Is it Eye of the Needle? I hope I am correct!!

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Plot twist: She was dressed as Alex
Great story!!! HURRY UP AND MAKE PART TWO ALREADY!!!!

PART 2 CAN BE TODAY! *parties*

Congratulations Sketcher. It's amazing to see your rank changed! - your friend Jacks

Here is my simple love story! I made this for fun. Here it goes!
I saw my crush's eyes and was amazed by what I saw. Her eyes are shiny blue, they looked like beautiful blue diamonds. I couldn't help it anymore, I fell in love. I went closer to her and called her to talk in private. She followed me slowly as her beautiful eyes looked at my back, she was smiling really calmly. I said to her : 'Hi there Caroline… I-I r-r..' I ran away from her and hid myself in the bathroom. I was too nervous for that… I went back to where Caroline was and she looked at me and smiled. She came closer and closer to me. And asked me : 'What were you going to say? Don't be afraid to tell me. I'm here for you Alex!' 'It was nothing, it's just me and my crazy personality.' I said after I blushed and smiled. She went away and continued to talk with her friends.
I told all my best friends for them to keep the secret that I fell in love with her. They gave me some tips about what I should do. But I thought they were wrong. I thought of what to do, I had a idea! I ran to the 'Love Cottage' It helped anyone who fell in love. They told me to ask her out on a date. After they said that I blushed a lot and smiled afterwards. The next morning I went in the bus in high school and sat beside Caroline, I held her hand and smiled. After we got to high school she said to me that she really enjoyed staying with me. I blushed so hard I looked like a tomato.
I couldn't resist it anymore. I called her 'cutie' and other nice names. A few weeks later I asked her out on a date. It was monday and I decided the date would be in Thursday.I ran and told my mom that I needed a tux before Wednesday or else I'm dead. She got me the newest and prettiest tux in the shop. The days passed and we've become closer, and closer. Until the date came, I got in the tux and quickly drove to the lovely restaurant. I waited for her for a few minutes and she was there. She wore a amazing shiny blue dress and her make up was a bit blue and red. We asked for the food and drinks and waited happily chatting and having fun.
The waiters served the food and we ate it looking at each other smiling. We finished the food and I felt really strange… She got closer to me and I got closer to her. I couldn't help but kiss her. I kissed her happily from the inside and the outside. Caroline looked at me smiling. 'I love you Alex.'
She said in a amazing voice. 'I love you more Caroline…' I replied as we looked at each other happily.We had a small walk and bought some new things.
The years went by and me and Caroline were getting even more closer. We were adults now. We lived in a monsoon since Our parents passed away and gave us the money they had. We were rich.I told her that I was going to the bank. But I didn't I went to a store where I could buy jewelry. I bought a marvelous diamond ring. They shop keepers kept it in a decorated box and smiled. I took it home and smiled when I got there. 'Caroline!! I brought a surprise honey! It's better than ever!
She got downstairs and I stood on one knee and said : 'Caroline, We've stayed together for so long and I've felt all these happy and sad moments with you. But all this time I wanted to ask you… Will you marry me..? ' She said yes…

I planned the wedding for next week on Friday. I sent all the invitations and smiled as the beautiful sunset appeared in my face. I drove back home since I was tired and needed a rest. Caroline was gone from their mansion. I went to my bedroom. There was a letter that said : 'I have gone shopping for some clothes for us -Caroline' I sighed after I read that message. I lied in my bed watching some TV. I turned the Tv after the news was over and rested after a while. She got home but she looked different….

To be continued

I hope you enjoyed my story! I am Jacks and I'm out!

ME ME ME! *raises Teddo* I want to join! :DD

Hello everyone! Jacks here and today I will apply for the rank Moderator in your loved game Snaildom! Here goes my application :
I want this job because I am sure I have the responsibility to keep users safe, respect users and help them out when needed. Also, because I want to help out Snaildom when it does need help.

Of course I would, I had 2 jobs and both of them I needed to be responsible. And I also believe that I can handle this job because loads of people recommended me for mod.
I would take is seriously and never play around or abuse the powers I have. I'd also never be rude or break the DSGHQ rules.
My experience is I am a former knight and a former banker. People say I'm mature and able to handle this.
I would sure be sad but not freaking out. I would just be ashamed of myself. I wouldn't cry neither bully others. I'd just control myself and try to earn my rank again.
As I said, I'd never do that in my lifetime here in the DSGHQ. This community has been one of the greatest times in my childhood for now.
Omg! Thank you so much for reading my Snaildom Moderator application!

Cya later! - Jacks

: Amazing to my eyes

Hello fellow users! And today I will write my story! Here it goes!


