3rd January 2014
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Star Snails #2 (STORY)

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3rd January 2014, 10:01 AM

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Well, as some of you know I am hosting a game called star snails, I wanted to share a story that I can write, kinda like Penguin Isles, how there is a game & story...



Characters:

Lawrence

Brody

Griffin

MORE TO BE ADDED



THUMP, THUMP, THUMP! Lawrence stumbled down the hill, and like always, got a crack in his shell. "You gotta learn better, bro." Griffin said, rolling down the hill. It seemed like a breeze to him. "THATS JUST LUCK, STINK SHELL FACE!" Brody hit his shell against Lawrence, making him tumble down the hill, out of control. Brody sneered, "And that's just plane evil. "I MEAN, IT CAN GET WORSE.... EEEK! IT IS GETTING WORSE!!!" He came tumbling straight into Griffin, leading them to the side of the hill, a metal wall, and only Lawrence's shell got all scraped. SPLAT! They landed in a whole filled with mud, and they got all durty. "And that's just plane pig nonsense!!!" Griffin screeched in an angry tone, and hit Lawrence hard in the shell, leaving him a scar shaped like lighting bolt, at the top of his shell...



TO BE CONTINUED...

Characters:
Lawrence
Brody
Griffin
Harry
MORE TO BE ADDED

"Owwch!" Lawrence complained. Brody and Griffin sneered, "Stop complaining like a 2 year old, beluga baby snail!" Lawrence rolled his eyes, "What does that even mean, dummies." Brody said, "It means, your fatter then a beluga whale!" Brody and Griffin laughed, but Lawrence trotted away. A sting came up his body, onto his shell. He was wondering what was on him, and why it hurt, and how it got in an exact form as a lightning bolt. Later that day, it stung him so hard, and he did not know what was happening. The lightning bolt scar formed right next to the first one, and the lines met at the end of where the bolt finished. ZAP! His shell got electrocuted, making him shoot into the air, but in the inside of the two scars, it became the exact color as a lightning bolt! Still, it as very bold because the black outline, but Lawrence had no idea it was on him, he could not see on his back! He was still flying in the air, landed in a forest, and tumbled on his shell and bumped into someone. "Hi there! My name is Harry, I decided to leave my 2 annoying brothers, the always bothered me. Nice to meet you!" Harry said with a grin. He bumped Lawrence in the shell, so he can get back up, not for a bad reason. "Hi, my name is Lawrence, and that is a bit of the same as me... but I somehow got zapped into the forest, not ran away... Harry made a nice grin and asked, "Wanna be good friends?" Lawrence smiled and nodded his head. They wondered off deep inside the woods together. "Nice scar you got, looks awesome!" Lawrence mumbled, "You really think it is cool..." Harry said, "It stands out and is awesome! It looks like an important scar, for something important..."

TO BE CONTINUED...
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3rd January 2014, 10:03 AM

Off-Topic: Are you able to add my character in the story?

On-Topic: Nice post, dude! +1 for you. :D
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3rd January 2014, 10:05 AM

Sure, pretty soon. Everyone wants to get added! XD Maybe not in next, but like in the 4-5 maybe! ;)
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3rd January 2014, 10:11 AM

I'm obviously evil! Lol!! Keep up the great work!!
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3rd January 2014, 10:12 AM

Harry, you will see, you will see... >:D
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3rd January 2014, 10:13 AM

Lol, I laugh at that when really I'm extremely frightened by it.
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3rd January 2014, 10:14 AM

Can you make a snail they both meet snail Shelldon who has a fire shell also can it be me XD
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3rd January 2014, 10:16 AM

Sheep, maybe... I might not be able to add that many people! I will see, but you might not have a fire shell... :P
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3rd January 2014, 10:20 AM

This is grand I would love to be part of an interesting story such as yours that I finally got the chance to read this is truly amazing. :)
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3rd January 2014, 10:25 AM

Ok, this must mean people like it, everyone wants to be in it! :P But sure, Sadie. Soon, you will be in...
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3rd January 2014, 10:28 AM

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Ok, this must mean people like it, everyone wants to be in it! :P But sure, Sadie. Soon, you will be in...
It is a likable story my good friend and I myself can't wait to be part of it.
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