fbi was looking for me but i was hiding on antartica they came there i JUMPED OUt and ate the boss they said "shot him!" so i got the bullets with my wolf and blew them up !!!!!!

then a big explosion happend it was mr president he was a vampire to!!! edward came quick and snapped president neck and burnt the peaces i said thanks edward we were friends and we married


then a blow up happend at the wedding i got my wolf and ate the terrodit the terroist was chelsey i said HAHAHA lts kill that botch
so edward got a knife and cut her legs off i said now eat her!
i ate her with edward "yum " so i ate damen too he was bbomibng the entire wedding again
instead i ate damen and was sick on chelsey then we ate her

i ate the nasty people i blowed up the entire countrys and we lived on antartica

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it was 12 am and it was night time then i heard a wolf "edward quick go!"
then edward killed the wolf

i said that was a black wolf then a wolf boy came called jacob i said "KIll hIM!" edward sliced him but jacob became a massive wolf!!!! then he got edward i got on my wolf and i BLEW UP JACOB

edwar was hurt i took him to the hospital but wolves were there instad of doctors!!!! i got on my wolf and ate lots of wolfs but the wolfs got edward.....

i looked for edward but he wasnt there......

Stop it!!!
Start making child-friendly discussions instead!!!!!!!!!!!!!

umm please do not swear or even call people names its not kind!


I am just trying to help.

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I am just trying to help.

Yes, thank you Moshi.
I can't believe Damen wants us to give her another chance.
I just can't do it, Scarlet is too mean.

Hey there! honestly this story would be much better if you calmed down on writing it and sorta stopped saying cuss words with out letters. Because, I actually see a talented writer on are hands. I would, enjoy working with this user very much so.

Stop swearing! This story is way too violent and little kids could get scared! I suggest you either stop continuing the story, or make it less violent and less scary.

Guys, give her a chance can't you all see an amazing piece of work behind all the cuss words. I truly believe your judging her because of the past things she has done. And, it is built of anger towards her causing her to be this way. +1

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Stop it!!!



Start making child-friendly discussions instead!!!!!!!!!!!!!

shut up you little botch you f*ck man up

stop cussing at my friend please. I bet you made him upset. When will damen let the mods ban you? Youre being so rude.

Locked, this is starting drama. This girl needs a chance, not just because Damen said so. It is because I have hope in her!