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Chapter 3: The Unexpected



Bailey turned around to see nobody with him. He went the other way, the opposite of his sister Haley. Back at home mom looked everywhere for them, even their 18 year old sister Lola. Mom looked everywhere for them, even the toilet! Haley, the other side of Bailey ran away faster then she could, looking for her home. Bailey was knocking on his house door hoping that Haley would be there, the door never opened so he turned around and looked for her the other way





Part 4/Chapter 4 coming tomorrow!

It didnt come the next day because of my trip to china! Ok so heres the next part.
Chapter 4: Hope

Haley suddenly relized she went the wrong way. It had been 6 days sense she left her home. Suddenly, Haley heard footsteps coming her way. "Uh, who are you?" she said
loudly. Nothing answered, so she began to run faster. The thing bumped into her and Haley fell on the floor. Both the thing and Haley began crying. Haley turned around to see her brother crying on her. "Bailey, i cant find the way home" said Haley with hope of her brother showing her the way. He said "I know the way." They both set off with hope to get home.

Last part/Chapter coming tomorrow! I will make it a book tomorrow too!

I bet once there will be like 20 chapters, it will be a good series, but just so you know, you should try making each chapter a LOT longer, more than 50,000 characters by FAR.

I do like 2,000,000 character stories.

You do like 300 character stories.

Try maker longer chapters.

No harm meant!!!

On topic: Good story, Isle!!!

Warm Regards,
~ RocketSnail ~

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I bet once there will be like 20 chapters, it will be a good series, but just so you know, you should try making each chapter a LOT longer, more than 50,000 characters by FAR.



I do like 2,000,000 character stories.



You do like 300 character stories.



Try maker longer chapters.



No harm meant!!!



On topic: Good story, Isle!!!



Warm Regards,

~ RocketSnail ~

I cant think of anything when im eating popcorn .-.

Lol! Then stop eating popcorn. XDDDDDDDDDD

Warm Regards,
~ RocketSnail ~