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Posted in TDPI season 2 episode 1 • 25th August 2014, 12:03 PM

A greenhouse is made out of.. hmmm.... wood, glass maybe uhhh
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Posted in The Boy and the balloon • 25th August 2014, 11:53 AM

Everyone,

I'm stopping because they are not being viewed and they suck! People don't read them..

Sorry everyone!
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Posted in Maggie - Why This Happened • 25th August 2014, 10:58 AM

Freezy don't be mean she is not a BRAT so leave her alone!
No wonder you got dislikes!
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Posted in My moderator app~ Becky • 25th August 2014, 06:21 AM

It is a good post yeah but I'm just saying jeez
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Posted in My moderator app~ Becky • 25th August 2014, 06:19 AM

It needs to be longer
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Posted in My moderator app~ Becky • 25th August 2014, 06:19 AM

Rookie's can't do mod apps because they can not be trusted btw (it's me ScoobyDoo2 call me Zach on here)
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Posted in The Boy and the Balloon Part 4 • 24th August 2014, 06:20 PM

At morning Joey and Alex (the balloon) wake up but little did they know something frightning was going to happen! They heard a rumble a TROLL was shaking the tent it was massive! Joey jumped out of the tent, "Joey WHAT ARE YOU DOING!" Shouted Alex "Setting a bomb to blow up the troll!" Replied Joey then the troll blew up!

"Thanks Joey!" Said Alex happily "No problem!" replied Joey happily Meanwhile...."Where's Joey gone?" said Claire to herself Claire searched high and low and went home "Mum, Dad!" said Claire "Yes Dear?" Asked her Mum "Joey's gone missing!" Mum gasps!


Then bulit itself again "I am ALIVE!" Said the Troll laughing "MWHAHAHAHA!" laughed the troll!
Joey got a spear "Come on let's battle!" said Joey then the troll got a spear "O.K. then!" replied the troll The battle begins! Joey aims for his stomach but the troll dodges the troll aims for joey and hits him to the ground!

"JOEY!!!!!" Cried Alex "Your friend is dead Balloon now for you!" Then Joey stabs the troll in the back! "HELP ME NOOOOO!" Said the troll and then he died!


"Is it over yet?" Asked Joey "No not yet!" At Joey's home.. "I'm worried about Joey!" said Joey's Mum that is so worried!

"He might not come back he just ran off I nearly popped his balloon!" Said Claire
"Wait that's it he ran off because of the balloon we must search for him!"

"O.K.!" Said Mum "O.K.!" Said Dad, "O.K!." said Claire

End of Part 4
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Posted in The Boy and the Balloon Part 3 • 24th August 2014, 04:28 PM

Joey and the balloon couldn't get out of the door because of the WOLF was in the way "Oh no were trapped!" The wolf laughed! "MWHHAHAHAHAHA You'll never get out!" but Joey thought of something quickly! Joey got a rope and a net he made the trap "What are you doing?" asked the wolf.

Joey pulled the rope and the net went on the wolf "HELP ME I'M TRAPPED!" cried the wolf! But Joey and the balloon ran "Do you have a name??" asked Joey to the balloon "Yes my name is Alex!" Joey and Alex ran and ran out of the forest! "Alex is there anymore monsters or stuff?" asked Joey "Yes it is TROLLS!" Replied Alex "I don't like trolls!" said Joey scared.

Joey and Alex are out of the forest and it's late at night! "Let's camp here." said Joey "Okay." replied Alex

End of Part 3
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Posted in The Boy and The Balloon Part 2 • 24th August 2014, 03:58 PM

Joey was trapped but there was no escape so he went down deeper in the cave until, BOOM it was a hog setting fireworks off because they killed all HOG HUNTERS!

Joey touched the balloon and the balloon shined so bright it nearly blinded you, then the balloon spoke "Hello Joey I know your name because when someone picks me up I know straight away!" said the balloon Joey gasps he heard footsteps! Joey went to hide with the balloon!

A wolf came "MM hello little boy where are you I need dinner!" The balloon used its laser eyes to blind the wolf! "GAH!!!" said the wolf "What's that laser!?" Joey and the balloon ran into a room!

The hog leader heard a noise "What's that noise its a hog hunter I'm sure of it!" said the hog leader, The balloon went all red because fire was the balloon's weakness! "Help me get me out of here!" Joey ran out of the door and the wolf chased them!

End of Part 2 (There are 6 parts)
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Posted in The Boy and the Balloon Part 1 • 24th August 2014, 03:37 PM

Thanks I'm not good at storys!
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Posted in Mrlion D: • 24th August 2014, 03:37 PM

Mr Lion has been hacked he would never do that
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Posted in The Boy and the Balloon Part 1 • 24th August 2014, 03:33 PM

There was a boy and he lived with his mum and dad and his sister, he didn't like his sister the boy's name is Joey, Joey's sister is Claire but Joey and Claire don't know their Mum and Dad's name!

Joey and Claire were going to the shops but Joey saw a balloon and caught it it said on the balloon: "Keep me or take me home I live in a cave" but Joey just took it and showed Claire of course she got a pin and nearly bursts it but he runs away!

Joey gets lost in a forest but loads of monsters are around like trolls, hogs and even wolfs!
He heard a noise "What's that?" Said Joey but very scared "Awooooo" howled a wolf Joey ran and ran but then he was in a cave and he was TRAPPED.


End of Part 1
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Posted in Diary of a Wimpy Kid 2 Part 2 • 24th August 2014, 03:12 PM

But I hoped you like this
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Posted in Diary of a Wimpy Kid 2 Part 2 • 24th August 2014, 03:12 PM

I'm sorry I changed my mind
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Posted in Diary of a Wimpy Kid 2 Part 2 • 24th August 2014, 03:04 PM

In a lot of ways, being on the swim team was worse than being in middle school. First of all, we had to be at the pool by 7:30 every morning, and the water was always FREEZING cold.
And, second of all, we were all crammed into two lanes, so I always had somebody on my tail trying to get round me.

The reason we had 2 lanes was because swim practise was at the same time as the water jazz class.

I actually tried to convince Dad to let me do Water Jazz instead of swim team, but he wouldn't go for it.

This was the first summer the coach let us boys wear swimming trunks instead of those skimpy racing trucks instead.

(The rest will be finshied later because I don't feel too well)

I'll edit so enjoy this so far!
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