15th February 2014
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Kidnapped...

Made by OoBubblesoO in Arts

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15th February 2014, 08:04 PM

~Part one~

I ran out of the house, tears running down my face. I just got in a fight with my parents, and now there was no going back. I'm different from other people. I have these powers. My parents think I'm some sort of freak... I ran to the neighborhood park, and sat down on the bench. Suddenly, I got pulled away by a man. He threw me into his car, and drove off. I sat too shocked to do anything. My head was killing me because I hit it on his car. I got dizzy, and passed out.


I woke up, and looked around the room. It was about equivalent to a jail cell. White boring walls, no furniture, and a giant lock on the door. "Why did I get kidnapped? Am I going to get killed?" I think. As all these questions run through my head a man unlocks the door and comes in. In his hands is a plate of food. He's about 30 with blonde hair, and menacing looking brown eyes. '' Here I don't want you to starve to death." he says smirking. I stare at the food in disgust. " I didn't poison it or anything..." he says. "Why did you kidnap me?" I say. " You're different. You have powers." he says bluntly. '' How do you know?" I exclaim. Only my parents know about my powers. " I have been watching your family for years.'' he says.


~End of part one~


I will be making the next part tomorrow. There will be 3, or 4 parts. So...what do you guys think so far? Remember to leave some feedback for me. Hope you have a fantastic day, and stay positive. ^-^
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15th February 2014, 08:06 PM

O.O did anyone else shiver?!?!? Anyone?!? Great post,cant wait for part 2!!! ;) +1
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15th February 2014, 08:14 PM

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O.O did anyone else shiver?!?!? Anyone?!? Great post,cant wait for part 2!!! ;) +1
I did, in enjoyment
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15th February 2014, 08:23 PM

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O.O did anyone else shiver?!?!? Anyone?!? Great post,cant wait for part 2!!! ;) +1

I did, in enjoyment

Yes enjoyment of my amazing story... XD
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15th February 2014, 08:24 PM

Creepy. But great story! That guy seems to be very smart...
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