Hi everyone I was bored and I thought i should write a story! I hope you enjoy it.


Monday morning.I woke up and I checked the time 'OH NO ITS 7:50 I WILL BE LATE FOR THE FIRST DAY OF SCHOOL' I Exclaimed.I ran downstairs.I trip and fell. 'Oww' I said,but i didn't care I had to be early for school.I ran to the kitchen for breakfast and I saw a note. It said 'Hello Sweetie,I hope you get this note.Me and your father went for vacation.Take care of your little brother,Max.Don't worry it will only be a week.Take care.' 'Just Great' I said. 'Ugh this will be a nightmare! Taking care of Max? For a whole week?!?" 'Wait a Minute' 'Dad and mom gone for a whole week? This mean..I CAN DO ANYTHING I WANT' But I stopped and looked out the window.I saw the school bus passed. 'OH NO I GOTTA GO' I ran out the house and chase the school bus.It finally stopped.I slowed down and breathing hard and I got in the school bus.I sat down but I heard some kids snickering.I looked behind me and saw the some girls.They had clothes better than mines and wearing lip-gloss and curly hair.They were looking at me and laughing. 'Eww what are you wearing? Did you got those clothes from the lost and found?" Said one of the girls.They all laughed at me.Ugh.The school bus stopped at our school.Phoenix Middle School.I keep reminding myself to stay positive and make new friends.I hope this will be a great school year and a good weekend.

I hope you liked the first part of my story I'm making.If you liked these and want me to make more tell me in the comments and tell me what you think.ENJOY YOUR DAY.

Great story! Love it so far!
+1

Oooooh Abby likes Funfet's story
MAKE MORRRE! +1

Btw This story will include Drama between the Alice(The main character telling the story) and the popular girls.Also Funny parts between Max,Alice little brother, and Alice.

Good story!!!

That's how I felt. Even worse.

A girl pulled down my pants, and she became popular since she pulled down my pants on the 1st day of school.

I hate her. ;'(

You should make more!
I want you to make more because you left Max at home and your at school + your mom & dad is at vacation.
And I want you to make more because I wanna see what your gonna do to not be with the girls that bully.
So thats all!

Your Friend,
Jonathanitti

Btw this isn't a true story But some parts happened to me..

I LOVE THIS STORY!! MAKE MORE STORIES! THERE AS GOOD AS TACOS! + 1 Taco want moree!!

Fantastic story!It was funny in most of the parts.I can't wait for more!

Good story. You didn't capitalize "I". You need to lower case, "But", and, "Didn't"...

Whoops.Sorry I was typing fast and I didn't see it.Thank you for the errors I made in my story Btw what lines did I make my errors?

Sorry If it was too short.Part 2 will be longer! I hope you guys will love my story and I think this story will only have 5 chapters or 10..What do you think?