8th January 2014
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Sunny Song!

Made by sameerah70 in Arts

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8th January 2014, 04:19 PM
pum param pum pum param pum pum param pum param param wait wait wait for me all day whenever i feel ok i feel my legs but i dont wanna bet i feel like i just left (guitar)if its a long story im in a hurry im just really really bored. were both so happy and everyones clappy i guess were really in love! love your hug love your hug i guess u better love hugs!
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+1 by Preston


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8th January 2014, 04:23 PM
sorry if u cant see with that color heres it written perfectly pum param pum pum param pum pum param pum param param wait wait wait for me all day whenever i feel ok i feel my legs but i dont wanna bet i feel like i just left (guitar)if its a long story im in a hurry im just really really bored. were both so happy and everyones clappy i guess were really in love! love your hug love your hug i guess u better love hugs!
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8th January 2014, 04:26 PM
Hello nice song but just some future tips :

1. I think you should make your songs longer
2. make it flow and sorta like with a toon
3. make it make sense

i enjoyed your song it made me laugh a little

sincerely,

Khalfan
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8th January 2014, 04:34 PM
Quote:
Hello nice song but just some future tips :



1. I think you should make your songs longer

2. make it flow and sorta like with a toon

3. make it make sense



i enjoyed your song it made me laugh a little



sincerely,



Khalfan
 Its her song, so I mean, she can do whatever she wants.
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9th January 2014, 06:07 PM
OK OK BREAK IT UP not te be mean WHO WANTS MY SIGNATURES LOL
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