Here's a story about... something. Couldn't think of what to call this

Sadie walks through the dark forest... She lost her friend, Percy, in the misty trees. She spends hours doing nothing, not noticing she's just walking around in circles. Then, she hears the crunching of leaves behind her- who is it? She quickly turns around and points her gun at the shadowy figure. "Whoa Sadie, what's your problem?!" Exclaims Percy. "Oh, sorry Percy." Sadie says as she puts her gun down. "At least you didn't murder me." Says Percy in a quiet tone. "Anyways, we need to get going. There could be people around." They look in different directions trying to find a place to go.
"How about over here?" Says Sadie.
"No, over here." Says Percy.
"Over here!" Says Sadie, her voice getting a bit louder.
"No."
"Yes."
"No."
"Yes."
"Fine."
They start walking into the fog. Then, once again, hear someone walking behind them. "WHO IS THAT?!" Says Percy. Sadie quickly grabs a gun and... shoots. "Oh gosh..." Says Sadie quietly. "What?" Says Percy. "I think that was Anna."


I made this up in about 5 minutes. Let me know if I should continue it!

*bites nails* SOOO SUSPENSEFUL!!

I am sorry but I must say this kind of made me laugh it is rather interesting and it is grand the best part is that i'm in it just kidding. Anyway this is really good yet I don't think I would ever say that c word well maybe if I got really mad or did something wrong lol other wise you should create more of these

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I am sorry but I must say this kind of made me laugh it is rather interesting and it is grand the best part is that i'm in it just kidding. Anyway this is really good yet I don't think I would ever say that c word well maybe if I got really mad or did something wrong lol other wise you should create more of these



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I am sorry but I must say this kind of made me laugh it is rather interesting and it is grand the best part is that i'm in it just kidding. Anyway this is really good yet I don't think I would ever say that c word well maybe if I got really mad or did something wrong lol other wise you should create more of these







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Problem solved I changed it.

Thank you but may you change it to holy positive juices LOL :p

;o wayy I'm Sadie's friend! And I'm in a story . Yes, I think you should make more of these!