I woke up the next morning. My first day as an apprentice! Ravenspeckel padded in to my den "we are going for a tour around the territory" I padded out to meet him and took a vole off the fresh kill pile. We ate for a moment then set off. "This is the border that separates Windclan from Shadowclan" I sniffed the air obviously Shadowclan it was a terrible tangy smell! Then we walked along the border there was lots of things I saw a pond and huge trees! As we walked near the border I smelled Shadow clan the scent was familer! Then I saw a black huge tabby with jet black paws and brown stripes. I reconized him he was the one who killed my sister! Ravenspeckel was just walking but I stayed behind... I needed to speak to this cat!



~TeamMaybe

Ooh, nice one! Your story is really good c:

You are right disrespecting Moderators is a bad thing that no one at any cost should do. Even if other snails are being ignored it doesn't mean anything we are all equal.

Wind brushed passed my pelt and I woke up with a start... A new day. I decided to keep my dream to myself because what if it actually wasn't Starclan I couldn't take that risk because kits don't normally get dreams like that. I sniffed the air there was a faint scent of Leopardkit I wish she was still with me... Then I heard a yowl from Heatherstar "Let all cats old enough to catch their own prey join beneath the HighRock for a clan meeting" I padded out of the nursery interested in what its all about then I realized something, I was 6 moons old now! Im probably getting to be an apprentice! Then I heard Heatherstar again "Cats of Windclan I am proud to announce a new apprentice in our clan" "Stormkit please come up." "You have reached your 6 moons and are ready to become a full apprentice of Windclan!" Murmurs of agreement rose from the crowd then Heatherstar silenced them with a flick of a tail. "Ravenspeckle please come up here" "You are a well warrior and I think your ready for a second apprentice" Ravenspeckle nodded. "Ravenspeckle you will be a mentor to Stormpaw!" The crowd yowled "Stormpaw! Stormpaw! Stormpaw!" I was finally an apprentice of Windclan!

Wow, I want a signature! Surprise me on what kind it is! c:

I padded to the nursery I was the only one there... Amberfur will be kitting soon but it probably wont be for another moon. I brushed my fur against the brambles against my bed at laid down into a deep sleep. There was a big flash and I found myself in the forest. I scented the air and smelt a strange but soothing scent. It seemed like I was the only one there... Then I saw white mist on the ground circling like leaves falling from a tree and stood there was a starry warrior, I finally realized where I was. I was in Starclan. "Am I dead?" I mewled helplessly. The starry warrior replied "No your time hasn't come yet but I am only here to warn you about something" My paws bristled against the ground... What does she want to warn me about I thought to myself... The starry warrior disappeared but she didn't even tell me the warning.. Then I heard a faint whisper and the wind became to blow "Great change is upon us"


~TeamMaybe

"No! Leopardkit you cant be dead you were so young!" I heard Heatherstar padding over to me but she stopped a few feet away. She yowled at me "Stormkit your in Shadowclan territory!" Suddenly everything made sense now, I seemed like the one raiding... But those Shadowclan cats are still evil to me they killed a kit! A KIT! And I was a kit also, so what threat would I be at all? Heatherstar yowled again "Get back here now Stormkit" I did the only thing I could I padded back to her "I didn't know I was on Shadowclan territory" I mewled helplessly hoping I wouldn't get punished or worse apprenticed late! Heatherstar obviously knew what I was thinking because what she mewed to me next was matched to what I was thinking. "You wont have a punishment because you already have had one" She mewed. I looked surprised for a moment. "What punishment?" I mewled desperate for an answer. "Your sister is now dead that is punishment enough even for a warrior its a big punishment and we will sit in vigil for her tonight" I padded back to camp the sun was going down I sat next to her body and whispered softly... "I will avenge my sisters death"

Good job! c: I cant wait to see whats next and I hope you comment to mine! c:

~TeamMaybe

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2 more posts now! !!!!!!!!!!! So excited to become Member soon!

Wait I yay I reached 50 posts!

2 more posts now! !!!!!!!!!!! So excited to become Member soon!

Good work finding this bug, but there is a way to make it go away all you have to do is /rejoin the room. I have seen this before. ~TeamMaybe

Stormkit and his sister Leopardkit ran burst out of the nursery! "bet you cant catch me" mewled Stormkit! "Oh yes I can" Leopardkit spat back! They were both only 4 moons old but were really huge and they tried to act as warriorish as they could, but they always got into trouble. "Leopardkit lets go exploring" "Sorry, Stormkit I don't think that's such a good idea we are not allowed out of camp" "Well im going!" I spat back. I started running making sure no one saw me then I felt my body slamming to the ground and realized Leopardkit (my "older" sister was on top of me. "Get off me!" I spat at her! She let me go but as I started running again with the brush against my pelt I noticed Leopardkit was following me, obviously coming along. I smelled Shadowclan, our leader Heatherstar probably wouldn't like that. I sniffed the air again. Shadowclan was near... Those snake hearts must be raiding our territory! I heard a yowl in the distance "Attack!" I didn't recognize the voice but it was obviously Shadow clan! They were the evilest clan in the woods! I saw a warrior on top of my sister she aimed a blow on the Shadow clan cats nose but it missed. I heard a screech and I didn't see what happened next. I was hiding in the brambles away from any trouble. The ShadowClan cats have gone. I crept out of the brambles quietly and I saw my sister Leopardkit lying still on the floor... She was dead!



(Chapter 1 coming soon btw that was just the Prolouge or however you spell it)

Yes, I am aiming for member. So close yet so far away... But even if im not a Master you can always trust me.

DUDE IM ON LONG SHADOWS ALSO!

THEY DID? BRO I WAS ABOUT TO READ THAT!