Hi,
It was quite hard to read it since you put it altogether, here is an example of how to set it out correctly:

Name: (name here)
Age: (optional)
Experience: (experience e.g. former mod)
My desired rank: (what rank you want here)
About me: (about yourself, optional)

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To an application there is WAY more to put in! That is only like a quarter of it!!!
Good luck

Great report!
How does 'The Bear' have a space in his username?*
That is odd
(* if you don't know the answer don't bother)
I hope we win, if he attacks again