18th January 2014
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The Hobbit (remake)

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18th January 2014, 07:17 PM

Once, long ago in the future that had passed but it had now been (1157). There was a man, named Shaun, Shaun Blazer. He was born in 1150 and it was now 1157 (still). So he did never get raised by anyone. Later, in 1161 he had gotten chosen to be in a great family! (he was very happy) He grew up rich; and had a very good life upon Shaun. But when Shaun turned 22, his mom and dad... died from a car crash and Shaun had many memories from the past when his dad and mom were; alive. When, Shaun turned 50 he thought he was lonely so, he got a cousin to live with him. (Shaun's cousins name was... Chris!) Chris'es birthday turns out to be June, 17. Shaun's birthday is April, 9th. It were; April 7th and they had their birthday at there house to celebrate for there journey to Shaun and Chris living together. Shaun had turned 51, and Chris had turned 22. The next day Chris woken up 'Where is Shaun?" he said. Shaun had dissapeared! (the day after their birthday). Chris checked everywhere!! Whole house, outside, he asked his friends and Shaun had a chip so Chris could find/track him. "Is this it?! Did Shaun,... die!!??" He said that, because the chip was not beeping and Shaun was nowhere to be seen. Chris dug a hole to put his R.I.P. Shaun Blazer, (1150-1201). "Oh, my god!! ITS SHAUN!!" Shaun got stuck because he went into a hole he had dug and got stuck! Shaun had spoken "Thank you so much! My chip had fallen out and I was stuck in this... Hobbit hole!!"

(This is kind of like the hobbit but with different things and different characters and so that is why it is called The Hobbit remake).
Feel free to comment, thank you for reading! :)
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+1 by Smaug and OoBubblesoO

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19th January 2014, 10:01 AM

Nice story! I just bought The Hobbit book. :3 +1
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19th January 2014, 10:15 AM

It's supposed to be in the Arts Section.
But nice story!
-Jonathanitti
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19th January 2014, 12:50 PM

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Nice story! I just bought The Hobbit book. :3 +1

Cool you will really enjoy it!!
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It's supposed to be in the Arts Section.

But nice story!

-Jonathanitti

Oh, sorry but thanks too anyways.
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