13th February 2014
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I can see you.

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13th February 2014, 01:51 PM

*This is a very short scary story. If you don't like scary stories then don't read it. I tried to make it scary, but not too scary. Hope you enjoy my story.*

It was a late February night. I was at my house trying to fall asleep. I had this feeling like...someone watching me. I shrugged it off, and fell asleep anyways. The next night, the feeling kept getting stronger, and stronger. Suddenly, I heard a tap at the door. Tap. Tap. Tap. I got up thinking my dog was scratching the door. I opened the door, and my eyes were wide open. This thing had long arms with 8 inch claws. It had...no face. ''I can see you..." it said in a high pitch voice. My vision got blurry, and I passed out instantly.
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13th February 2014, 01:56 PM

Slenderman was in front of you, can you see it in your signature...

NAH! I'm just kidding, although your story was terrifiying! +1
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13th February 2014, 02:00 PM

Is this just one of several parts of the story?
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13th February 2014, 02:01 PM

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Slenderman was in front of you, can you see it in your signature...



NAH! I'm just kidding, although your story was terrifiying! +1

Haha XD. Also thank you. :)
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Is this just one of several parts of the story?

It's just one really short story. Sorry I just like writing short stories. ^-^
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13th February 2014, 02:06 PM

Wow. I saw "I can see you" Then I looked behind me. There it was. My dad's coat.
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13th February 2014, 02:07 PM

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Wow. I saw "I can see you" Then I looked behind me. There it was. My dad's coat.
Lol!!!!
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13th February 2014, 02:09 PM

You have inspired me to make a short story :3 coming soon.
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13th February 2014, 02:12 PM

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You have inspired me to make a short story :3 coming soon.

Wow...I actually inspired you? I'm glad I can inspire people. :) Also I can't wait to read it. ^-^
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13th February 2014, 02:20 PM

It will problay be out later today or tomorrow.
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13th February 2014, 02:32 PM

There was a child named Ben. Poor Ben, he didn't check under his bed at night.
Then there was Molly. Poor Molly, she opened her closet at midnight. She's gone now.
Then, there is you. You're too busy on your device to see me behind you.
Goodbye.

Lol tried to scare you but I think I failed.
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13th February 2014, 02:40 PM

That was slenderman....
Slender is a german folk tale...and I live in Germany D:
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