I still held my flashlight and kept going through the dark forest. I suddenly heard a noise 'This sound reminds me of that beast I've seen.' I said in a scared voice. I ran close to the mine nearby me. I got a axe, some sticks, and the diamonds and all the ores found by the miners. Who now passed away… I made a small fire with the sticks and rested for a while. After I woke up I saw a small sheet of paper in front of I me that said : 'I AM HUNTING YOU! MWAHAHAH' When I put the sheet of paper in the floor I had a vision.. Just like this :

I gasped as I saw that strange vision. I put on my warm jacket as I felt that strange tickle in my neck. I got my flashlight and went to the forest. And suddenly I heard a song. A peaceful song, I went closer to the song and a blonde girl with a light blue dress was in there. Singing songs beautifully. I went closer to her and kindly said : 'Hello.' She stopped and smiled and hugged me. She said : 'I am stuck here with you take me somewhere new..' I kindly took her to the fireplace in the mine. We lived together after that since. I now noticed she was a great hunter.In some time we go around the forest looking for food and more people. I finally asked her name. She said : 'My name is Angeli.' After he said her name I kindly grinned. Suddenly we hd another vision that Zeus said to us : 'You will get out of there in 2 days.'


We danced happily as the vision ended. But after a while we saw the beast growling! We only saw its shadow. It looked like a doll murdering some type of animal… It came closer. I took Angeli's hand and we hid in a small place. I now felt the beast's steps. I saw him… He coughed and slowly walked away. They lived in the forest for 10 days. And survived.. Zeus came back and said : 'I put a lot of humans here to test their surviving skills. And you've shown me you can survive.' Zeus teleported us back to our houses. And thats why we are world champions.
The end!

Jacks

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The signatures are free or you need to pay for it?

Lloyd

It's all free

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I will have one tell me where to meet and when too meet!

Blizzard /jr 222

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Ooooh Btw hey! Anyway can I have one?!

~Wintersummer~ Peaceeeee

Hi everyone! Jacks here and today I'm making signatures for ALL of you! Here's a example of a signature!



But before I make the signature I need to see you at oldcp OR you PM me a picture of your penguin! Be quick before this ends! Oh and it's ALL FREE! Cya guys! -Jacks

Here is my simpl3 story about me and Angi's adventures! Here it goes!
Chapter 1
Once two great friends named Jacks and Angi we're playing in the far away fields where everything was amazing. Suddenly Angi tripped over a rock and noticed that in front of her there was some thing swirly witch looked like a portal. Jacks ran quickly to Angi and saw the swirly portal and decided to enter it. Angi shouted : 'Nooooo!!!' Angi decided to go after Jacks and looked around her. Jacks said : 'This place looks incredible!' The other dimension was wonderful, it was always a bright day and animals and everyone was happy! Angi ran outside and played with the cute animals around there. Jacks always brought his adventure backpack that had camping things.




Chapter 2
Angi ran inside the house and helped Jacks built the tent. Jacks made a small warm fire and went to sleep. Angi shone one of Jacks's flashlights and saw a really black shadow.. She thought it was a fake vision and went to sleep. The two friends woke up and saw 2 bunnies in the floor. They looked closer and saw it. They were dead. They decided to cook one for munch and one for dinner. The two friends took the bunnies and started cooking one of them. They ate the rabbit until they ended it. Jacks enjoyed the new world, but Angi explained of what she saw last night….. Jacks gasped as Angi finished. Jacks And Angi quickly got their flashlights and searched for another portal. They found one and decided to go in.


Chapter 3
BAM! Came a explosion of rainbow in their faces. Thy noticed they were in the same field they were before… They looked around and saw something that they've never seen before. The past. Angi said : 'My mom always shows the old field to me.. this looks just like it!' The ran near the houses and saw their parents.. As children! They saw a portal with a paper in the side of it, it said : This shall take you home happily. The hopped in the portal and were home once again. The two friends told everyone about their story in school. No one believed them…

The end!! I hope you enjoyed my story! If you did slap dat like button! Cya next time! -Jacks

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Hi everyone Jacks here and today a lot of people have been wearing the color Arctic white. I find that really sad for Tennis because he is the only one supposed to wear that color because he deserved it! People who are wearing the color white will be in trouble.. Always remember this picture taken by me :

-Jacks I hope you enjoyed this post if you did slap that like button! I'll see you next time!

Uhh? We all know tennis is the only one with the color white?

There's outfits that have white and ALOT of people use it

Hi everyone Jacks here and today a lot of people have been wearing the color Arctic white. I find that really sad for Tennis because he is the only one supposed to wear that color because he deserved it! People who are wearing the color white will be in trouble.. Always remember this picture taken by me :

-Jacks I hope you enjoyed this post if you did slap that like button! I'll see you next time!