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12th February 2014, 10:47 PM
Hey everyone! I wrote a new story!
I hope you all like it!
Once a day! There lived a poor man named "Richard" he was a beggar! Once he was asking for money a rich man threw on him a paper and left...The man looked strange..Richard was a poor man, he wasn't positive about anything. Richard looked in the paper, he saw a golden crown and an island, Richard didn't understand, he checked its back, there was "We need you! KING!" Richard Jump happily and kept screaming! He went to a harbor and he found a small wooden boat! he asked for its price, it costed only 7 dollars but it was in a bad condition and Richard didn't have enough money to fix it! It was the only boat he can buy so he bought it! Richard set sail positively! Richard arrived to the position that was in the map. But he didn't find the island, his boat was sinking!
Richard cried and shouted "WHY!!!!!!!!!!?" Then he heard a ship! Richard asked them for help, they got him aboard the ship! Richard sat sadly and few minutes after, he saw and island! Richard said "I..ISLAND? WHAT IS THIS??" A guy with a white coat replied to him "This is the golden crown island." Richard was surprised and he kept raising his paper in the sky while hes saying "I DID IT! I DID IT!!!!!" When they got on the island, he showed the security team of the island his paper, they replied "You was late" and they took him to jail" when they was taking him to jail he saw the man with the white coat watching and kept saying "HELP ME! PLEASE!" The man with the white coat kept quiet and he didn't say anything. Richard sat sadly in his cell. Then he kept thinking about the man with the white coat, he heard a voice, then suddenly the cell's roof got broken and a rope went down, Richard climbed it, he wanted to thank the person who saved him, he didn't find anyone but he found a white plume(feather) He felt awkward then he then he touched it, nothing happened. He checked it, he found a place name written on it "Golden Crown Castle" he went there quietly he found the man with the white coat inside, the man left quietly without telling Richard anything too, then suddenly a security man came and said "Why are you here?" Richard gave him the paper, The Security man replied "KING OF THE GOLDENCROWN ISLAND! WE WAS WAITING FOR YOU!" Richard was surprised, then both of them heard a helicopter..It's the fake security team, they killed the security man then their leader hit Richard and put him to the ground, he put his shoes on his head then Richard saw a white light! glowing white light! and the white plume(feather), he touched it, then he passed out, he woke up..He found himself sitting on a golden chair and wearing a golden crown and sitting around hills of money! He found the white plume(feather) next to him and written on it "Touch me" Richard touched it then everything turned white and he heard a sound "Richard!", "You have been rewarded for not losing the confidence of the god!" then everything turned normal again and Richard became a rich and a fair king!
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Once a day! There lived a poor man named "Richard" he was a beggar! Once he was asking for money a rich man threw on him a paper and left...The man looked strange..Richard was a poor man, he wasn't positive about anything. Richard looked in the paper, he saw a golden crown and an island, Richard didn't understand, he checked its back, there was "We need you! KING!" Richard Jump happily and kept screaming! He went to a harbor and he found a small wooden boat! he asked for its price, it costed only 7 dollars but it was in a bad condition and Richard didn't have enough money to fix it! It was the only boat he can buy so he bought it! Richard set sail positively! Richard arrived to the position that was in the map. But he didn't find the island, his boat was sinking!
Richard cried and shouted "WHY!!!!!!!!!!?" Then he heard a ship! Richard asked them for help, they got him aboard the ship! Richard sat sadly and few minutes after, he saw and island! Richard said "I..ISLAND? WHAT IS THIS??" A guy with a white coat replied to him "This is the golden crown island." Richard was surprised and he kept raising his paper in the sky while hes saying "I DID IT! I DID IT!!!!!" When they got on the island, he showed the security team of the island his paper, they replied "You was late" and they took him to jail" when they was taking him to jail he saw the man with the white coat watching and kept saying "HELP ME! PLEASE!" The man with the white coat kept quiet and he didn't say anything. Richard sat sadly in his cell. Then he kept thinking about the man with the white coat, he heard a voice, then suddenly the cell's roof got broken and a rope went down, Richard climbed it, he wanted to thank the person who saved him, he didn't find anyone but he found a white plume(feather) He felt awkward then he then he touched it, nothing happened. He checked it, he found a place name written on it "Golden Crown Castle" he went there quietly he found the man with the white coat inside, the man left quietly without telling Richard anything too, then suddenly a security man came and said "Why are you here?" Richard gave him the paper, The Security man replied "KING OF THE GOLDENCROWN ISLAND! WE WAS WAITING FOR YOU!" Richard was surprised, then both of them heard a helicopter..It's the fake security team, they killed the security man then their leader hit Richard and put him to the ground, he put his shoes on his head then Richard saw a white light! glowing white light! and the white plume(feather), he touched it, then he passed out, he woke up..He found himself sitting on a golden chair and wearing a golden crown and sitting around hills of money! He found the white plume(feather) next to him and written on it "Touch me" Richard touched it then everything turned white and he heard a sound "Richard!", "You have been rewarded for not losing the confidence of the god!" then everything turned normal again and Richard became a rich and a fair king!
