This is chapter 1 of my story.

The cold moon gives no light at all. Moalison sits in the grass looking at the cemetery. This could be his only hope. The howling noise make Moalison want to jump into a slimy green death pile of disgusting slime goo but in his mind the shadowy figure causes him to go to the pet cemetery. The howling sound of the wolves chatter Moalison's teeth. CHATTER CHATTER! He turns around and with the fastest speed he sprints back. But he is in for a surprise. The shadow passes over him he is forced to go back! BANG!! He hits one of the cemetery stones and the faint sounds of yelling all occur. He fell into the coffin in which his death awaited because he all was ripped and dead and after that.

The shadowy figure crept towards the hole that leads to the coffin and...

pretty good stuff

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This is chapter 1 of my story.



The cold moon gives no light at all. Moalison sits in the grass looking at the cemetery. This could be his only hope. The howling noise make Moalison want to jump into a slimy green death pile of disgusting slime goo but in his mind the shadowy figure causes him to go to the pet cemetery. The howling sound of the wolves chatter Moalison's teeth. CHATTER CHATTER! He turns around and with the fastest speed he sprints back. But he is in for a surprise. The shadow passes over him he is forced to go back! BANG!! He hits one of the cemetery stones and the faint sounds of yelling all occur. He fell into the coffin in which his death awaited because he all was ripped and dead and after that.



The shadowy figure crept towards the hole that leads to the coffin and...

That's a good book!