Chapter 1. "view if you did not see it"


One morning, in a ran down village in England lived the Brown family an average family with little to no money. They bared to get little to no pay every week they got 50 dollars per week. The mother worked on "knock street" at an old ran down hotel. She cleaned the rooms just to make some spare change. She knew Christmas was around the corner and she wanted her family to have a good Christmas. Sense, there father died the family had little money to pay the bills. She needed a wish to come true. After work, she always looked in the streets of England for change that people dropped. Sometimes she found a dollar most of the time she went home with nothing. Every night, they had to eat cabbage soup and if they said no to eating then they would starve. The mother had 2 children to bare with. One that was 5 and one that was turning 12. Both where grand children that needed a good childhood. They could not afford to go to school, they had to search for money and even ask strangers for spare change. But, one stranger that was quite beautiful looked down at them and.....


Chapter 2. The strange lady. "recap"

Then as they where standing on "knock street" the beautiful yet old lady grabbed the girl and brought her to eye reach "meaning now she can see her clearly" the lady then said these words. "The key to life is being positive" the girl stared at the lady thinking this is crazy why would you grab me? then the lady changed faces morphing into different people. The girl screamed, but then the lady turned into someone she knew. Then in a flash the two girls where brought to this bright area there was nothing in site. They sat there wondering are we dreaming. The two girls then clutched hand's waiting for hope. They sat and they sat finally thinking of a plan. The oldest girl said "why don't we just keep walking" the younger girl replied with a "I don't quite know" the youngest girl was stuck in confusion wondering why us. The oldest girl then picked her up and started walking. Yet, what they did not know is that they are going to go on a adventure they might not even be ready for. They walked and they walked yet no darkness nothing to shine down on them. But, all of a sudden they heard this strange noise saying come here... follow me... you can trust me... the voice kept fading away little by little. The girls thought what must we do now....

Chapter 3. The strange man. "recap"

The two girls carried on following the voice even though it kept getting harder to listen to this strange voice. The two girls walked and walked going step by step. Slowly, it started getting darker as if darkness was filling the air. Sasha the oldest girl, began to think this is rather strange why is it turning dark. The younger girl was small yet strong she kept looking around thinking if they will ever meet there mother again. Then all of a sudden they saw the shadow of a tall male he was walking far in the distance the girls tried getting his attention but the man kept walking on as if he was lost of in a daze. The oldest girl found a door way that was quite hidden they walked through the door into this strange forest they saw the man once again but the man looked like a guy they once knew they just could not remember his face. The man looked at them with red eyes, saying these words. "Follow me follow me" the two girls ran to a old tree that was darkened by branches. Both girls talked saying did you see his eyes. Both decided to rest under this tree they found small branches to build a fire warm enough to keep them alive. All of a sudden while they slept they heard these words. "Positive is key" it kept repeating... they where froze in confusion...

Chapter 4, "The secret man exposed"

The two girls, now cold sense it is raining and the snow is quite cold. Sitting thinking, who that man was. They made a plan, to part different ways. The youngest girl would go back and look for a way out of the jungle/forest. When the oldest girl would search for this strange man she thought it was a family member. She continued, walking through branches going over huge rocks. Following the tracks of a man with a size 13 shoe. She knew that day that her father was a size 13. She stopped, and thought this can't be it can't be possible. She, had second thoughts thinking on and on about her mother back home and her father who has passed away later that year around the holidays. While the oldest girl was thinking the youngest girl found a clue. It was a old ran down hut with nothing in it but a few cloths and some spare change. She took the cloths and change, the cloths would be used for making a hut or for burning a fire. The spare change, would be used for there family once the got back home. She, wondered on searching for more things. Mean while, the oldest girl found a crawl space she ran to get the other girl. But, once they got back the crawl space was gone. They stared in confusion, wondering how is this possible it was right here. They soon after took the cloths and built a hut and with the spare cloth they made a fire. Of course they had extra matches they found on the street. They where rather cold warming up by the fire thinking of there mother back home. Then they saw the man staring down at them. He looked similar the oldest girl name Sasha thought about her father. Then it clicked the man was her father indeed. She froze, clutching a few rocks. She wondered why me, why us why me and my sister is this a message. The man which she knew now as her father said these last words. "Follow the nature, remain on the trail stay positive follow my voice" she remained speech less as if she seen a "ghost" which she thought in her head she did. She thought, what must we do now. The girls then rose up and....

Find out what happens next in chapter 5.

Sneak peak... The girls then rose up, causing a earth quake the two girls fell down right on there bottoms but they weren't in the same forest no longer. They where in this strange place with...

Haha, chapter 5 will be posted tomorrow. Enjoy your day guys, remember post your feedback and ideas. ~Sadie

I did not see that coming (At sneak peek) And, I wonder where they were (At sneak peek). Though you've done it again Sadie/Aeropostale ~ Icedragon

There's so many things to say about this magnificent story I had just read. I have no idea what to say. This story is amazing I just can't believe this. This is wonderful to the reader(me and other fellow people) because, I can see the picture and images in my head.(my reason is because I have an active imagination..) I imagine the two girls as my sisters and our step father as the ghost. So, wonderful I can't wait to read more!! Would you do my a little favor? I won't me on tomorrow so can you please send me chapter when you make it tomorrow? Will if you can thanks, Sadie! So, again magnificent story I love it I declare this as a master piece!!

~Furry On!

I love this story its very good! Its also detailed! Keep up the good work!

It's an fantastic story.When you wright as i read you keep your reader attached on to the story.And leave them hanging at the end wondering what will happen nice story making.

Haha thank you, also if you won't be on tomorrow I will send you the chapter. "write if you need it sent to you" how many chapters should I have?

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Haha thank you, also if you won't be on tomorrow I will send you the chapter. "write if you need it sent to you" how many chapters should I have?

Hmm maybe like 6 or 7

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Haha thank you, also if you won't be on tomorrow I will send you the chapter. "write if you need it sent to you" how many chapters should I have?

Hmm maybe like 6 or 7[/quote Haha, unless I can't stop adding things. I enjoy writing a lot. It is a "gift" I can't stop writing stories.