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13th February 2014, 11:17 AM
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Hey everyone! I wrote a new story!
I hope you all like it!
Once a day! There lived a poor man named "Richard" he was a beggar! Once he was asking for money a rich man threw on him a paper and left...The man looked strange..Richard was a poor man, he wasn't positive about anything. Richard looked in the paper, he saw a golden crown and an island, Richard didn't understand, he checked its back, there was "We need you! KING!" Richard Jump happily and kept screaming! He went to a harbor and he found a small wooden boat! he asked for its price, it costed only 7 dollars but it was in a bad condition and Richard didn't have enough money to fix it! It was the only boat he can buy so he bought it! Richard set sail positively! Richard arrived to the position that was in the map. But he didn't find the island, his boat was sinking!
Richard cried and shouted "WHY!!!!!!!!!!?" Then he heard a ship! Richard asked them for help, they got him aboard the ship! Richard sat sadly and few minutes after, he saw and island! Richard said "I..ISLAND? WHAT IS THIS??" A guy with a white coat replied to him "This is the golden crown island." Richard was surprised and he kept raising his paper in the sky while hes saying "I DID IT! I DID IT!!!!!" When they got on the island, he showed the security team of the island his paper, they replied "You was late" and they took him to jail" when they was taking him to jail he saw the man with the white coat watching and kept saying "HELP ME! PLEASE!" The man with the white coat kept quiet and he didn't say anything. Richard sat sadly in his cell. Then he kept thinking about the man with the white coat, he heard a voice, then suddenly the cell's roof got broken and a rope went down, Richard climbed it, he wanted to thank the person who saved him, he didn't find anyone but he found a white plume(feather) He felt awkward then he then he touched it, nothing happened. He checked it, he found a place name written on it "Golden Crown Castle" he went there quietly he found the man with the white coat inside, the man left quietly without telling Richard anything too, then suddenly a security man came and said "Why are you here?" Richard gave him the paper, The Security man replied "KING OF THE GOLDENCROWN ISLAND! WE WAS WAITING FOR YOU!" Richard was surprised, then both of them heard a helicopter..It's the fake security team, they killed the security man then their leader hit Richard and put him to the ground, he put his shoes on his head then Richard saw a white light! glowing white light! and the white plume(feather), he touched it, then he passed out, he woke up..He found himself sitting on a golden chair and wearing a golden crown and sitting around hills of money! He found the white plume(feather) next to him and written on it "Touch me" Richard touched it then everything turned white and he heard a sound "Richard!", "You have been rewarded for not losing the confidence of the god!" then everything turned normal again and Richard became a rich and a fair king!
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I hope you all like it!
Once a day! There lived a poor man named "Richard" he was a beggar! Once he was asking for money a rich man threw on him a paper and left...The man looked strange..Richard was a poor man, he wasn't positive about anything. Richard looked in the paper, he saw a golden crown and an island, Richard didn't understand, he checked its back, there was "We need you! KING!" Richard Jump happily and kept screaming! He went to a harbor and he found a small wooden boat! he asked for its price, it costed only 7 dollars but it was in a bad condition and Richard didn't have enough money to fix it! It was the only boat he can buy so he bought it! Richard set sail positively! Richard arrived to the position that was in the map. But he didn't find the island, his boat was sinking!
Richard cried and shouted "WHY!!!!!!!!!!?" Then he heard a ship! Richard asked them for help, they got him aboard the ship! Richard sat sadly and few minutes after, he saw and island! Richard said "I..ISLAND? WHAT IS THIS??" A guy with a white coat replied to him "This is the golden crown island." Richard was surprised and he kept raising his paper in the sky while hes saying "I DID IT! I DID IT!!!!!" When they got on the island, he showed the security team of the island his paper, they replied "You was late" and they took him to jail" when they was taking him to jail he saw the man with the white coat watching and kept saying "HELP ME! PLEASE!" The man with the white coat kept quiet and he didn't say anything. Richard sat sadly in his cell. Then he kept thinking about the man with the white coat, he heard a voice, then suddenly the cell's roof got broken and a rope went down, Richard climbed it, he wanted to thank the person who saved him, he didn't find anyone but he found a white plume(feather) He felt awkward then he then he touched it, nothing happened. He checked it, he found a place name written on it "Golden Crown Castle" he went there quietly he found the man with the white coat inside, the man left quietly without telling Richard anything too, then suddenly a security man came and said "Why are you here?" Richard gave him the paper, The Security man replied "KING OF THE GOLDENCROWN ISLAND! WE WAS WAITING FOR YOU!" Richard was surprised, then both of them heard a helicopter..It's the fake security team, they killed the security man then their leader hit Richard and put him to the ground, he put his shoes on his head then Richard saw a white light! glowing white light! and the white plume(feather), he touched it, then he passed out, he woke up..He found himself sitting on a golden chair and wearing a golden crown and sitting around hills of money! He found the white plume(feather) next to him and written on it "Touch me" Richard touched it then everything turned white and he heard a sound "Richard!", "You have been rewarded for not losing the confidence of the god!" then everything turned normal again and Richard became a rich and a fair king!
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