Wow! Loved the story. Really unexpected ending! I never thought that that would happen!

As a writer myself I would say that it is amazing but some letters are capitalized when they shouldn't be. (No offense).
Other then that, I loved it and can't wait for the next part.

Name: Olaf Cupcake Dress Cake
Icing: vanilla, orange, brown, and black
Layer: um.. its made out of cupcakes so its basically only 1 cupcake tall.

P.S. If you don't know what a cupcake cake is, its a shape made out of cupcakes.

I'm really tall for my age and I look older then I am so people always think I'm 12 and my sister is 8. Even though I'm just like an inch taller then her and we're the same age. But, I totally agree with all your reasons.