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Hello everyone, as you all know I was working on a story I soon after stopped now I am here to present chapter 7 which will answer questions about chapter 6 enjoy
Chapters 1-6-
Chapter 7-The man said I am your grandfather the girl then said can you please help Sasha she has no pulse I can't loose her she is my hope my heat and soul my everything. The man nodded the man walked away looking for things to help the younger girl while he was searching for things the youngest girl may be dead on the outside but she was actually going through different places she was now alone in a cold world nothing could be seen only snow and ice she froze wondering where is everyone why am I all alone she paused listening she could hear the conversation out side of her body which is the oldest girl talking to the man which is there grandfather the oldest girl wondered and stared waiting for a pulse then the grandfather put water down the girls face causing her face to become moist dripping water was running down her nose down onto the ground he then put this pink dust on her chest this made her whole chest turn pink with the design of a sunflower the oldest girl stared wondering will this actually work . Sasha finally awoken from here "death" she said she heard everything she saw everything she felt everything. The oldest girl stared sitting there wondering why is this even happening where are we she then jumped causing both girls to fall into the crawl space it was small with the smell of dust and webs they began crawling inch my inch little by little then they found a gold door once they walked through it they saw something they thought they would never see again....
Find out what happens in chapter 8
sorry if this is rusty I just started writing this story again I hope you like it write your thoughts by commenting.
~Sadie
Chapters 1-6-
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Hello, here is chapter six of my story it is a rather interesting story with many twists. If you have missed chapter's 1-5 here is the link to view those chapters. In this chapter they will find out who the leader of the tribe and why the tribe wants them.
http://forums.clubpenguin.pro/view/7402-/
That was the link for the 1-5 chapters.
Chapter 6, The Tribe.
The man, continued running after the girls chasing them down he had a toblerone sword in his hand ready to slice and dice. The girls, ran into this damp cave trying to get away from these strange tribal people. They, ran down into the cave panting for air. They sparked a fire by using dry twigs and leafs including rocks to spark the fire. It was rather cold little food and they knew they would have to sacrifice something. Maybe, something deep down inside that the oldest girl did not want to do. She later on, thought more and more little by little on a positive way out of this strange forest. They heard the tribal men speaking English she thought for a moment.... Is this all a set up? Are they possibly tricking us, are we being fooled they ran out watching the men. The strangest part was there was no men but strange animals. It was a mix of a bear and a wolf. Yet with a strange face, she stared wondering... maybe just maybe we aren't even alive at all. Maybe, we have fallen into a trap the youngest girl finally spoke a few words. "Why don't we just call mom" the oldest girl stared in amazement she replied "call mom, how is that possible we don't have anything" the youngest girl picked up a rock call her this rock is magical... The oldest girl said, are you crazy or just plain "nuts" the younger girl said. "Trust me, it will work" she "faked called her mother" she heard a ring... then another, she finally heard "You have reached..." the line went blank she said how did it work? The youngest girl stared saying "magic" she replied what magic? the youngest girl replied with saying "There was this dust it was blue and it tasted quite strange" I don't know what it was... But, now I can randomly make things morph. She thought, "morphing" are father morphed into faces could this be. The thing, that is making dad quite strange. She coughed, the youngest girl cough again she said Sasha I don't feel so good. The youngest girl then fell down on her back... Sasha checker her pulse she said nothing. She checked again, once again no pulse. She lied down, praying for something to happen. She looked up, seeing a mans face.... who are you she asked. The guy said, I am....
Find out next chapter, on who this man is and what will happen to her sister. *This chapter is rather short and it may not be as good as the others* I am kind of tired. ~Sadie enjoy
http://forums.clubpenguin.pro/view/7402-/
That was the link for the 1-5 chapters.
Chapter 6, The Tribe.
The man, continued running after the girls chasing them down he had a toblerone sword in his hand ready to slice and dice. The girls, ran into this damp cave trying to get away from these strange tribal people. They, ran down into the cave panting for air. They sparked a fire by using dry twigs and leafs including rocks to spark the fire. It was rather cold little food and they knew they would have to sacrifice something. Maybe, something deep down inside that the oldest girl did not want to do. She later on, thought more and more little by little on a positive way out of this strange forest. They heard the tribal men speaking English she thought for a moment.... Is this all a set up? Are they possibly tricking us, are we being fooled they ran out watching the men. The strangest part was there was no men but strange animals. It was a mix of a bear and a wolf. Yet with a strange face, she stared wondering... maybe just maybe we aren't even alive at all. Maybe, we have fallen into a trap the youngest girl finally spoke a few words. "Why don't we just call mom" the oldest girl stared in amazement she replied "call mom, how is that possible we don't have anything" the youngest girl picked up a rock call her this rock is magical... The oldest girl said, are you crazy or just plain "nuts" the younger girl said. "Trust me, it will work" she "faked called her mother" she heard a ring... then another, she finally heard "You have reached..." the line went blank she said how did it work? The youngest girl stared saying "magic" she replied what magic? the youngest girl replied with saying "There was this dust it was blue and it tasted quite strange" I don't know what it was... But, now I can randomly make things morph. She thought, "morphing" are father morphed into faces could this be. The thing, that is making dad quite strange. She coughed, the youngest girl cough again she said Sasha I don't feel so good. The youngest girl then fell down on her back... Sasha checker her pulse she said nothing. She checked again, once again no pulse. She lied down, praying for something to happen. She looked up, seeing a mans face.... who are you she asked. The guy said, I am....
Find out next chapter, on who this man is and what will happen to her sister. *This chapter is rather short and it may not be as good as the others* I am kind of tired. ~Sadie enjoy
Chapter 7-The man said I am your grandfather the girl then said can you please help Sasha she has no pulse I can't loose her she is my hope my heat and soul my everything. The man nodded the man walked away looking for things to help the younger girl while he was searching for things the youngest girl may be dead on the outside but she was actually going through different places she was now alone in a cold world nothing could be seen only snow and ice she froze wondering where is everyone why am I all alone she paused listening she could hear the conversation out side of her body which is the oldest girl talking to the man which is there grandfather the oldest girl wondered and stared waiting for a pulse then the grandfather put water down the girls face causing her face to become moist dripping water was running down her nose down onto the ground he then put this pink dust on her chest this made her whole chest turn pink with the design of a sunflower the oldest girl stared wondering will this actually work . Sasha finally awoken from here "death" she said she heard everything she saw everything she felt everything. The oldest girl stared sitting there wondering why is this even happening where are we she then jumped causing both girls to fall into the crawl space it was small with the smell of dust and webs they began crawling inch my inch little by little then they found a gold door once they walked through it they saw something they thought they would never see again....
Find out what happens in chapter 8
sorry if this is rusty I just started writing this story again I hope you like it write your thoughts by commenting.~Sadie
Hi, I'm Scott.
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