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3rd January 2014, 01:48 PM
Hey guys! I was bored so I wanted to make a story based off a movie called Turbo. It's my favorite movie! I love it! You should watch it. It's in redbox now. Anyways here it is. BTW I'll be doing like a lot of the story in just this disgussion, Okay here it is! We present the story Turbo!
Vroom Vroom! News reportor- Hello, I've heard that you are the best racer in the world. Racer, ''Well, just always stay positive. AND FAST! Now you will be amazed I go at 230 miles per hour!''
Turbo, '' Yes you do!''
Racer,'' As you see I have a new liquid. (Forgot the name making up one) Extreme red.
Turbo said YES! He knocked down his soda and it went to the cable and made it wet. The TV fell down in a struck.
Turbo, '' NO!!!!''
Turbo went outside with the other snails. He always wanted to be fast. Turbo's brother was eating a tomato. They were going to work now. All snails made the tomato roll down. They kept smacking into Turbo. Ugh. When will they ever understand.
6 Hours later.
All right people. Drill time turbos brother said! The crusher is out. The crusher was a little kid in a little bike destroying everything with it's wheels. The leader yelled,'' BIG RED IS COMING DOWN!''
Big red rolled into the grass. All snails ran forward until Turbo's brother said, No! Back up.It's mowing day.
All the snails except turbo stayed there. Turbo said to himself Him VS The mower. Turbo raced forward. The other snails grabbed a hose and pushed the water to him. Turbo was upset.
Night time
Turbo went out. He saw a shooting star. He closed his eyes and said I wish I was fast. Then it turned out just to be a plane. He walked. He fell off the bridge and landed on a car. There was another car. The person in the car with turbo on raced him. He put on the speed and then the nitrous. Turbo fell back in it. All of it went into his body then he went out. UGH. He went back to his home. He watched TV.
At morning.
Turbo was outside in the driveway. The crusher came out. Thats when he experienced his power. He was almost dead but he was now fast with nitro. He could go super fast. He survived. Then he spun the wheel on the bike. It crashed into the tomato plant and bricks. The snail leader fired him and his brother. Turbo's brother said, I stood up for you bailed you. ALL THE TIME AND THIS IS WHAT I GET IN RETURN!??!? A crow came up and swooped him. Turbo followed with his speed. Then the crows landed at a dos bros tacos truck.
To be continued
Okay guys READ ALL OF THIS!
Hope you liked the story. Next part will be tommorow or night time today! ~ Icedragon
Vroom Vroom! News reportor- Hello, I've heard that you are the best racer in the world. Racer, ''Well, just always stay positive. AND FAST! Now you will be amazed I go at 230 miles per hour!''
Turbo, '' Yes you do!''
Racer,'' As you see I have a new liquid. (Forgot the name making up one) Extreme red.
Turbo said YES! He knocked down his soda and it went to the cable and made it wet. The TV fell down in a struck.
Turbo, '' NO!!!!''
Turbo went outside with the other snails. He always wanted to be fast. Turbo's brother was eating a tomato. They were going to work now. All snails made the tomato roll down. They kept smacking into Turbo. Ugh. When will they ever understand.
6 Hours later.
All right people. Drill time turbos brother said! The crusher is out. The crusher was a little kid in a little bike destroying everything with it's wheels. The leader yelled,'' BIG RED IS COMING DOWN!''
Big red rolled into the grass. All snails ran forward until Turbo's brother said, No! Back up.It's mowing day.
All the snails except turbo stayed there. Turbo said to himself Him VS The mower. Turbo raced forward. The other snails grabbed a hose and pushed the water to him. Turbo was upset.
Night time
Turbo went out. He saw a shooting star. He closed his eyes and said I wish I was fast. Then it turned out just to be a plane. He walked. He fell off the bridge and landed on a car. There was another car. The person in the car with turbo on raced him. He put on the speed and then the nitrous. Turbo fell back in it. All of it went into his body then he went out. UGH. He went back to his home. He watched TV.
At morning.
Turbo was outside in the driveway. The crusher came out. Thats when he experienced his power. He was almost dead but he was now fast with nitro. He could go super fast. He survived. Then he spun the wheel on the bike. It crashed into the tomato plant and bricks. The snail leader fired him and his brother. Turbo's brother said, I stood up for you bailed you. ALL THE TIME AND THIS IS WHAT I GET IN RETURN!??!? A crow came up and swooped him. Turbo followed with his speed. Then the crows landed at a dos bros tacos truck.
To be continued
Okay guys READ ALL OF THIS!
Hope you liked the story. Next part will be tommorow or night time today! ~ Icedragon
3rd January 2014, 01:54 PM
Nice story, I'm not such a big fan of Turbo well I never saw this film before anyway, but I read it and I kind like it ~Luke
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3rd January 2014, 01:56 PM
Its nice your sharing this with us, but it might spoil the surprises for people waiting to see it. If its your own version, then thats ok.
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3rd January 2014, 02:01 PM
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Its nice your sharing this with us, but it might spoil the surprises for people waiting to see it. If its your own version, then thats ok.
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3rd January 2014, 03:03 PM
Nice story keep up the good work!!
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Thanks Thinjaace!
Made By: Me!! Its sucks.. whatever
3rd January 2014, 03:31 PM
i saw that movie! yes it was pretty good! anyway,good post! +1