Toby, I am uncertain of whether you should be unbanned or not, but I am leaning to no for a few reasons.
First, I checked your posts. Some of them that were deleted definitely show that you are not sorry and will still continue to be rude when the opportunity arises.
Second, your rep is considerably negative considering that you've made only 27 posts. It could be just that you just have some unpopular opinions or you just haven't made enough really quality posts.
However, we do like to give people more chances here if someone is truly sorry so I'm not going to say yes or no without other staff member's input.
Until a decision has been made, please stop evading your ban or we will have to ban you again for ban evasion until this is all sorted out.

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Zendaya2408 wrote on 15th September 2020, 02:07 PM:
This was interesting.
My advice to you would be to chose more concise language, this is full of repetition and that causes some readers to become bored.

^ shes right i read "running" then skipped to "We finally make it to your mum's house."

This was interesting.
My advice to you would be to chose more concise language, this is full of repetition and that causes some readers to become bored.

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Tangent wrote on 15th September 2020, 11:08 AM:
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I alone am responsible for the deaths of exactly two thousand four hundred and thirty-four good men and women, all of it for nothing because we failed them.

Should be "I, alone, am responsible for the deaths of exactly two thousand four hundred and thirty-four good men and women; all of it for nothing because we failed them."
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I remember the exact location of her mother's hospital room, third floor, fourth door on the left.
Should be "I remember the exact location of her mother's hospital room: fourth door on the left, third floor."
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She's small for her age, her body thin and skeletal.
Should be "She's small for her age; her body is thin and skeletal."
I appreciate the help and will correct the last one but the first two are correct, theres no need for the commas in ''I, alone,'' and the ''third floor, fourth door on the left'' is correct as it is. I will add the colon though, I forgot about it. Same with the semi in the last.

I alone am responsible for the deaths of exactly two thousand four hundred and thirty-four good men and women, all of it for nothing because we failed them.

I remember the exact location of her mother's hospital room, third floor, fourth door on the left.

She's small for her age, her body thin and skeletal.