to sleep. Put some on your head and it will make you go to bed. And Santa almost forgot! He said: And Rocketsnail, I have a present that every kid wants. He put it under the tree and said: Now Rocketsnail open this tomorrow or it won't work. At 5:00 AM He woke up and jumped on his Mom and Dad and said: Mommy and Daddy get up get up! He came!! They walked downstairs and opened the special present... It was a Portal gun! He wished for it since he was 5. He cried tears of joy so loud even Santa could hear him!

The end!

You are a good writer, But this post was very hurtfull. Sorry, 1-

Good story!
It actually teaches you a lesson!
So this is called a Morral!
Good Job!
~Jonathanitti